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ParticipantHey Mr. Shhh, a Dawn/Jenna collaboration sounds very good to me. I've never drawn two muscle girls in the same picture, but this sounds like something I'm willing to work on. I could work on the picture, and you on the story if that sounds good to you.
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ParticipantThe fallout from Dawn’s Ms Olympia win was incredible. She had begun her transformation being constantly alienated and insulted, and now she changed all of that to be embraced by the bodybuilding world. Things didn’t change at college though. Her crowning meant a further surge in comments about her being a man, about her muscles being gross, and so on. However by this point Dawn had grown numb to these things.
A group called “World’s Strongest” caught wind of Dawn’s victory. Upon seeing her hulking physique, they invited her to attempt their toughest challenge—to lift an enormous, specially constructed barbell weighing an astonishing 800 kilos, called the Superweight. No, not 800 pounds. 800 KILOS. The challenge had so far gone unbeaten, and although Dawn was inhumanly muscular, few people believed that a young girl like her could lift something such as that. Some of the world’s strongest men have only lifted less than that number, in pounds.
Dawn was hesitant to accept the invitation. Amidst studying for mid-term exams, she never thought of using her muscularity in a strength based challenge. Still, she had just won the Ms Olympia, she figured she might as well try to win something new, and explore new ground. This time not even her friends believed she could come close to lifting such an object. The pictures they’d seen on the internet showed a barbell with four discs stacked on each side. Each disc was the size of an 18-Wheeler tire.
Dressed in her workout clothing, Dawn arrived at the studio, where a camera crew, host, and a sizable audience sitting on bleachers awaited her. At the center of the stage stood the huge weight she had seen on the internet, and despite her massive physique, the sheer size of the barbell actually gave Dawn some doubts. The very appearance of such a weight was daunting to even Dawn, although the entire audience and crew were more daunted by Dawn herself, a towering, 6 foot muscle-bound, yet beautiful girl.
As she got closer to the scene, Dawn noticed a pair of paramedics standing nearby as well as a platform placed in front of the Superweight.
Dawn was greeted with applause from the 100+ audience. She embraced their welcome by giggling girlishly and flexing her gigantic, 28-inch biceps. A collective gasp emanated from the bleachers. The host then hesitantly walked up to her and, after thanking her for taking up the challenge, began asking a few questions.
“So Dawn, I mean, looking at you I gotta say its amazing how beautiful you look, and I’ve seen bodybuilders on TV that quite frankly look anorexic compared to you. But look at that, the Superweight. 1760 pounds of pure steel! What makes you think you can lift such a weight, Dawn?”
Dawn was so massive and thick that the host couldn’t hold the mike to her mouth close enough, so ended up handing it to her. Dawn giggled before answering the question.
“Well I’m always looking for opportunities to test my limits, see how far I can go… like, all the weights in the gym are too light for me…”
There was laughter and applause. Dawn continued. “I just really want to head straight to the top, you know? I like being huge but I also want to see just how strong I am.”
“Do you think you will be able to lift that, Dawn?”
“I’ll certainly try!”
With that, the host thanked her again and let her have the stage. After the applause, Dawn readied herself, doing quick stretching exercises and pumping her arms to ready herself. She could feel and hear her clothing ready to give way at any moment. She then walked up to the Superweight. She could feel her heart beat faster and faster as the enormous weight came closer.
The audience stayed silent as they watched the gigantic, bronzed and impossibly muscular girl step up the small platform, facing the sleek, shiny Superweight. Dawn took in several deep breathes and gently placed her hands on the rubber grips. Clenching her firsts, she looked upward and began to breathe heavily.
Then, she took one long, deep breath and pulled with all her might. The audience murmured lowly as Dawn grunted and screamed as she struggled to lift the Superweight off the floor. Her muscles bulged harder than ever, as her massive biceps swelled to almost 30 inches.
20 seconds in and Dawn was still trying to lift the Superweight. Her whole body was rapidly quivering from the effort, as she groaned in pain. She let out a scream which reverberated around the whole studio, heaving with all that she had in her. But the weight would not budge. Every muscle on Dawn glistened brightly in sweat, barely contained in her transparent skin. She continued to agonize and pull, as the veins began to bulge so hard all over her body, they were visible through her clothes. Dawn continued to scream, 40 seconds in as she stood in the same position, shaking madly, seemingly on the brink of collapsing. The paramedics began to move closer to her as the host asked Dawn to stop.
But Dawn wouldn’t have it. Through the massive effort, the sweat, and the pain, Dawn reached within her deepest recesses to summon up every ounce of strength she had, both mentally and physically. She began to feel her arms and legs go numb, but that didn’t’ stop her.
