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reaper0002000
ParticipantLove it. Absolutely LOVE IT!
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ParticipantThanks for the encouragement, Sybic — glad you liked it!
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ParticipantFunny you should say that, Mr. Shhh…
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“It’s your fault,” Es continues, sneering, “YOU were the one who pushed me to start lifting. So I’ve come to break you too…” and reaches to open the locked screen door. Impatient at the obstacle, she seizes the handle roughly, crushing it like waxpaper and without any effort whatsoever rips the screen door right off its hinges, also wrenching the door frame off like it was cardboard and tossing it behind her, snickering at its weakness.
The casual display of her violent strength is terrifying, and he tries to slam the main door shut…but is stopped by a single hand. Es casually flings the main door backwards with a simple thrust of her sculpted arm, making her blown-up triceps flex into an obscene, striated horseshoe. “…to completely crush you. Even more than him.”
That door is torn off its hinges by her effortless power, launching him off the back of the door as one would swat a fly away. The Asian musclegirl enters the house, incredible definition and size showing with each stop of her hellishly muscular trackstar legs, and laughs at how far he’s been thrown back – she wasn’t even trying.
Enjoying his shock at her unreal strength and the slack-jawed stare at the amazing muscular development that’s bursting her T-shirt apart, Es decides to completely blow his mind. “You wanna see my mmmmMUSCLES…?” she taunts, coy and sexy, “Wanna gawk at my totally BUFF BOD?”
Chuckling evilly, she takes a deep breath, causing even more tears as she truly flexes her strapping torso and expands to frightening, freaky proportions, her unleashed muscles disintegrating the T shirt as they erupt, unstoppable. “Oh yeah…” she breathes sexily, “Check me out.” Es peels off the remaining shred that barely hangs on to her mindboggling pumped contours.
Es is not wearing a bra underneath. She doesn’t need to: her little-girl Asian tits are long gone. Whatever small perky breast tissue she possessed was first plastered flat and then literally devoured by the voracious growth demands of her huge bulging slabs of fully developed pectoral muscle – her monster pecs ATE her small breasts alive, leaving only her tiny nipples to poke out girlishly amidst male-shaming pecs!
Es flaunts mindblowing pecs that any male, even professional male bodybuilders, would envy. He stares at female pecs built to such obscene size that Es’ flesh-colored nipples pout down and out, lost amongst the vast mounded slabs of shredded girl beef. Her pecs are built so granite hard that she’s entirely breastless, with permanent separations notched from her slightly stubbled armpits to her muscular cleavage.
Cleavage that extends down into the thick, deep cobblestones of a totally defined six pack. Es’ gorgeous face slowly breaks into a huge predatory smile of pure dominance as he gasps in shock and awe at the brutally built, inhumanly muscular splendor of her bare upper body. Es has no equal. She is genetically a muscle freak — males on steroids aren’t able to achieve the ungodly mass or insane hardness Es effortlessly possesses!
He can’t believe Es’ muscles, pumped up to sizes and shapes he wouldn’t have believed possible despite her warnings how easily she gained muscle, that she was a MONSTER! Increasingly aroused by her total superiority, Es breathes huskily, first flexing one huge sliced pec, and then its colossal mate, making each hardening nipple leap inches downward to point straight down at the floor as, insanely enough, even her rounded pecs start to show pointed peaks. Her outrageous Korean genetics have endowed her with matchless muscular potential, but it is Es herself who has stuffed and stuffed and stuffed herself with muscle and more muscle in workouts of incomparable intensity…!
She is now so ungodly strong, she benchpresses for reps what powerlifters attempt to deadlift, and easily performs single handed chinups with twice her bodyweight crushed between her legs. Endless strength oozes out of every pore of her topless body. He gasps in awe as Es moans sexily, “I’m soooo YOKED…” dangerously as she violently bounces her bare pecs, each heavy chest muscle contracting at her command, erupting into uncountable striations across every square inch of female pectoral ubermuscle.
He’s mesmerized by the thick, surfacing veins that snake unrestrained across her man-shaming chest into her shoulders and down her arms, feeding even more blood and terrifying power into ever growing girl muscles that would crush a gorilla like an ant. Her beyond-buff pecs now fully pumped into a permanently swollen state of inconceivable strength.
