[Prophet Tenebrae]

Ok… So, I finally got it. It had no process but it was VERY cool and the savage Jen looks absolutely delicious – torn clothes and all. It's a shame you only see the before and after with the only process being a couple of small panels of her eyes but you can forgive that because of how fantastic the comic is… I mean hell, even Lingster says it doesn't suck… so go forth and buy!

[Prophet Tenebrae]

That's what you get for being a character created to prevent the infringement of copyright… but yeah, I think Dan Slott and PAD have both done a good job of improving her standing and credibility… of course, she's got a pretty respectable hero CV these days. Defenders, Avengers, Fantastic Four… all she needs is some time on the X-men…

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Ok, first off – you put in a break between EVERY PARAGRAPH! HALLELUJAH! Finally, years of bitching at people about it being an incredibly easy way to make your story a 100 times more user friendly for 2 minutes downtime has paid off. One writer at a time…

Ok, to more pertinent matters. You're clearly not a bad writer… so, I'm starting to wonder why you're writing this more like a script than an actual story… granted, you're doing something that's more inclined toward dialogue than action – and there's certainly nothing wrong with that… but there's a lot to be said for the traditional style of prose… It seems a little awkward when you have to insert actions at the start of dialogue in the way you do…

As it stands, I think you probably could stand to put in more description – of actions, emotions etc. in the dialogue sections. The "action" parts too… I mean, one minute she's pretty buff and then BANG she's a giantess? That's a pretty extreme reaction compared to what happened with coitus… and it's totally undescribed… A bit slapdash, really. You probably need to pin down Jess' abilities a bit more solidly because that felt rather incongruous with what's gone before… still fun but a bit… yeah.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

I've yet to see She-Hulk – probably ought to go and see if it's in stock – but I agree with Holiday, Frank Cho's She-Hulk segment in King Sized Hulk is exquisite… even if She-Hulk gets her ass whooped.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Wow, she got SCHOOLED by "Brawn". On a World War Hulk/Red Hulk INSTA-SCHOOLED type of level, almost. Which makes no sense as the guy went "ouch" when hit by a bullet… and granted speed and surface area are going to make it hard to compare a bullet and a fist but come on… if the guy is smarting from a bullet unless She-Hulk was seriously pulling her punches, then this guy should have been smarting.

The second story was a bit strange… seems like someone just wanted to point out that Jen Walters was still kicking around – even if She-Hulk never let her out.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

A comic? That would be quite something. I've definitely not seen She-Hulk and Namora fight but I think they move in different circles.

I know that many will be hankering for the EXTREME muscle but I thought that the exercise in restraint worked rather well. Keep us posted on the comic!

[Prophet Tenebrae]

You didn't need to indulge me, SinDD… apparently the Red Hulk bleeds glowy yellow though… so I guess we've got a rainbow of fictional blood types… And if you've been reading comics, definitely worth checking out King size Hulk, where you'll see our favourite gamma girl bleeding… yup, green. I was right! Hoorah.

Anyway, this is a great picture… for some reason, a green and a blue girl going at it is rather sexy… of course, that could just be down to those extreme "assets"… not that they were TOO extreme. Great work though. Much appreciated.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Green, last time I checked… it lets them dodge various censorship issues. I've always been of the opinion her tongue and insidy parts should be green… I mean, hair and eyes change colour… seems like a pretty ubiquitous shade for her to put on. So… green blood. Also, even if someone hits She-Hulk hard enough to bruise… given her healing factor (jeez, does ANYONE not have one of those?) she's pretty unlikely to bruise unless someone is totally pummelling her.

Look forward to the new character too.

[Prophet Tenebrae]

Will we be seeing more of your SinD own brand original characters?

I'm the first to admit my long love affair with She-Hulk but it's always cool to see people come up with their own characters… and I'm betting you'd have a few great ideas for FMG superheroines…

[Prophet Tenebrae]

It's ok… It was only because I had been on wiki that I even mentioned it SinD… although, laying into the media was fun…

Although, I suppose that if we were in charge we'd be encouraging girls to go work out and get huge tits… Which I suppose is even LESS achievable unless they're going to toss themselves in front of a gamma bomb.

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