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ParticipantGreat render on a great concept, T-san!
September 30, 2006 at 6:08 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36062reaper0002000
ParticipantThanks, all… and it gets better…
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With a blindingly fast movement, Es seizes him by the throat and like a reprise of what she did to him about a year earlier, lifts him with a single arm and closes her fingers slightly. Immediately, the rings of cartilage around his trachea start to crumple as she toys with ending his life by simply ripping out his windpipe. His breath comes in rasps as he tries to pull away one crushing finger with both hands… and fails, his arm strength completely insignificant against just a single digit.
Chuckling, she tosses him across the gym as if he were a rag doll. He slams him into the wall behind the cable crossover machine, cracking the mirror and knocking the wind out of him. He is on all fours, wheezing for breath, as the nude musclegirl saunters up to him and deliberately sideswipes him with a flaring calve. The huge, hardened bulb of jutting leg muscle plows into his shoulder like a train, knocking him over on his back.
Es stands over him, straddles his waist. He fights for his breath, eyes bugging at both the effort and also the sight of so much naked, utterly shredded Asian female muscle looming above him. Above the massive calves, her thighs are each the size of his waist, and each muscle group is completely separated, actually prominently peaked. Veins are visible everywhere, collecting into large hoses which run into her thick, sprawling black Asian bush. The beefy, sinewy sex lips are clearly visible, the freakish bulk of her vaginal muscles bulging above… her bristling mound is ungodly, a mountain of man-crushing, man-pulping, mankilling muscle. Her oversized, muscular clitoris protrudes out of the wiry pubes like a short but thick, meaty stud.
The Korean girlbeast bends over in a symphony of undulating, freakish muscles and with one hand each, roughly collects his crotch and collar in unforgiving grips of steel. Between her legs, she effortlessly lifts him off the floor and wedges his midsection just above the huge teardrops of her oversized inside quads, where it can’t go any higher without severe compression from her hulking adductors.
He struggles to get loose in a panic, terrified that The Monster will simply crush his entire torso like a bug between her powerful legs, like she has done to countless men to end their lives in a flood of their own gore. “You know better,” Es chides him warningly, “If I wanted to do that, you’d be a paste already.” But he keeps flailing, and the ubermuscular Korean beauty growls in annoyance. She tenses her hellish legs, and immediately her entrapping inner thighs overwhelm his midsection, the bulging, vein-covered shapes constricting him with the threat of terminal compression. Es chuckles, toying with the idea of killing him with a simple, elegant crush but he stares at her beautiful face in absolutely agony, ceasing his struggles in total surrender. She relaxes her leg pythons slightly and his body slips lower, away from her monstrous sexual mountain, allowing him some measure of life. For now.
Es looks up and reaches for the pullup bar, grasping its ends with both hands. Her monstrous upper body, rippling and bulging, reforms itself into a massive, flaring inverted triangle of freakish width and volume. Both her feet leave the ground, her legs crossing at the ankles to keep his entire body aloft. Hanging there, effortlessly suspending both their weights, the nude Korean musclegirl resembles a hairless gorilla, and not even a female ape — she’s so muscularly overdeveloped that she’d humble alpha-male gorillas. Es grins, exulting in how mindblowing she is in this position – she looks utterly inhuman. An unimaginable beast. Her tremendous pectorals are so thick and high, they actually obscure her entire bull neck, pushing up against her pointed chin. Even spread out, Es’ breastless pecs have so much shredded mass that her small, flesh colored nipples are barely pointing forward. The Asian’s gigantic lats are so ridiculously wide that each enormous, stubbly underarm dwarfs the size of her face, and so overdeveloped that their insertions’ flared angles exceed an inhuman 90 degrees!
