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June 25, 2007 at 11:27 pm in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36096
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Participant…Epilogue cont'd…
“Hi” he says timidly, unsure. Because just her little finger is stronger than both his arms – a fact that Es has repeatedly demonstrated – he is completely subject to her every whim. Any opposition, any resistance to her is violently and viciously crushed.
Like the time Es sadistically told him the sky was red, and he had protested that it was blue. Titanic muscles rippling, the Korean musclegirl proceeded to effortlessly dislocate every joint in his left arm as he screamed in agony, futilely trying to stop her. Starting with every finger joint in his hand, Es viciously ripped out his wrist, his elbow, and then as her mercilessly strong fingers tore off his shoulder, he sobbed, “The sky is red.” Es grinned in dominance, and expertly put back his joints, making him scream even more. Then she raped him, fucking and grinding with such brutal physical vigor that she battered him into merciful unconsciousness even as she restrained herself from wantonly fucking him to death.
The very next day, the outrageously muscled Korean asked him what color the sky was, and he immediately replied “Red.” Angrily, she looked at him like he was stupid, and he paled as her huge Asian muscles bulged ominously. Es seized him in a grip that would have bent steel, and then tore out every joint in his other arm as he shrieked “Why?” The sadistic Korean musclefreak straddled him and stared inches away from his face, black eyes burning maliciously into him, her hulking physique overwhelming him with its sheer presence, until he was literally quivering in terror. “Because your reality is whatever I say it is,” she said with an evil smile, “that’s how totally dominant I am over you.” And her horniness taking over, Es again raped him with such ferocity that she almost ripped and crushed him to pieces with the sheer power of her fucking!
To say that he’s whipped would be a complete understatement of his home situation; her dominance of him is so ingrained that she does dictate his entire reality. At work, no one can tell that their chief executive doesn’t lift a finger because he actually cannot at times, his “neurodegenerative disease” forcing him to use a wheelchair when his illness is particularly bad. Little do they realize that beneath the immaculately and carefully crafted full sleeves and gloves (a cleanliness thing, of course), he is covering the often horrific bruises and extensive markings of a man ravaged and controlled by a malignant condition. A condition that could end his life at any second, but somehow does not. A condition that is still sufficiently “contagious” that many have died fighting it, while many others are still attacked and completely overpowered with ludicrous ease. A condition named Esther that these others discover, to their horror, still kills viciously with effortlessly dismembering abandon, leaving nothing but gristle and pulverized gore behind as she literally fucks her victims to shreds .
At his greeting, Es glances up at him and runs her hands back through her wet hair, making unreal bulges and striations dance all over her impossibly muscular, bare-chested Korean body. His jaw drops at the sight, and she smirks at how even when he’s nervous (or downright terrified), he can’t help but stare at her topless body.
Es is beyond human comparison. A grotesquely muscular beauty. Every muscle is unimaginably developed. Her masculine pecs would shame two Mr. Olympias at once. Even unflexed, her biceps are coiled into stunning boulders, the size of each arm larger than her head. Her winglike lats are flared into enormous vaults of stubbly Asian armpit. Her abs are jagged even stretched. And right now, after her workout, run, and pleasuring herself for an hour in the shower, Es is seriously pumped. Pumped up HUGE. Pumped up HARD. Pumped up HORNY!
Her monstrous, chiseled Korean body is mindblowing; he can’t believe his eyes. Just when he thought she couldn’t stuff more muscle into her 5’ 6” frame, she adds what looks like pounds and inches of shredded, hardened, vein-covered beef into every already hulking body part – in one single workout. Es turns to face him directly, and when he sees the hungry look on her face, he starts to tremble with fear. His brain finally registers the unmistakably potent, unearthly scent of her arousal filling the room.
His eyes travel down her bull neck, past traps the size of his thighs, onto colossal Korean female pecs that have the thickness of phonebooks. Angry blue veins cover the surface of hulking separations, as he finally finds what he looks for, almost lost on the monstrous continents of fully developed pectoral muscle: her light-colored, areolas with no fat or breast tissue around them whatsoever, forced to point straight down by the sheer mass of her hulking pecs. He starts to whimper at what he sees – Es’ small nipples are fully erect, engorged and aroused, harder than steel.