Es shrugs pumpkin-sized shoulders and takes a deep breath, and casually crunches her cubes, posing her supreme abs for his benefit. Her gridded belly is deeply defined even relaxed, but it now looks as if 6 jutting bricks have emerged out of her otherwise svelte stomach. She smirks, relishing his slack jaw and wide-eyed amazement. “I told you. You’ve created a MONSTER. A Monster you can’t handle – I’m SO STRONG! And now the Monster is going to CRUSH you with all her MUSCLES!”
Es takes another deep breath, filling her ribcage…and then spreads her gigantic back. Her broad-topped torso flares with even more inhuman muscle as monster lats the size of runways spread like wings beneath her arms. The sight is mindboggling — each of Es’ lats is easily TWICE the width AND thickness of each of his, her back development far surpassing and dwarfing any males in the gym!
The Korean musclegirl languidly rolls her bulging shoulders back, turning her multitude of back muscles into breathtakingly peaked mountain ranges whose massive ridges undulate and explode into eyeboggling detail. She chuckles, enjoying showing off the spectacular hypertrophying results of her inhuman workouts and loving how much it’s frightening him.
After clenching for couple seconds to create muscular back topography so overdeveloped it would shame anatomy charts, Es spreads out her back again…and her colossal flaring body part spreads even wider than before. Another deep breath, and full inches are adding still to each of her monstrous wings. Es now looks like she could cover the sky! She grins threateningly as she flexes herself into an unearthly beast of bare-chested female Asian muscle that completely defies comparison.
A low evil chuckle escapes Es’ throat. No bra could ever hope to contain her: the thickness of her jutting gigantic chest, her mammoth, flaring back the width of the Asian continent! Es is truly a MONSTER.
…to be cont'd…
reaper0002000
ParticipantThanks again for the input, Abyss.
Like I said, I felt that the "Trying on a Swimsuit" thread posted in the "Muscular Female" forum could stand alone. Not necessarily all tied up, but sufficient in itself and appropriate for that forum.
As you can tell, however, the epilogue here is unquestionably about muscular domination, and I didn't want to subject "MuscFem" forum readers to something they didn't bargain for. Hence the split.This impropriety of posting is what I realized midway (unfortunately) in "The Monster's Embrace" and therefore switched it to the "MuscDom" forum. It was definitely a mistake to post to "MuscFem" for that scene.* And I apologize for the confusion caused.
Regardless, I find it highly unlikely that I will forum-split again, so no worries, mate!
*I suppose I'd better explain why I refer to these things as "scenes." It's because they lack, imo, crucial elements of real stories. Like, oh, say, a plot. So for me, it's about verbal imagery. 180-proof word pictures; nothing more, nothing less. Hoped you enjoyed,
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ParticipantExcellent point, Abyss…
The way "The Monster's Emrbace" was constructed was piecemeal in different files, almost paragraph by paragraph, over an extended period. It was interspersed by my working on other characters of different ethnicities, in other situations. I suppose I kept reminding myself of the ethnic characters by their defining nationality and when I intergrated all the parts together, the adjective has obviously became quite repetitive.
I'll keep an eye on that for the ensuing The Monster scenes…
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ParticipantI appreciate the feedback everyone!
Jeremy, thanks for your kind words — it is an honor to be even compared to Mr. Shhh. And also a belated thank you for your resilient efforts at making a yahoo group work over the years.
The following is the last installment of "Trying on a Swimsuit" in this particular forum. The scene actually can end in this post, and unfortunately, there are no plans for a Tania sequel.
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However, there will be an equally brief, very NSFW continuation of "Trying on a Swimsuit" in the "Muscular Domination Forum" of this site, which I promise does NOT have the gore of The Monster scenes. (By way of a promo, there are FIVE more different scenes of The Monster — 3 short scenes, and 2 longer ones.)Reap
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…cont'd….With the ungodly amount of iron Tania now routinely pumped, it was no wonder her old swimsuit was now woefully inadequate to contain her. Hence the trip to this expensive but near deserted department store with her new boy toy, the one she now called to enter the change room.