Because of the overhang of her immense pecs, he can barely see her face between her tiny, flesh-colored sex nubs as she addresses him. “Remember pullups? How EASY full bodyweight was to me?” Because he is still unable to speak, Es reads the affirmative answer in his eyes. “And I didn’t have even a QUARTER of the back muscle I have now,” she boasts, glancing down towards each mammoth shoulder girdle appreciatively and pulsing her massive lats. Her immense wings actually surge in size, dramatically deepening the huge muscle vaults formed by the tie-in of her pecs and lats. Whereas a well-developed athlete has finger-sized pits, Es’ brutish muscles are so large, she could fit an entire fist up to the wrist into each of her enormous muscle-vaults. And that's before she's fully pumped…
Her flare is inconceivable, the behemoth lats and scapulae broadening the Asian musclegirl to the point where she looks like a winged, hooded monstrosity – a human pterodactyl made to dwarf men in her sun-eclipsing shadow. “Your added weight is utterly insignificant to me, bitch. Even as a warmup.” To demonstrate, Es reps several pullups with their combined bodyweight, and does it with such ease that it looks like she’s floating to the bar, like it takes as much effort for her as simply breathing. He stares in awe at the reflection of her colossal back as she does this.
Above the nude Korean’s hideously shredded glutes, her hellishly flared back morphs into two giant columns of striated paraspinal muscles, her Christmas tree more akin to a gnarled redwood, as her wings turn into a block of writhing pythons, and Es is so ripped that even small veins are popping up all over her unearthly back muscles. Her enormous biceps are clenched into twin-headed boulders, the sky-high jagged peaks erupting into unstoppable towers that only her equally hard forearm muscles can resist.
But then The Monster does the utterly unthinkable. Es releases her right hand, and performs explosive, ONE-armed pullups with BOTH their bodyweights! She’s pulling up over 400lbs just her left hand…! After 20 eyeboggling reps of sheer inconceivable power, she laughs and repeats the amazing feat with her right arm, and then resumes hanging with both hands. Es face splits into her huge, nasty grin; her back is now so hugely pumped that she’s added full inches to the already otherworldly, unprecedented lat spread, and lat striations and veins are popping up all over the gargantuan female beef.
She looks down at the helpless male clasped and helplessly suspended between her massively-thewed legs and smirks, knowing that the full impact of her unprecedented feat of strength – merely routine rep-work for her — has sunken into his stunned consciousness by the utterly glazed look on his ashen face. Little does he realize the full magnitude of her strength: Es is more than capable of doing pullups with the deadlift world record. This impossible musclegirl is now so beyond him, it's more than he can do to simply breathe in her naked presence…
…to be cont'd….
September 11, 2006 at 11:22 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36059reaper0002000
ParticipantGlad one of us liked it ;D – it's actually a little overblown for my own taste (and I wrote the damn thing!) but it actually felt good using a nuclear weapon to kill a flea.
Be back soon,
ReapSeptember 10, 2006 at 11:38 pm in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36057reaper0002000
Participant…cont'd…
Her endless strength making her ferociously horny, Es tears off her rupturing bike shorts to brazenly expose an incredibly over-muscled Korean groin that her steaming underwear doesn’t even begin to cover. The wiry shards of Es’ sprawling, razor-sharp Asian pubic bush have sliced the material to ribbons, her huge slit has entirely devoured the crotch piece within its sinewy lips, and her mighty clitoris is straining the cloth beyond its limits.
With an evil smile, Es simply clenches her freakish sex, and bulging with unimaginable power, her muscular vulva literally Hulks out, simply exploding apart her overmatched underwear to fully reveal her magnificent crotch, a seething hairy Asian nightmare of a sex organ that contains more muscle and brute strength than most men’s entire bodies.
“My mound isn’t just a pussy – it’s a freaking, pumped-up LION…!” Es exclaims proudly, and breathing deeply with self-lust, the now nude Korean musclefreak openly admires her incomparably muscular, power-packed groin. “Look at its MANE!” Beneath the sprawling pubic hair that most women wouldn't possess, Es’ sizzling, hulking cunt is so incomprehensibly muscular it would terrify a male of any species! Her hairy crotch is a sexual mountain of muscular separations and veins – visibly writhing with unimaginable power, it looks like an uncontrollable brute trying to get out of her hairy skin, and with her oversized clit protruding out of her beefy, sinewy sex lips, her monster Korean sex organ actually looks like it’s succeeded in bursting free!