His eyes dart down the thick jagged cobblestones of her resting, deeply chiseled six pack and follows the sexy line of hair from her navel that thickens erotically before disappearing beneath the towel, confirming his worst fears. It’s soaked at her bulging crotch, dripping with her aroused wetness. He looks up in absolute horror at Es’ beautiful Asian face, and the evil smile of carnal hunger glinting in her huge teeth, gums bared. The sadistic smile of The Monster! Es is so turned on that she could fuck a jackhammer at full throttle to pieces — and still hunt for more! His knees give way in utter terror, and he starts to fall before the Korean girlgod of muscularity.
Es raises her arms, spreading her enormous lats apart. While most bodybuilders are described as having lats like cobra hoods, Es is at another level altogether: her lats are like the wings unfolding of a gigantic airborne predator. A pterodactyl would be envious of her wings! She seems to fill the entire room with gigantic back and massive chest. Coils her arms and huge biceps erupt like sky-embracing mountains. Her abs tense into hellish bricks of pure steel and the towel falls away from narrow hips, pushed aside by the mighty sexual gorilla between her legs, the uncontrollable beast of her hairy Korean groin! Es doesn’t have just a pussy – she has a fully maned, magnificently muscled LION! And it’s about to EAT… eat him!
“Say it again, “she intones huskily, as he flails wildly, trying to fend her off. He is shocked by the feel of the silky, feminine skin, and protruding veins and hardened sinew of the overly hypertrophied muscle beneath. He futilely searches for a place to grasp on Es’ matchless body. Each and every muscle is so large and hard he can’t even get a decent grip anywhere except right at her wrists and elbow joints. He knows that holding Esther’s wrists would be completely pointless – her strength is so vast that she wouldn’t even notice that he’d try and contain her. And her elbows would be suicide for his fingers, for she with a simple flex, her peaked bicep and forearm muscle bellies would ensnare and pulp his fingers between them.
Es laughs at his puny efforts to struggle against her, and guides his middle between her massive sculpted legs, feeding his fully clothed groin to her hairy, muscular nightmare of a sex. “Say my name. The name of your god.” Her mighty Korean slit actually grasps him and inexorably pulls more and more of him in, compressing him with frightening strength as it continues to swallow more and more of him. When most of his own groin is engulfed by her monstrous organ, Es flexes her cunt with power that causes him to gasp, and increases the ungodly constriction until he starts screaming in agony. “Scream the name of your god, bitch!” she roars, making him shriek “Esther!” over and over until his voice gives.
…End Epilogue…
June 21, 2007 at 10:31 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36095reaper0002000
ParticipantHeh heh heh
[evil laugh]Oops.
Sorry — seems to have rubbed off from Es…
ReapJune 21, 2007 at 10:10 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36093reaper0002000
ParticipantEpilogue
She has just come back from yet another workout from the gym. Outlifting the entire gym once again with almost comical ease, hoisting poundages that make the hardcore lifters’ jaws go slack…monstrous weights that are for her a mere warm-up. And then Es gets serious — she shows why she is The Monster! In an inhuman workout so grueling that those who try to keep up with her lifts are left behind as sputtering wrecks, the Korean musclegirl relentlessly pounds for reps, set after set, weights that others would proudly consider their 1-rep max… but then Es increases it even further. Doubling those weights. Tripling them. She is merciless; an unstoppable muscle machine!
After far surpassing the entire gym in every single lift, she still takes it up to another level — Es adds even more iron to already superhuman poundages. Her long, beautiful Korean face grimacing with hellish intensity, Es lifts utterly inhuman weights repeatedly, forcing more and more ungodly strength into a monstrously muscled Asian body that already was at its maximum muscular capacity. Her will is unstoppable, and so as gravity itself surrenders to her, so does her genetics as Es shatters her own limits, her huge muscles growing yet again to exceed what was already unthinkable and match her will! She literally explodes out of her workout clothing, leaving the other gym patrons to ogle her and stare in awe at her nude Monster body, stricken that anyone could have that much sickening, cranked muscle on her frame!