He’d met her at the gym, and was first attracted, then shocked, and then envious of her astounding muscular development. And her ungodly strength; it was a severe blow to the ego that she could pump weights that made his maximum lifts look like an infant’s.
Nonetheless, her stunning facial beauty more then clinched the deal; green eyes, sensuous lips, smooth skin and a cute pointy chin. And now she wanted to try on a swimsuit? That’s what she said, and what he thought, at least. Like any male, he thanked his lucky stars – little did he did he realize the nature of that luck – and entered the spacious change room, as Tania was in the process of squeezing her magnificent body into the one-piece. He had seen her topless in the gym, smashing all the lifting records like yesterday’s news, but his jaw still dropped to the floor at what he saw…
The sides split as she put the swimsuit on, her enormous lats looking like massive wings as they burst apart the helpless fabric. Her colossal pecs made a mockery of the front, as the swimsuit barely could cover a quarter of just one slab of girlbeef, let alone both freakish pectoral monstrosities. Her breastless chest was so insanely broad, both dark nipples were fully and shamelessly exposed on the outside of the severely stretched straps. Her pecs were so large, so outstanding, they seemed to fill his entire field of view.
Her tiny, sliced waist would have been the only part too small for the suit, if it weren’t for the jutting bricks of abdominal muscle that molded the front of the suit to eight discrete bumps. She looked at him meaningfully, and he started to pale at the sheer heat in her eyes. It was one thing to be horny, but THAT look was pure carnal hunger, and it alarmed him as much as aroused him. “Yeah – be scared,” she uttered in a low, sexy hiss, not helping the ominous sense in the pit of his stomach, or the hardening one lower down.
Without breaking eye contact, Tania simply tensed her left pec. Her chest slab exploded into hulking angular mass of steely separations, snapping the strap like flimsy thread. She chuckled evilly and tensed her other pec. It too erupted into a mass that matched its magnificent mate, popping the other strap just as easily. Now completely barechested, Tania regarded the massive splendor of her tensed pectoral monsters. Her brown nipples engorged and erected, the only thing remotely feminine about her mighty chest, as the destroyed swimsuit slowly peeled off her glorious physique, revealing row after row of thick, jagged abdominal bricks. All the way down to the thick matt of her pubic hair, where it barely stuck on because of her ample and wettening groin.
She gritted her teeth into a menacing, lecherous smile and fully flexed her obscenely muscular chest. The result was downright terrifying. Her huge, shredded pecs became beyond description, as both bared, steely nipples fled beneath the carved behemoths of granite girlbeef to point fully erect down at the floor. She was so overdeveloped that individual striations protruded over every inch of chest, veins crazily spread as well. No male could possibly match her. The destroyed remnants of the new swimsuit finally fluttered to the floor, leaving Tania nude, her body too freakishly muscular to be contained by any swimsuit!
…"Trying on a Swimsuit" scene concluded…
Scene continues as an epilogue in "The Muscular Domination Forum" of this site.
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Foregoing a meaningless bra and then pulling her top off, she often worked out in the small, exclusive hardcore gym proudly barechested. Bands and layers of powerful chest muscle that bunched and rippled with any movement made it obvious how hopelessly inferior males were to her. She could overpower any of them.
Nipples hard and aroused on her massive breastless pecs, Tania first matched the strongest males’ heaviest benchpress and then with a coy grin, easily exceeded them. She taunted them as she doubled the amount of their maximum poundage and treated it like a mere warm-up, her naked pecs exploding with sheer man-shaming power. Tania doubled the weight again, her bared chest now pumping up to shredded, freakish size as she repped with so much iron, it made the bar bend. Veins spreading like snakes across her huge ripped chest, she was a nightmare to the male ego.
In pull-ups and deadlifts, males met even greater humiliation. Her monstrous back flaring to unearthly proportions, she performed effortless pull-ups with more weight crushed between her legs then twice and anyone’s bodyweight in the gym. Her spread lats were the size of runways, but these actually expanded still larger as Tania got mindbogglingly pumped!