“Yeah, what’s THAT?” Es asks with mocking wide eyes at her enormous sex organ. “Have you ever seen PUSSY that STRONG? Mine’s so fucking BUILT! And it’s gonna get even BIGGGER…and STRONGER!” Es boasts, and then flexes her amazing groin harder and harder.. Overcome with lust for herself, she moans and hip tosses and grinds with mindboggling ferocity, an uncontrollable Korean beast laden with muscle built atop more muscle, a nude, horny Asian female juggernaut forcing her monstrous organs to pump up and grow until her freakish cunt looks truly other-worldly. Es lovingly runs her finger along the insane muscular separations hewn into inhuman sexual steel, pausing to emphasize the puffy protruding veins that feed her colossal predatory feline, and chuckles evilly.
“Yeah! It’s even got MUSCLES – more muscle than your entire body! My SEX is totally JACKED!” To drive the point home, Es fully flexes and the entire organ striates with sheer power, becoming a monstrous granite mound of muscular details and veins! Es pushes her pumped up crotch next to his and starts to laugh. A year ago, this same comparison had utterly humiliated him. Now, it's not even fair to call it a comparison. The Asian looks like she belong to another species — one far superior to humanity in every respect. In fact, just her veiny, rock-hard sex really does look more muscular by itself than his entire body! Es clenches her lion-sized pussy again, and her steely, shredded meat explodes into even greater size and unearthly striations, making him flinch in fear as she roars, relishing her complete dominance.
Es flattens him to the ground with a contemptuous backhand, the ease of her motion belying its immense power. She chuckles; it was like swatting a fly. The Monster stands over him, absolutely mindboggling in her magnificent nudity. Aroused by her absolute superiority, Es takes deep breath after deep breath and fondles her own tiny, erect nipples, playing with her granite-hard sex pebbles with her fingertips. Her monstrous naked superbody actually becoming larger and harder as her insatiable self-lust brutally pumps her up to inconceivable extremes.
Veins protruding head to toe, she is a Korean freakshow muscled beyond mortal comparison, her muscular and sexual development vastly exceeding any human limitations, and the realization of that fact in itself pumps her up even more. Admiring her ungodly muscles, and surging with unthinkable strength, she gives her evil laugh, realizing that it’s an endless vicious cycle for her: her pump feeds her lust, but her lust pumps her up even more. Es has no limits to how big, how strong and how sexy she can get.
Her entire nude physique, from every hulking muscle to equally hulking genitalia is now otherworldly; Es is an unstoppable Korean girl juggernaut, replete with muscle atop muscle and complete with man-crushing sexual organs! Es flexes exultingly, “I’m WAY more girl you ever could handle…” She looms over him, her nude body overwhelming him with its sheer monstrous muscularity, bristling with huge sexual organs, sheer power begging to be released! Reveling in her unmitigated power, Es looks at him and laughs again. “You’re just pussy fodder.” She’s like a god, while he’s a mere insect to her. Her grin becomes sadistic – when she fucks him, a god will be fucking an insect. Es will literally fuck him apart, fuck him to pieces!
But first things first. The Monster has found that sex is always better for her with a pump, since nothing can withstand the duration of her carnivorous lust. Eying the weights and the machines lining the gym, Esther salivates, anticipates the heavenly feeling of her nude, unstoppable body filling with blood, literally growing before his very eyes as she pumps up…
…to be cont'd…
August 29, 2006 at 4:11 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36055reaper0002000
ParticipantGlad you liked it, Tigersan.
And there's more….Um, here's a sample of "more":
At any rate, her response was the most brutal kick ever documented. The therapist still shivered at the vivid description. She drew her leg back, the striated flexing of her legs’ spectacular muscles still embedded in the witnesses’ minds, and sent a kick of unrestrained power at the kneeling man’s body. A shower of blood erupted from out of his back as he was lifted several feet of the ground to land a couple yards away, his upper body almost decimated by her single ferocious blow; a couple of aghast witnesses even said they saw her foot protrude out of his shoulders for one instant. The coroner’s report supported this gory detail, indicating that the victim’s torso had suffered “massive blunt trauma that completely penetrated the thorax and exited the shoulder, dissecting the subject vertically from the abdomen up.” She had viciously kicked him so hard that she’d split him in two. His gruesome remains simply collapsed to the ground, convulsing, blood slowly seeping over where it had already been splattered with her lethal, smashing kick.