Even after finishing this insane workout, a shamelessly nude Es runs home from the gym at a sprinter’s pace – for all three miles! When she arrives back in 6 minutes, barely taxed by her run, it’s obvious that her monster cardio abilities are on par with her monster strength; in fact, her time is so quick that she’s still fully pumped and vascular from lifting! Es immediately goes to the kitchen and makes her post-workout meal in the blender, a concoction of two full servings of protein replacement with half a dozen raw eggs thrown in. Wolfing it down, The Monster makes another helping of equal size, and drains the blender again. Her muscle needs are incredible: four servings of whey protein and a dozen eggs in one sitting are nothing to her. Brimming with sheer power, Es smiles as she can actually feel herself growing… getting even bigger, even stronger! And she wets, splattering the kitchen floor with gobs of precum, at the thought of gaining even more strength and more muscle!
Es steps out of the steaming bathroom shamelessly wearing only a towel around her waist, her thick black hair wet and slicked back. She has worked herself over for over an hour, her unending musclelust fueling countless orgasms of such ferocity and duration that no male or tool could have survived the brute physicality of her sexual onslaught. In fact, her masturbation is so extreme that the concrete show has huge chunks of pulverized material littering the floor, and deep cracks spider the surface, like an earthquake has upheaved the foot-thick walls. In one corner, crooked, hopelessly mangled pieces of steel are seen, barely recognizable as the broken remains of a yet another Olympic bar… the latest victim of Es’ incredibly powerful pussy. So Es leaves the severely damaged shower even more pumped than after her workout!
The Korean is utterly incomparable. Her musculature is truly obscene – beyond freakish. Her hot, clean, monstrously muscled Asian body is the vision of ultimate muscularity. Veins protrude everywhere. Es’ skin is stretched so tight over the hulking striations and rippling veins, it looks like her skin will barely contain her ungodly muscles, that her huge sinewy shapes are actually about to explode right out of her skin on every square inch of her incredible body! In fact, there are stretch marks all over her body, where her skin elasticity actually hasn’t been able to keep up with her incredible muscle growth. With her outrageous muscles, the complete absence of any breasts, and abundant pubic hair, Es easily out-mans any male, but her gorgeous Asian face, girlish nipples, small joints and dramatic proportions proclaim her as all Korean woman – an inhumanly strong, emasculating woman! Like her sweet feminine smell that is also brutishly muscular, Es is the pinnacle of androgyny – a mighty female conqueror of both sexes who has surpassed all of humanity. It is to this mindboggling, bare-chested spectacle of ultimate Asian girlbeef that he comes home to…
…epilogue continues…
June 20, 2007 at 8:20 am in reply to: Second Chance (not sure if this is sfw or not, yet… we’ll see how it develops) #54136reaper0002000
ParticipantThis story does not feature ginormous muscles…yet…and it does start sort of slowly. It is also not really intended as a purely masturbatory exercise. I'm actually trying to create a story with some real characters and some real motivations.
That's the EXACT OPPOSITE of what I try to do…!
Nicely done — it reads smoothly, and that's a quality most writers don't have. Especially appreciate the detail and imagery in the fight scene; makes it a snap to visualize.
Great start —
Reap
reaper0002000
ParticipantHi all —
I have the exact same problem: can't modify/edit posts anymore.
Lingster, I know you're busy — but is there something you can do?
Thanks,
ReapJune 17, 2007 at 5:21 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36090reaper0002000
ParticipantTrailer:
The Muscles of Mercy
Her tiny waist barely widens to supremely narrow hips that flow to oaken thighs each the size of her waist. A perpetual, resting eight-pack of abdominals that’s been visible from infancy. Flaring out to winged scapulae and broader shoulders than what’s imaginable for a girl. Comparing the girth of her shoulders to her hips, her athletic proportions are literally breathtaking – she easily exceeds any ratio, even those of male bodybuilders. Genetically, Mercy is already far superior to anyone he's ever met. Her beauty. Her intelligence. Her muscles.
Rated X for Sex and Extreme Gore
Coming Soon.June 17, 2007 at 4:56 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36089reaper0002000
ParticipantMany thanks for all your kind words, but here The Monster sequence of stories are at an end… (wink, wink) 😉
Best wishes
Reap
…cont'd…Indeed bored with her demonstration, Es gives him a sidelong glance. “You wanna know why I think you men are so weak?” she says as she takes several inches more of the bar deep into her mighty love organ, gripping it again with such power that the metal whines in surrender, a sound so loud and painful it makes him shudder. In a smooth motion she thrusts her 7ft dildo beneath the horizontal strut of the assisted pull-up apparatus, and then flexes her muscle-packed mound up. In response to her genital manipulation, the other end of the bar is lifted upwards, wrenching the pull-up apparatus right off the ground. Es suspends the creaking 500lb machine with her ungodly fuck power, the bar bending from the strain. “Now that’s what I call an erection,” she chuckles, referring to the prodigious feat of sexual capability.