With one mighty effort, Dawn let out an almost primal roar that shook the studio. Then, someone shouted “Look!” The Superweight was beginning to move! With that one effort, Dawn successfully lifted it an inch off the floor. The audience began to cheer and whoop as Dawn continued to struggle.
Then, something odd started to happen. Everyone in the studio immediately went silent and began to bug-eye as Dawn’s entire frame began to grow! Still trying to lift the weight higher, Dawn did not notice that her muscles were growing larger, swelling to monstrous proportions. Her biceps kept growing from 30 inches, to 32 inches, to 34 inches…It looked like Dawn’s muscles were growing to accommodate the massive weight. Her friends, seated amongst the audience, gasped and covered their mouths.
There was a sharp tearing noise as the seams in Dawn’s clothing began to tear away, revealing a convoluted, mish-mash of thickening muscle. It was impossible. Dawn’s muscles were swelling to ridiculous sizes. Her sports bra disintegrated as her deeply striated pecs thickened to superhuman proportions, Her shorts followed, stretching to thong proportions, then snapping apart instantly.
The sight of Dawn’s increasingly hulking body in the nude proved too much for some audience members. The paramedics ended up deviating their attention from Dawn to several women who were passing out.
Dawn continued to scream as the Superweight gradually levitated off the floor. With all her might, she let out an even louder orgasmic scream, so loud the audience covered their ears, and with one movement heaved the Superweight over her head. Her entire body exploded with one final, insane spurt of muscle growth that completely defied human biology.
There was a thunderous applause as Dawn slowly lowered the weight. She summoned more strength of manage a smile at the cameras as she grasped the Superweight, her mammoth arms quivering from exhaustion. Ready to collapse, she let go of the Superweight, which hit the floor so hard it shook the studio.
Everyone was shocked at what Dawn had turned into. She was gargantuan. Her biceps had swollen from 28 inches to 40 inches. Her quadriceps were an impossible 60 inches, each muscle grotesquely struggling for space. A typical bodybuilder’s quads would look like several tear-drop shaped muscles clustered neatly in a bunch. Not with Dawn’s. Her thighs were so horribly swollen and insanely ripped, they barely resembled anything human. They were so massive they actually spilled over her knees! She stood, completely naked, her entire body glistening from sweat, breathing heavily. Dawn was literally a walking mountain of muscle.
The host was at a loss of words. How was it possible that this young girl’s muscle mass increased so much in little over a minute? It just wasn’t possible. Nevertheless, he approached Dawn to offer his congratulations. As Dawn turned to face him, the host’s voice and knees began to tremble. She was an intimidating sight. Dawn herself couldn’t explain her muscle growth, but through the numbness in her arms and thighs, she smiled as she admired her new, impossibly muscular body. A stage hand quickly rushed in with a large towel, which he handed to Dawn. She used it to cover up her exposed vagina.
“My…My God, Dawn…I…I can’t believe it but…you…you’re HUGE!” the host said, looking up and down Dawn’s body.
Dawn giggled and put her hand to her mouth, flattered. “I know, I can’t explain how I, like, got bigger just like that, but I have to say it was quite a rush!”
“Well Dawn, we can talk more later on, but first I think we better get you covered up…” the host said. Another stage hand walked in and showed Dawn to a door. “Ladies and Gentlemen, Dawn!”
The audience clapped enthusiastically as Dawn walked out of the studio. For them, they had witnessed what probably was the world’s hugest, most muscle-bound human being, deadlifting the heaviest weight ever constructed, and actually growing more massive and muscular before their eyes. And that human being was not some butch, square jawed man, but an extremely beautiful, 20 year old college girl.
For Dawn, she was so excited she creamed herself. She began to think at the same time. When she stepped onto the stage and attempted to lift the Superweight, she was evidently not strong or big enough to do so. Yet her muscles responded to the stress they were put under and, in an act that defied everything that was possible in a human being, rapidly thickened and expanded to a size that would make it possible to lift the 800 kg weight. Dawn thought to herself:
“If I can get this big by lifting that, how big will I get if I tried lifting something heavier?”
Exploring these new prospects would prove interesting…
(Warning, nudity)
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rhinehartd
ParticipantGetting ready to start on the next picture, please feel free to throw out any ideas for it.
And can I say it is an honour to be complimented by the great Mr. Shhh?
rhinehartd
ParticipantWhoa, I can't believe it. Its an honour to have my work colored by someone with your talent. It definitely adds a new layer of depth to the pictures, so I really look forward to seeing the rest of it. Thanks!