By the way, this sample is NOT The Monster. Don't you love previews…?
;DBe back "sometime soon" with more Es,
ReapAugust 28, 2006 at 3:12 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36053reaper0002000
Participant…cont'd…
With a sudden dominating whoop of “I’M A MONSTER!” that almost makes him piss himself in terror of her, Es abruptly flexes her entire upper body into an unearthly 24” double biceps pose of utter dominance, flaring apart her enormous lats while jutting her massive chest out. “Your utter MASTER!” she proclaims dominantly, fully usurping him — the student completely surpassing the teacher.
He gasps in fear and awe as Esther completely explodes out of her muscle shirt like a Korean female Incredible Hulk, her top disintegrating into shards of navy cloth that helplessly succumb to the unearthly near 60” onslaught of monstrous Asian female muscle chest and back erupting. “What’s my name, bitch?” Es snarls, completely topless and proudly flexing muscles that far exceeds his maximum potential.
As she regards him with slit eyes, he manages a whispered “Esther…” in absolute terror; it’s now obvious that Es has easily surpassed — and would utterly humiliate – Olympia-caliber male bodybuilders; nothing even approaches this Korean musclegirl’s combination of size, shape, and hardness… and Es has yet to pump herself up! She’s not even close to her monstrous pumped-up max, and she’s already easily dwarfing males and oozing brute strength out of every pore.
Shamelessly bare-chested, Es proudly surveys her matchlessly muscled, naked Asian upper body and the tattered remnants of her muscle shirt lying all over the floor, and then fixes her eyes on him with predatory malice. As he turns sheet white and starts to babble for mercy, Es gloats “After I humiliate you in the gym, I’m going to do THAT to your entire body with these MUSCLES,.. simply FLEX you to pieces! Rip you apart! Crush you like a grape! EAT YOU ALIVE!!”
Topless, she chuckles evilly and perks her unholy massive pectoral slabs, striations bursting all over her breastless granite chest boulders, her girlish Asian nipples twitching menacingly. After a couple more pec clenches that could move tons of iron like mere feathers, Es’ veiny, rock-hard pecs not only bulge more than a foot from her clavicles, but are also permanently striated from armpit to cleavage. He stares in awe and terror at a naked female Korean chest of such inhuman pectoral development that it would make powerlifters weep in frustrated envy.
She is a nightmare of muscularity! Es grins again and spreads lats that would utterly eclipse the largest, tallest Olympic swimmer’s. Es snarls, and inhumanly, spreads even wider, her ridiculously huge lats growing to the point they actually lift her shoulders up and squeeze up hard against her inner triceps head, now nearly a foot of massive girlbeef visible under her arms on each side! Es is a truly hulking, freakish MONSTROSITY! “It’s time to get on your knees, bitch!” she growls lecherously, "Start worshipping this totally yoked Asian muscle god!”
As he tumbles down before her in helpless awe and terror, Es picks up a 45lb plate like it weighs an ounce, casually tossing and catching it with one hand like it’s a light Frisbee. Then making sure he’s looking at how effortlessly she’s playing with it, Es holds it right in front of his face. He pales as he notices her strong fingers are actually denting the surface of the metal with the sheer power of her grip.
But his mind is about to be truly blown with what happens next, for with a grin of pure dominance, Es taunts “Do you know how strong I have to be to do THIS?” and squashes the solid iron 45lb plate together like it’s a paper plate, not a hint of any effort at all visible on her features. He yelps in utter terror of her incomprehensible strength, but Es isn’t done. She wrings the plate like a towel, making the metal scream as she easily twists it into a cylinder, her unstoppable Korean muscles rippling and bulging frighteningly as Es effortlessly performs a feat of strength even several men together could not begin to duplicate.