For an encore, she uprooted weights that no two of them could even budge, and then did it again. And again. And again. Laughing viciously, she deadlifted rep after rep as shocked onlookers lost count. Her Christmas tree completely striated over, and then her massively wide back took on a thickness that was utterly unnatural as sinewy shapes the girth of the thickest anacondas erupted from her winged back. Her enormous flaring cobra’s hood was also a den of pythons!
But Tania wasn’t done; with a dominating roar, she heaved the loaded bar skyward and with a titanic effort that made all her incredible muscles explode, let it settle on her mountainous traps. Under the crushing weights, she sunk slowly to the floor, seemingly defeated by the impossible poundages. But then Tania smiled. A low nasty chuckle came from her throat as she stood up to the gasps of onlookers, performing a squat with the ungodly amount of iron. Another astounding squat was done. And another. Tania started to rep away as the shocked males shook their heads, uncomprehending the mindboggling strength she possessed.
And it wasn’t just strength — her lower body was visibly a match for the obscenely muscularity of her incredible upper body. Her bulbous calves were easily the size of most males’ thighs, and they were jagged with vein-filled definition. Her deeply sculpted thighs were each far bigger than her tiny waist, and feathered in cross striations. And her ass… as she squatted the massive bar, more and more separations appeared out of her already chiseled buttocks. Tania soon had layered, veiny cubes for buttocks, her glutes so freakishly shredded that they were visibly harder than any male’s chest! There was no question as to her Herculean strength – she had just squatted for reps more weight than any two men could deadlift.
But Tania still wasn’t done. With another roar, she actually pressed the monstrous weight overhead. She looked around the room, letting the sight of her impossibly muscular, topless body doing an impossible feat sink in. More weight than any two males could even move, and she held it overhead with ease, grinning evilly. The strength she had…! Tania let the massive weight drop to her enormous shoulders and just as onlookers thought she would finally be crushed by the unimaginable weight, with a sexy little grunt, she smoothly pressed it above her head again! And she started to rep again, faster and faster — there was no stopping her muscles!
Finally, she let the bar drop behind her, and as it thundered to the floor, the bar shattered from the force of that much weight at impact. Tania just stood there glowering, her freakish muscles bulging to obscene shredded size as she simply dominated the room with her incredibly pumped-up presence, her amazing body brimming over with brute power. Her arms, her legs, her pecs, her lats, her abs. Veins pulsed everywhere. Her muscularity was unimaginable, and so was her strength. Every male was utterly and completely inferior to her, and they cowered before her, unable to meet her challenging stare. She could overpower any of them. Actually, all of them… at the same time!
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He would have screamed from the sheer agony, but his lungs have been utterly destroyed, imploded to tattered membranes by Esther’s overdeveloped pecs’ violent incursion into his chest cavity with a simple flex on her part. Es’ massive, shredded pecs explode with unmitigated power, in an instant shattering whatever remains of the front of his already exposed ribcage. Her Korean female chest muscles expand within his torso until his rear ribs are punched outwards by the influx of breastless, Asian pectoral girlbeef.
Es grins, completely aroused by her utter superiority, as she now spreads her colossal Korean back to truly inhuman proportions, making his own bodybuilder's torso utterly insignificant in comparison. “Is my back too big? NO,” she laughs, deriding the question she had once asked him. Her enormous lets are each hulking monsters, far exceeding even the limits of reason – seen from her front, he’s a mere sliver in comparison to Es’ massive flaring Korean wings! “You’ve been totally surpassed, bitch.”
She again laughs evilly. Es casually curls her arms once again in an effortlessly deadly, crushing embrace, her hands grasping all that remains of his torso – his back wall – while unwittingly grinding remnants of bone to dust between her forearms and obscenely bulging biceps. Her grin grows ever wider, her frighteningly large, strong teeth fully visible as her lips are pulled far beyond her gumline…a lethal sign that Es has begun to get red-line horny from her utter dominance of his destruction. Nothing has ever survived The Monster's embrace.
