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🙂 Very promising. And the art is great.

Thanks!

It seems that you can't edit posts with replies under them on this site, so I'll just add something here that I forgot to add in the original post;

Since Valensia brings about so much terror to the residents of Krotaia, there have been many attempts to assasinate her, many of which involved seeking to slice open or puncture her massive veins. However, the last warrior sent to defeat her (who also happened to be the only one who managed to actually get a close-range blow off of her) tried this, only to discover that her flesh itself seems impervious to many catalysts of damage. He first stabbed her deep into her immensely vascular bicep with his sword, then pulled it down the length of her arm and watched in horror as the wound healed instantly right behind the blade's path! She, in turn, made short work of him by grabbing him by the collar and hurling him into the wall with inhuman force, smashing the life out of him.

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Wow… Who knew so many people were fans of the muscle-geek look! ^^

In honor of how many posts this has gotten, I've rendered a new picture of Trish! (scroll to the bottom of the page)

The closest girl in real life to a muscle nerd that I know of is Somayra Hernandez, but there aren't many pictures or anything of her…

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Okay, here's another pic of our favorite muscle-nerd here… This time she's covered in oil, and under some pretty nice lights if I do say so myself… ^^;

As you can see, due to the size of her breasts, unless she's wearing a bra that can support them, she has to support them by carrying them. The reason though is merely for comfort, and keeping in mind how sensitive her breasts are, she likes for them to be touched… 😉

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looks great man…..i love it. Great angle too.  My only advice would be try some other lighting options.  But great work none the less!!!!
;D ;D

Hmm… you know, I haven't really payed much attention as far as lighting is concerned… Thanks for the advice!

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After Valensia massaged all the way down to Shara's feet, she oiled her arms, and started to rub her shoulders, and then massaged her biceps and triceps. "Feels good, doesn't it?" Valensia asked again as she massaged the new amazon's rock-hard arms. "…Yes…" Shara said in a low, quivering voice. "…Very good…" The feeling of having her biceps massaged was something that cannot be described through words. It felt so good to her, especially since they were nearly the last part of her body that was hurting, that her moans of pain slowly turned into soft moans of pleasure.

After her biceps were done, Valensia then moved on to her forearms. After she finished with them, Shara turned over as she let the Praetorian mound of muscle massage her back. As she massaged, Shara's moans were unmistakably pleasure-based. Valensia spread the oil all across her back. Shara didn't seem to be the only one enjoying the massage… Shara could hear and see Valensia's veins pump blood through her body even louder and harder, with sounds almost like loud gulps. Valensia paused for a second, tilted her head back, and let out a soft, quivering exhale-moan, as if the harder pumping felt good to her. Shara seemed a bit puzzled though, as she never expected Valensia to derive pleasure from the functions of her own veins.

After Valensia finally finished massaging Shara she slowly stood up and stretched. Still a bit cramped, but not as much as before, at least she could move again. "…Thank you." Shara said in a low voice with her back turned to Valensia. She walked up to her and felt the throbbing vein in her bicep, which was the width of half of Shara's hand, and stood about an inch up off of her arm itself. "…How does it feel?" Shara asked her. "…You'd never understand if I tried to tell you." Valensia replied. "Anyway, you should rest… Tomorrow, we'll discuss what happens further. As I said…"

"I have big plans for you…"

Valensia flew into the sky, and teleported in a flash of light as Shara looked on.

"Whatever she wants me to do, I'm not doing it." Shara thought.

We'll see, Shara…. We'll see…

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So, how'd you like it? Keep in mind, this is the first time I wrote a story with the intention of being sexy and stuff, so if it's not all that great, I see why ^^;

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Valensia then placed her hand upon Shara's chest. Suddenly, Shara was engulfed in a powerful ray of energy, and was blasted straight onto the ground! As she tried to sit back up, her the muscles in her stomach painfully locked up tight. As she tried to stand, her legs just locked up, as did her arms supporting her. Sitting on the ground, halfway out of the ramp-like slope that leads down into the short cave from the forest, she screamed in pain as she watched her muscles slowly get bigger, and bigger, and bigger, tightening under her dark-brown skin. "Ow…Ahh, OW!!" She exclaimed loudly. "I…I can't move…They feel like they're going to burst! …AAh!!" Valensia knelt down to her. "For now, my dear…" she said, as she took an ornate chalice filled with warm oil from seemingly nowhere and began to pour it all over Shara's tight, cramping, and still growing body.

Valensia further spoke to her as she began to massage her, squeezing with a lot of her inestimable strength. Starting with her traps, solid as rocks, and vibrating from the extremely high tension of the growth. "Soon you'll see that you and I are not so different, princess…" "But you're a Praetorian…" Shara replied. "Everyone knows that you're all superhuman beings…" Valensia looked at her and smirked again. "Oh, of course. Superhuman beings. How exactly does one define 'human' by the standards of all things sapient? How can you be sure that you and those who dwell on this ground with you are not merely sub-human?" Shara, now able to move her neck now that the muscles there had loosened up some, looked up at her. "Sub-human?!" she yelled. "What's THAT supposed to mean?!" She then tried to jump away, but her entire body locked up, and she cried out in pain. "Not Yet…" Valensia said as she moved on to her pectorals. She slowly massaged them, glistening with oil as they throbbed from the muscle tension. Shara was breathing heavily, with periodic whimpers and soft, but despair-toned "oooohh…"'s and "ooow…"'s.

"Why?" Shara asked. "Why are you doing this to me?" Valensia then poured oil on Shara's stomach, and began deeply massaging her abdominal muscles. "You're gonna need the strength for what I have planned for you." She replied. Shara, feeling nearly completely helpless, decided that since she can't move, and was getting a massage, she may as well try to enjoy it. After all, in the back of her mind, she did find such strong relief from such strong muscle pain pleasurable. "Man, this is one tight set…" Valensia commented as she increased the pressure. Shara then gridded her teeth and tilted her head back as a single tear ran down her face… "Oohhh, it feels like they're gonna burst… Too tight… too tight…aaAAAaaahhhh!!…." Valensia laughed and slowly shook her head. "I'll get these cramps out for you as soon as I can, my dear." She said. "At least she cares a little…" Shara thought.

After a while of massaging, Shara's abs loosened up a bit. They still throbbed and twitched, and were, not to mention very tight, but at least she could move them again. Valensia then began oiling and massaging her thighs as Shara let out a few moans of pleasure, especially when she massaged her inner thigh. Then she moved on to her calves, which felt like unyeilding, tight knots of stone. "How does that feel?", she asked Shara as she massaged. "…Hurting… It… hurts a little… but it still feels kind of nice to get the cramp out… ow…" She replied softly as more tears went rolling down her face.

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Thanks, Trilliwig! Anyone else have any comments?

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Use thumbnails or smaller sized images, please.

Oops! Sorry about that?

…The modify button isn't there for some reason…

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I love your concepts so far!  The drawings of both are iteresting.  I like the look of the Praetorian with her floating spheres.
I am curious what adventures you have in store for them.  If they just get anointed with oil that is okay too, though.

If all goes as planned, they're gonna be going on a lot of adventures, some of which involving Shara trying to get the life sphere back, fighting the other amazons in sexy catfights and uncovering the secrets of the Praetorians…

…But shouldn't you  already know that if you looked at the descriptions..? ^^;

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