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ParticipantBy the time Dawn reached her junior year at college, she had become comfortable enough with her massive physique that she began to finally pursue her professional bodybuilding. Over the course of two months, she pumped herself up to the point where she was at least twice as ripped as and significantly huger than a year ago. She had also grown taller as well. She had gone from 5 foot 4 at the age of 16, to easily 6 feet at her current age of 20. Approaching the Ms Olympia committee, her unreal physique almost immediately qualified her to enter the Ms Olympia competition.
The months leading up to the Ms Olympia were tough on Dawn. Although she was unquestionably the hugest, most muscular female in the country, she continued to pump her bulging muscles day after day. However, she had to make sure she didn’t pump *too* hard. Dawn remembered that her genes allowed her to bulk up well beyond any other female, and if she wasn’t careful she could easily become way too huge—losing whatever figure she had left and severely constricting her movement. The Ms Olympia committee couldn't believe a girl her age could have a body so huge–Dawn was then subjected to not one, but two steroid tests during the course of her training. When the big day rolled around, she was prepared.
Dawn, a complete unknown to the bodybuilding world, arrived at the arena in her sweat-suit, which completely covered up her figure. She had trimmed her long hair slightly and tied it up in a ponytail with an elegantly designed hair ribbon given to her by her friends on her 20th birthday.
Seated amongst the many other female bodybuilders, Dawn stood out like a sore thumb. Most, if not all, of the other bodybuilders were in their mid 30s to late 40s. Dawn looked around and couldn’t help but notice some of them had visibly masculine faces. Dawn, on the other hand, was unbelievably gorgeous and looked out of place. She looked like a competitor for America’s Next Top Model, not the Ms. Olympia. Dawn saw that some of the women seated in front of her were whispering to their friends and frequently turning to glance at her.
When it was time for Dawn to be classified into a weight class, she slowly made her way to the scale. The room fell remarkably silent. Setting her duffel bag down, she first unzipped her jacket and removed it. There was a slight, collective gasp from the other women as Dawn’s inhumanly ripped chest and abs came into full view, as well as her thick, rock-hard arms. Dawn then slid down her pants to reveal massive, shredded quadriceps and calves. Her entire body also evidenced long hours of conditioning—thick, bulging veins snaked their way around her entire body, and there was no sign of fat anywhere on her from the neck down. Even her buttocks were striated beyond belief.
The massive, 6 foot hulk that was Dawn stepped on the scale, and the digital readout shot straight up, showing Dawn to be 320 pounds of pure muscle. She was easily categorized as a heavyweight, much to her satisfaction.
Dawn’s friends were in attendance for the Ms Olympia. As the show began, they watched as the complete lineup walked on stage. The seventh person to walk on-stage was the tallest and hugest female in the whole line up. It was, of course, Dawn. The many months she spent conditioning herself was evident. Her muscles bulged harder than ever, glistening and standing out in stark relief. Standing amongst the other contestants, Dawn practically dwarfed every single one of them.
During her posing routine, the audience couldn’t believe what they were seeing. Here was quite possibly the most massive, most muscular female on the planet, yet her face was that of an extremely young girl. Throughout the whole routine, Dawn maintained her girlish smile that had the judges staring with their jaws hanging open. They had never seen such a young, pretty girl with a body like that. When Dawn flexed her biceps, two gigantic, 20-inch mounds of striated muscle emerged from her arms. At that point the judges had seen enough. There was no contest for Dawn–she simply outclassed all the others by a mile. Dawn became the youngest person to ever win the Ms Olympia.
rhinehartd
ParticipantThat was by far the most well written FMG story I've ever seen. All it needs is a picture or two to go with it.
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ParticipantCould someone send the clips to my email? I use a proxy server and can never download from rapidshare…
Much appreciated.
rhinehartd
ParticipantDawn was now a sophomore at college, and her body was now so ripped that her muscles appeared to be flexed all the time. She had gone through one of the worst moments of her life when she tried to build muscle too fast, and since then decided to take it easy and do it at a more gradual pace.
Although she was not as huge as she was during her steroid abuse, Dawn had grown noticeably bigger. As mentioned, the most dramatic change was that her body was unbelievably ripped, every single muscle bulging even when she was relaxed.
One of the most significant moments in her life came during the mid-term winter ball. Because there wasn’t a single guy who asked her to the ball, she decided to go anyway and hang around her best friends. Her gown could barely contain her massive body. Upon arriving at the ball, Dawn was greeted with disgusted stares, which by now she was used to.