Her amazingly strong fingers power down, crushing his rear ribs as she thrusts her awesome chest out further, reaching lustfully for her tiny but steel-hard Asian nipples. Her muscle-packed hands and diamond-hard milk nubs destroy whatever bone and flesh is in the way. Displaying their insane hardness, her small, but fully erect girlie nipples burst out of his back to meet her fingers as Es moans loudly, and she allows her inner muscles to finally constrict the still-intact male package that has been sheltered from the butchery that her monstrous physique has inflicted.
She’s saved the best for last — her muscle mound. The only strength on earth that can match and even exceed her own supreme Asian physique’s strength. “You’re meat, bitch, and my LION is hungry. Time to eat! I’m gonna fuck you to a total paste!”
Es snarls and smiles downward, admiring her hairy, incomparably muscled groin. Stretching her arms above her head, she grins at the mangled body hanging from her horrific sexual grip, the carnage her muscular pussy effortlessly suspends. The devastation of his body will be nothing compared to what her pumped-up sexual organ will now do him.
Fueled by her arousal, Es’ fearsome vaginal muscles start to demonstrate their unfathomable power by actually rippling and protruding between her monstrously muscled legs, her bulging, seething cunt looking like a python writhing under her hairy skin. Her visibly muscle-packed Korean sex organ is STRONG beyond anyone’s imagination, capable of crushing anything her will directs it to. Es’ internal vaginal muscles are so excessively developed that incredible bulges and separations erupt visibly on the outside of her mound – even at rest!
But then as Es flexes up her unearthly sex meat, the bulges become insane peaks, freaky striations and even veins that extrude through her skin! Her already oversized clitoris inflates with muscle that no one else posesses The Monster’s monster awakens! Es grasps her mighty Korean clitoris, her powerful fingers ruthlessly exerting a pressure that would crumple steel, but only makes her invincible sexual stud stimulated. Es grins – she is so far beyond the rest of humanity that only she can satisfy herself fully!
The Korean ubergirl begins to pant in relish and hip-tosses, exulting in her endless sexual strength as she feels his penis rupture effortlessly within her, blood seeping out of its disintegrating walls as it succumbs like an imploding grape to her incredible sexual muscularity. Violently stroking herself, Es moans loudly in savage pleasure as first his scrotum and then each testicle just as easily shatters with wet pops to her hellishly-built cunt’s obscene crushing power. Soon nothing but gory pulp remains in her unstoppable Korean meat grinder.
As the ultimate Asian hardbody orgasms, every single already-supreme Korean muscle – inner and outer — flexes, each peaking to inhuman size and shape. Es’ inner muscles, her muscle mound, literally liquefies the gory remains of his sex organs in a mere instant, while her monstrous physique, her nude Korean superbody, utterly defies mortal comparison in an orgasmic flex of all ages.
But the Monster isn’t done….Es grins with savage, unstoppable lust. The ultimate sadistic monster, she wants to utterly emasculate him by now overjacking him, and so Es brings herself to orgasm again. Boiling streams of female cum with blood and gory bits of his mulched genitals explode from the ungodly mountain of sexual muscle between Es’ legs, turning her inhuman groin into a hairy volcano erupting, ejaculating with a force and volume that would shame males of any species!
“Check the JACK!” Es roars jubilantly as she flexes a double biceps pose of pure domination, and with a hip toss that turns her abs into bulging abdominal sculpture, spews another unbelievable sexual load from the Asian sexual powerhouse between her legs to a height far above her head! She’s completely out-ejaculated him, her almighty sex gushing with the power of a geyser! With a series of sexy, horny gasps, Es repeatedly flexes her inhumanly muscular sex tube with such skill that she actually pulls more of his ruined carcass into her crushing sex vice.
Utterly insatiable, she crams parts of even his crumpled pelvis into her still hungry snatch, the walls of bone collapsing and shattering as she eagerly sucks him in with pure sexual strength, right into the maw of her insanely muscled Korean pussy! Es growls with musclelust, and again raising her arms into a double-biceps pose of pure superiority over any male, clenches her sexual gorilla with unending power, crushing bone into gory crumbs within its unstoppable confines. Standing over the horrific remains of a once proud male bodybuilder, she is muscularity and strength incarnate. The Monster.
