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Talk about stuff, eh?

It just might work.

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Fancy a crack at writing it?

Where's the vaguely optimistic emoticon?

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Hmm, retrospective flash backs were something I considered.

The thing with the friend – that was going to be later on. I had imagined it as a pretty long story. Covering maybe a few years. It would probably start at the end of her first year, with her thinking back to her first change.

As to the motivations and so on – that's really all in my head… I tend to write stories in a bit of a strange way. I tend to create stories based on an idea – often a single scene. I'll then fly by the seat of my pants and hope that it works out as a story.

Thus far, it's worked 😉

But anyway, as I've said – at the moment, I really can't write this. I'd love to help someone else do it though. Thanks for the thoughts and suggestions.

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Arguing with bots is funny – if done correctly.

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I'm not a big fan of surprises… in this case, I may make an exception 😉

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Well, I was sure I said jolly good or goodo or something… but I thin perhaps my computer crashed before I posted it. More fool me.

Anyway, jolly good and goodo.

My only qualm would be that in the final picture her arms seem, in comparison to her torso and legs – somewhat disproportionate. Still, rather super and enjoyable. If only such rays existed.

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I wanted Annie to get a boyfriend after she got her powers but to keep it secret – bit of a spiderman complex. Then later on, as she started to spend more time as her alter-ego, she'd probably cheat on him as her other self…

The whole thing though prompts her sexual awakening. Her increased confidence as super Annie allow her to go out and talk to men… and that trickles down to her normal life by allowing her to get a boyfriend. She'll probably be fairly religious before all this happened, so kind of uptight. Naturally, cheating on her boyfriend rather encourages the dichotomy within her. She becomes conflicted because she knows that she shouldn't cheat on her boyfriend but at the same time, derives so much pleasure from it.

Her (female) friend would find out though and eventually get to nagging her about trying the potion and Annie not wanting to share it – both because she's worried that she might experience the addiction and obsession. She's scared and excited at the idea… I'm not really sure how that will play out. Whether Annie will stay alone, get a sidekick, a partner or a nemesis…

This is typically me – overthink an idea I don't have time to do… still, people should feel free to use it.

But yeah, I'd love to help someone write this. Really, I think it's a good idea for anyone that wants to do something more than just a simple "wank" story. Naturally, if the author were intent on sending it to the story club, I'd be receptive 😉

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Excellent work.

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Well, allergies are on the increase these days. Over-sterilised environments mean children don't gain the immunity to various bacteria and suchlike. Anyway, the origin was interesting… I just hope its expanded upon.

And I should say FFF, you're to be commended on the way you do the girls muscles. It's often the case that I'd fine such large muscles… not within my aesthetic range but you always seem to do them in such a… hmm, non-threatening way? Jolly good stuff.

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I like it – obiviously – but too many unfinished projects to really conscienably take this one on.

It's basically a story to give a detailed look at a girl who never really thought about being a superheroine or anything like that… and starts out not knowing what to think about it but finds herself increasingly caught up in what she can become and maybe finding the lines between her "real" life and superhero one starting to blur.

Also, as a one time offer. The person that accepts this will get my creative and editorial input on the project.

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