With a casual cock of her head, and just by flexing her sexual organ, she starts lifting the entire apparatus up and down, up and down… curling 500lbs for easy reps on her extended dildo with truly inconceivable genital strength. The musclegirl grunts softly as she performs this hellish feat, the collapsing metal of the bar within her pumped-up snatch now stimulating her special spot. As she gets more and more impassioned, the very air around her seems to sizzle as grainy muscle fibers emerge over already obscenely protuberant muscle bellies all over her spectacular, inhuman physique. Veins crawl like highways on every inch of Es’ hot, steel-hard girlbeef, feeding her ballooning flesh with even greater pump-inducing blood.
His jaw goes slack at the sight: nothing could be more fearsome and more erotic than this young Asian musclebeast! The maned, sexual lion between the Monster’s legs is writhing with power, leveraging the metal within its voracious snatch faster and harder, becoming even stronger from its exertions. Finally, with a frenzied buck of her powerpussy, Es flicks (flicks!) the Olympic bar almost straight up with such mindblowing force that the assisted pull-up apparatus is catapulted right off the end of the bar. As if in slow motion, he watches the heavy machine sailing up and smashing into the ceiling before plastering itself into the wreckage of the gym behind her. Like the rest of the heavy duty gym equipment that the Monster has already devastated today, this piece is added to the list, mangled beyond recognition as a result of her might.
Still unsatiated, Es seizes the bar with both hands and wrenches it around, gasping at the stimulation as she pleasures herself. But he can barely comprehend what she is doing to the bar. Aroused, Es is now so strong, so impossibly strong, that the solid metal screams and bends as easily a twist tie between her unstoppable hands and the unyielding grip of her hairy, crushing slit… but what happens next is indeed, impossible.
He stares in stupor as Es’ incredibly muscular cunt then fully flexes and clenches into a peaked, vascular Korean thing of unearthly striations and veins – a grotesquely muscular sexual lion! Nothing so physically powerful has EVER been this developed in the human body! With a single vicious clench, her Asian powerpussy instantly pulverizes the metal into its most physically compressible state… and then beyond, for her hypermuscled sexbeast becomes so fucking strong and exerts so much hellish pressure that metal turns to liquid. With a sexy roar, Es orgasms, and a flood of female ejaculate and boiling, shattered metal spews out of her ruthless, unforgiving slit as paste.
The Asian musclegod plucks the twisted shortened bar from the ruining clutches of her almighty sex, and dominantly holds it overhead with one hand, a foot of steel missing at its end. With her other arm, she demonstratively flexes her biceps, and a peak the size and shape of a veined artillery shell forms. Es is so fucking strong! Her heated black eyes meet his and he screams in fear, cowering beneath her blazing glaze. If Es could fuck steel to liquid, what could she do to mere flesh?!? She looks at him with a hunger and malice in her cruel, beautiful face that makes his face turn ashen. “That was just a taste of my cunt’s appetite! I’m gonna literally eat you alive…” she hisses, “while I FUCK you to death…!”
…End…
April 8, 2007 at 5:18 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36085reaper0002000
Participant…cont'd….
“Watch how hungry my pussy is,” the 18 year-old had purred without a hint of modesty, as straddling him on her knees, she expertly engulfed half of his member in her hot, hungry snatch. The teenager grinned at him dominantly as he gasped in both pain and pleasure. The young Es’s love organ was already so strong that it felt that her muscular sex lips were about to sever his shaft in two, without even her trying. Instead, the Korean sensually clenched her vagina in a wavelike rhythm, demonstrating the uncanny muscle control she possessed over any part of her amazing adolescent body, drawing him in further with just the irresistible power of her sexual sheath.
He moaned in that hazy mixture of absolute heavenly pleasure as the Asian musclegirl skillfully manipulated him, but also of terrifying nearly unbearable pain, for her pussy was not gentle at all in its constrictions. In fact, the 18 year-old was already badly bruising his member with a mere fraction of the fathomless power that her young, mighty cunt could bring to bear, and Es was only getting started.