“I’m stronger than you can even imagine,” she purrs, slowly waving the twisted metal tauntingly before his eyes, proof of her inhuman muscular strength, and enjoys his shocked awe… she gets off on her own strength! But Es still isn’t done. Looming menacingly over him as a naked female Asian muscle-colossus, Es snarls “And I’m getting even stronger than that!” as she flexes her entire monstrous upper body to insane proportions of shredded Korean girlbeef, and completely crumples the mangled 45lbplate like tin foil into a ball.
Veins puff seemingly out of every square inch of skin to feed even more insane strength to her growing muscles! As Es growls and compresses it smaller and smaller, her incredible muscles balloon bigger and bigger with the impossible strength needed to crush a solid metal 45lb plate into something the shape and size of an elongated baseball. Her tan Asian skin visibly shrink-wrapped onto grotesquely protruding muscle fibers and veins, Es’ topless Korean physique is truly unearthly: her arms are now well past 24”, her huge upper torso far more than doubling her trim waist. Not an ounce of fat is visible at all on Es’ topless body –literally every inch of her is shredded into striations and veins, her muscles so big they threaten to rupture her own skin!
…to be cont'd…
August 17, 2006 at 3:13 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36051reaper0002000
ParticipantYeah, I've thought about making her bigger, but I'd rather not head towards GBM's territory since he's so good at it!
All the same, I do appreciate the suggestions and kind commentary. I'm working on editing this scene week. More 2 cum, soon. Heh heh heh
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August 16, 2006 at 11:02 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36049reaper0002000
ParticipantHmmm…good point, good point, Jeremy.
I could be much more clear when it comes to "relative proportions", the illusory effect of mass, and admittedly, pure hyperbole on my part.
You're absolutely right that when it comes to the raw, absolute numbers, Es is NOT the biggest person out there. However, when you look at the size of her muscle peaks in relation to her small joints and her 5'6" frame, she'd appear substantially larger, even next to someone who was actually bigger but was not as incredibly proportioned. It's an illusion of mass that top bodybuilders pull off quite convincingly even standing next to each other. Think Juliet Bergmann in her heyday, or Dexter Jackson and Richard Jones on the male side. It's with such a visual effect that I might describe Es surpassing males on steroids, or looking like she has the width of TWO bodybuilders in her lat spread.
Of course, that doesn't get me off the hook totally, does it? (You can see why Mr.Shhh prefers to refrain from the use of actual numbers…) I do exaggerate, but hopefully not enough to significantly impair your suspension of disbelief!
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reaper0002000
ParticipantOh, drooooooooooooollll….
Most excellent, Tigersan!
ReapAugust 11, 2006 at 11:43 am in reply to: The Monster Returns: Juggernaut in the Gym [NSFW; mild gore] #36047reaper0002000
ParticipantThanks again for the kind comments, Jeremy — No worries, mate, a new scene with a new character is in the works… just won't be posting as quickly as before.
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Finally, Esther arrives at the gym, striding towards him dressed in skintight bike shorts and a gray spandex muscle shirt that’s obviously failing to contain her mindboggling Korean muscles. He gapes at her in total disbelief as she approaches him. He’d thought Es had attained maximum muscularity before, but dear God… Impossibly, in the intervening months, she’s actually gotten even bigger and harder – MUCH bigger and MUCH harder!
Es is yoked beyond belief, her outrageous veiny Asian musculature literally overflowing every piece of her clothing. He gulps as the Korean starts where she left off nearly a year ago, when he had passed out on her from the pain she had inflicted. Without even bothering to greet him, she simply says. “Check out the muscles.” She smirks and breathes deep, reveling in the ungodly muscular proportions that utterly humiliate him. Or anyone else.
To say Es is a bodybuilder would be a complete understatement; Es has built her entire body to a level of balanced muscular achievement far beyond what could even be conceived as humanly attainable for anyone, male or female. She is a revelation of inconceivably proportionate muscularity; so incredibly muscular, Es's physique is the most hideous or erotic thing imaginable.
He gawks openly at her insanely hypertrophied body, her Korean physique now sporting musculature that can only be described as freakish –her unimaginable muscularity has not only surpassed any expectations for a female bodybuilder, but easily surpasses even hardcore male bodybuilders on steroids. Every single muscle in her utterly yoked body is built to ungodly extremes!