And nothing, nothing, has ever survived The Monster's Embrace.
…The Monster's Embrace, scene concluded.
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Participant…cont'd….
The sight is incongruous: two naked bodybuilders seemingly joined at the groin, the unbelievably muscular female Korean completely dominant over her terrified whimpering and mangled male counterpart, proudly flaunting her vast physical superiority with a mindboggling double biceps pose. Her pumped-up body is a legion of muscles on top of more muscles, and she is completely emasculating him with that monstrous pose. Her hellishly muscular physique is beyond mortal comprehension – utterly insurmountable!
Languidly pumping and posing her already matchless biceps to ever increasing peaks of raw power, Es obviously relishes her undeniable muscular supremacy – and her arousal pumps her up to even more male-humiliating muscular extremes! She grins; not only is she dominating him externally, his entire manhood is completely within her, at the utter mercy of her tremendously built sexual muscles… the sense of absolute power, of utter muscular and sexual dominance over him is overpowering, and she is tempted to simply crush and crush the fragile organs within her until nothing but a liquefied pulp remains.
Her power-packed Korean pussy twitches in anticipation with the thought, and he whimpers in pain and fear as that simple tensing of her vice-like inner muscles effortlessly squashes him. He gasps in agony as her blast furnace slit becomes tighter, harder, and hotter than he thought possible – it feels like his manhood is being crushed and cooked! Es grins nastily at his horrified agonized expression, wrapping her magnificent arms around him again.
“I’m engulfing you…your entire puny body AND your entire puny sex… in my rock hard body” Es gloats sexily, her mighty arms surrounding his body, her mighty sex organ encasing his own. Her huge, hooded, flaring back all but completely obscures his outmatched torso, dwarfing him with superior Korean musculature that he couldn’t even possibly conceive in sheer size, hardness or power.
As Es wraps one superbly-muscled leg around his eclipsed legs, her vaginal lips greedily take even more of his sexual meat into her ubermuscular Korean sex box, until her sinewy slit all but pinches together at his roots. “Ohhh yeah…” Es moans huskily, “You’re gonna be totally crushed.” She gives him a predatory grin and then kisses him dominantly, her ungodly powerful mouth and long, immensely strong tongue bruising and then pulverizing his mouth with her violent, vicious kissing. She chuckles as she tastes his blood!
Her incredible arms start the final carnage, her insanely peaked Korean biceps, like Korean steel wrecking balls, snapping the bones as easily as toothpicks in his upper arms as they encircle him. Then her inhuman triceps become over-inflated horseshoes as her straightening arms all but scissor his bloody torso. His ribcage and spine are effortlessly fragmented by her unstoppable, crushing Asian arms, reducing the width of his torso to mere inches at her pleasure.
Meanwhile, Es crosses her hellaciously-built Korean legs, and his trapped legs are sadistically mangled by the position of her enormous quads against gigantic hamstrings, huge bulbous calf against bulging anterior shin muscles – Es’ trackstar legs are so muscular they could overpower locomotives!
The nude Asian tenses her perfectly developed legs until breathtaking striations of steel hardness protrude from her ballooning muscle bellies. Every bone in his lower body, from his pelvis to his shins, is viciously fractured in sickeningly loud pops and crunches to her cruel delight. Es smile widens as shards of splintered bone and splurging fountains of blood erupt all over from within the crushed flesh of his legs, his skin breaking apart as her flexed legs’ monstrous musclepower far exceeds his skin’s elasticity.
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ParticipantThanks for all responses!
Mr Shhh — I've been a huge fan of your artwork for years, and now of your writing as well. Can't wait to see your next project.
Reason — let me think about the logistics of such a game; I may do a limited interactive version of another scene, "The Monster Unleashed".
And fasola and everyone else too many to mention — I enjoy all your contributions to these forums. Keep posting!
I was trying to decide whether to post "The Monster's Embrace" here or the Muscular Domination side, since The Monster scenes have quite a bit of both. From what I gather, I should've gone to that topic for this scene.
So for the continuation of "The Monster's Embrace", follow me to the other side. If you dare.
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