Keeping her crushing genital grip on him secure, the teenaged Korean assumed a position of hovering over his body, with only her fingertips and toes on the ground. Then she did a pushup with shocking power, plyometrically thrusting herself up into a wide straddle stand over him in a single brutal, gravity-defying motion. He screamed from the ripping pain of being yanked off the ground by only his penis, the nude, spectacularly muscular teenager now suspending his middle off the floor with only her sexual grip.
Es roared in dominance, and then in a breathtaking demonstration of her bulging young groin’s strength, pulled all of his penis into herself with just her pussy muscles. The 18 year-old was unrelenting as she consumed him sexually, lifting the weight of his body higher and higher all the while forcing him deeper and deeper into her sexual strongbox. He cried and whimpered as she ate him till his root … and still she pulled! It was as if she wanted to consume his entire body with her insatiable sex!
The teenaged Esther smiled nastily, getting off on her lover’s terror and agony. Looking deep into his frantic eyes, she made sure he knew that she was actually holding back. Without even trying, her groin could mulch his into gristle while extricating her pleasure. Like the pumped teenager’s unappeasable organs already had done to so many men while overseas. She laughed evilly.
“Watch how hungry my pussy is.” Jolted back into the present, he watches Es feed the end of the Olympic bar into her freakish cunt, her voracious sex actually flexing apart like a second mouth to swallow one end of the bar – her groin eats inches of metal with ease! “Mmmm…s-s-scrumptious,” Es moans sexily, her face beatific as her hellishly built sex visibly pulses with unimaginable strength, horrific metal grinding sounds emanating from her hairy carnivorous crotch as the tough steel visibly and audibly crumples between the freakishly striated lips of her slit.
It is no wonder that the Monster doesn’t even give a second glance to store-bought dildos anymore. The Asian’s genitals can crush the sturdiest sex toy like it was made of wax paper. Even thick steel is like tinfoil to her hulking snatch’s inconceivable power. She wrenches the bar around with one arm, making the metal shriek as it bends, helpless against the unopposable strength of Esther’s arm, and the equally unyielding grip of Esther’s vagina. Stimulated, the Monster’s carnal monster responds by crushing down even tighter, its heavy jaws actually biting into the thick steel with the sexual teeth formed by hardened striations. Audible creaks accompany this breathtaking display of genital strength.
“Check out the power of my LION!” Es utters, eyes blazing with lust. With another smirk, she takes her hand away from the Olympic weight bar…and it remains suspended, parallel to the ground. Unbelievably, the effortless grip and sheer tone of her love channel is so strong that the 45lb, 7ft-long steel apparatus is held in the air, despite the wrenching leverage against it. “You’re not even strong enough to do this with your arms,” the young Korean musclefreak sneers with a huge gum-baring grin, and starts to wave the Olympic bar around like a flagpole by just manipulating her overdeveloped vaginal muscles. Es puts her bulging arms behind her head, her huge lats flaring like a human pterodactyl again, and yawns to emphasize how easy this is for her. The strength she posesses between her legs is unimaginable — her fully maned lion is the ultimate sexual beast!
He stares at in utter amazement as the heavy bar swoops around in swift aerial patterns, the groin of the Monster clearly maneuvering it without any difficulty whatsoever. Most women are barely able to make a q-tip rise a few inches by clenching their vaginal muscles, and only a few have the groin strength necessary to manipulate a solid dildo with their pussy… but Esther is getting bored with slinging around an Olympic weight bar like it’s child’s play! He whimpers as he begins to barely register the incomprehensible sexual powers of this incredibly muscular Korean girl.
…to be cont'd…
reaper0002000
ParticipantIn my humble opinion, the idea of the blog is a good one when one's creative efforts are prodigious — the kind of volume that, say, Pete (the Pete of Pete's Muscle Drawings) puts out on his yahoo group.
When the volume is less, like what most creative writers (as opposed to reporters or editors) and artists produce, it makes more sense to post to a forum where a collection of sporadic posts from intermittent persons cumulate into a steady flow.
Whatever works for you best, though…
Nicely done yet again on the latest chapter, maestro!
Regards,
Reapreaper0002000
ParticipantWow! Maybe I should've suggested "Ramboella" instead.
Seriously terrific stuff, maestroReap
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