Es’ bare arms are now over 18” relaxed with angry blue veins the size of fingers, the giant muscle bellies of her biceps and triceps more peaked at rest than his muscles fully flexed! Her breastless Asian pecs are thicker than phonebooks, huge shredded veiny slabs, deeply separated even unflexed, her girlish, light-colored nipples peeking out of a collar that wasn’t made to cover a quarter of this much brutish chest muscle on a girl.
The musclegirl's almost-bare back is truly enormous, showing monstrous muscle development that flares and bulges out far beyond human comprehension – a Korean girl-back so wide and massive it looks like the lat spreads of TWO male bodybuilders sprout out of her even smaller, tighter female waist! It’s almost inconceivable that a superstructure as massive as her upper body could be supported by a something as tight and trim as her narrow midsection and hips, but even that becomes par for the course as the equally unreasonable muscularity there is registered. Her obliques are unreal, and Es’ abs are clearly visible through the shirt, a resting six-pack so thick and deep it actually looks like even her powerful stomach muscles are about to burst through the cloth.
Equally visible straight through the spandex is every freaky separation in the ballooning muscle groups of her waist-sized thighs, while EACH of Es’ bared, brutish striated calves would far exceed the combined development in BOTH calves of any sprinter. Without even flexing, Es is so freakishly muscular she redefines and surpasses what a human can achieve in maximum physical development.
Even completely relaxed, Es is now so effortlessly muscular she would humble any flexing man…and she knows it! “Mmmmm…” Es utters erotically, slowly luxuriating in a stretch that sends her matchless body into an exploding, freakish muscular symphony of cartoonish curves and unprecedented angles – it looks like all the muscles of an entire stageful of male bodybuilders has been packed into her 5’6” frame! He gasps, staggered at the sheer amount of muscle Es emanates – she’s an ANIMAL!
But then she says, “ And I’m gonna get WAY bigger….WAY stronger…” He stares at her uncomprehending — Es has already surpassed anything human! She’s already so obviously strong she could tear a man apart, ripping off limbs as easily as pulling the wings off a fly! Her grin turns evil, as she regards him like a shark would a minnow, saying “You’re just breakfast to me, bitch, and what I did to you before is just an appetizer.” and shows off her huge white teeth, which suddenly look far more ominous than before. She’s looking at him like he’s her next meal, and her enormous smile is chilling.
Without looking away, Es starts to stretch further, and every movement causes tsunami-sized tidal waves to bulge in her massive Asian muscles, striations and veins protruding everywhere on startlingly peaked, absolutely full musculature. “Yeah… be scared of me…” Es sneers contemptuously as he pales with fear, “Be very, very scared…” With every movement, her hapless shirt appears to shrink in size, seams ripping and cloth splitting on the ever-expanding backdrop of gigantic Korean girlbeef as Es’ monstrous muscles start to hulk out frighteningly with mere stretches.
With the sound of tearing cloth and the size and number of holes appearing, it’s obvious that her muscle shirt won’t even survive Es’ stretching routine, let alone the ungodly size and hardness Es becomes when she actually lifts and pumps herself up to her unearthly potential. “I’m gonna TEAR APART your little boy body like it’s KLEENEX… RIP your arms and legs right off your body. Break every bone with my BARE HANDS like it’s NOTHING!” Es growls, relishing her unimaginable muscular strength.
Her grin becomes frighteningly evil as he starts to whimper in terror – there’s no doubt what Es could do to him if she wanted – and elicits ever more ludicrous peaks and bulges all over her hellishly built physique as she continues to stretch. He stares, stunned speechless, as more seams and cloth surrender to reveal more and endlessly more of Es’ almighty Asian girlbeef.
Her burst-apart tanktop is barely hanging onto her massive traps as she looks at him with a menacing smile and proudly flexes a ridiculously peaked, utterly male-shaming biceps, her arm well beyond the 20” mark. “I’m bigger and stronger than anything you can even imagine,” Es smiles evilly.
…to be cont'd…
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