The winter ball was kicked off with plenty of loud music and dancing. Dawn, still retaining her party animal ways, worked her way into the throng and began to dance like she always did. She went wild with her friends and for a moment, felt like she was back in her pre-muscular days.
Unbeknownst to Dawn, her constant gyrating was taking its toll on her dress. While Dawn was pumping her arms in the air to the beat of the dance music, the flimsy straps holding her dress to her shoulders snapped apart. The top half of Dawn’s dress hung limply below her waistline, exposing thick, massive pectoral muscles where her breasts used to be. The lower portion of her dress soon followed, splitting in two as Dawn continued to dance. Her entire dress fluttered onto the dance floor, rendering Dawn completely naked in her full, muscular glory.
Then, one of the girls nearby stepped on Dawn’s dress and slipped on it. She fell onto the floor and screamed, causing surrounding students to turn around and look. As they turned to look, they all saw a completely exposed Dawn. Dawn suddenly came out of her dance trance and realized the people around her weren’t dancing. She turned around to face the crowd, who saw for the first time that Dawn’s breasts were now massive plates of muscle. There was much screaming as she quickly snatched her tattered dress off the floor and tried feebly to cover herself up. Dawn, extremely embarrassed, kept her head down and struggled to make her way off the dance floor to the restroom.
She then thought of something. She stopped pushing her way through the crowd, and slowly turned around. Amidst the gawking stares and the thumping music, Dawn stood confident. She threw her dress to the floor and lowered her arms, once again exposing her entire body to the crowd. Dawn, smiling confidently, slowly held her arms out, clenched her fists, and slowly brought them up, striking a double biceps pose. Her enormous 17 inch arms bulged to insanely huge proportions. Dawn then brought her arms down and, giggling girlishly, put her hands together and flexed her pectorals, showing the deep striations that resulted from her long workouts. She continued to pose fully naked, like a bodybuilder, in front of the dumbstruck crowd. A couple of girls began to pass out. Some others stood entranced, other not knowing how to react, and others moving to the far end of the dance floor. It was surreal. It was the winter ball, and right on the dance floor was a naked, monstrously muscular 20 year old girl, flexing her muscles and posing.
After almost a minute of that, she quickly picked her tattered dress up and continued her path to the ladies’. At that point there was more gawking and awe than dancing and whooping. Dawn left the dance floor satisfied. She wasn’t going to be embarrassed by her body or let others’ perception of her bring her down; at that point she truly embraced her immense muscularity.
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ParticipantDawn was born to a Chinese mother and Dutch father. Growing up as a little girl, she had shown a propensity to jump around the house and roll on the floor, because she was energetic. At 12, she took a liking to gymnastics and by the age of 14 was a gold medalist at the inter-school athletics meet. Because of her extensive gym training, Dawn developed a healthy musculature that was immediately noticable.
She also had a people-friendly personality and drew many friends as a result. Upon entering high school, everyone wanted to be Dawn's friend. She soon developed a liking to late-night partying, and would often spend the weekends dancing away at Zouk, much to the displeasure of her parents. Fortunately, good grades and a healthy physique dispelled mum and dad's worries that their daughter was becoming decadent.
Dawn didn't want to attach herself to anyone. Although many, many guys tried to vie for her, she was never really devoted herself to one person especially. The numerous photos taken on her outings showed her posing flirtaciously with different guys, and this added fire to those who grew jealous of Dawn.
Varsity swimming, varsity track and field, gymnastics…Dawn was as heavily involved with these as she was with partying and socializing. Her coaches were impressed at her performance, and many agreed that Dawn was born to be an athlete; one that could compete in the olympics. Dawn liked how her body became more developed as the months progressed and pretty soon became fond of wearing revealing clothing, showing off her athletic and well-muscled body: Toned arms and abs, and shapely legs. With some students, Dawn's name would be first mentioned whenever there was a discussion on which girl in school was the most buff, though many more agreed that she was fit, not necessarily buff.
As her popularity grew, so did the slander. There were rumors on student blogs that she was involved in a catfight with another girl. There were rumors that she had extensive plastic surgery. A few hate sites sprang up, although the perpetrators were identified and promptly suspended from school. The reverberations of all this impacted Dawn, and along with the incidents at Zouk, and the freeloaders trying to vie for her attention, she began to think. She began to grow sick of all the false friends trying to attach themselves to her, as well as those who tried to slander and smear her.
She needed an idea; something that would cut off all the freeloaders, all the lying, and all the jealousy in one instant. Such an idea came to her when she noticed how easily she could build muscle in weightlifting.
rhinehartd
ParticipantAh, I'm working on the next picture and I'm not sure what clothing she should wear this time. Suggestions?
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