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Although it is very good (read: funny & fun) propaganda.  😀 😀

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By the way, I'm a little jealous of your productivity, StMercy.

Well, if it's any consolation, I probably won't get anything out today… and I'm heading up on a dry spell while I get everything packed into boxes and moved… and then school's gonna start up and I'll be spending most of my spare time on lesson plans and grading papers… >sigh<

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Aaaaand- the other half is up now!  Yay!  More Tet-chan!  ;D

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another great part. seems the story can be a good film

That would be sort of a story-writer's dream, wouldn't it?  Who would we get to play Tris?  ::)

Glad you're enjoying it so far!

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Thanks! I try to keep people wanting.  ;D

What most irritates me is that the board these days doesn't allow me to edit postings after a very short time frame. As StMercy undoubtedly will attest to, some things are best reworked over and over. For example, I usually notice little grammatical things every time I read my own stuff, or better phrasings occur to me… and now I can't correct them. Sigh.

Regards,
Reap

That does irritate me from time to time, yeah.  I've actually started posting most of my stories over in Brawna because I discovered that I can go back in and edit things well after the fact.

Still loving this story, Reap.  I'm almost frightened of what'll happen when you finally unleash the darker bits of Mercy's personality…

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Your rendition is a definite improvement over the original.  The only things I noticed were that the bar seems to get a bit too bright where the light hits it on the bar and the use of heavy, dark lines in defining the musculature makes the right leg seem a tad strange- almost too ripped.  It's still very much in the style of traditional 80's and 90's comic book art, though, and an impressive feat.  Well done!

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Gah!  I seem to be moving in entirely the wrong direction- why are all my favorite hotties located in Canada?!

<sobs> it's just not fair!

I was going to put something deep and insightful about how men (and women) use appearance as an initial filter in choosing who to hook up with, but I think, instead, I'll just say that Kim is lookin' quite the sexy hottie.

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I will give Sylph a try. I suck at coloring and photoshop, so it will either be in pencil or ink.

Lupus, you officially move to the top of my personal heroes list- Sylph is probably the most difficult of my three main heroines to draw, given that her proportions are the least realistic.  And if you can make pictures appear on paper with nothing but the aid of a pen or pencil, then I am in awe of you.  Thank you very much.

I can't do anything for you on the art front, I'm afraid, but best of luck on the move, and happy birthday for the 5th – mine'll be 21 days later.  I bet you find Arizona a bit on the warm side, though. 😮

Well, I'll wish you a happy birthday, early, then- may it be filled with Cindy-licious goodness!  I suspect I won't find Arizona to be on the warm side; I'll likely find it to be on the so-hot-I-could-fry-eggs-on-the-sidewalk side.  I can't wait to try running there- talk about needing a LOT of extra water…

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For crash dieting, I'd expect more like 4 pounds a week.  As to health side-effects, I'm no doctor, but hormonal imbalance and digestive complaints, dependant on what she is being fed.

That works out well.  I had her actually lose 5kg and then she ended up hospitalized for a time afterwards while the doctors got her stabilized.  I'm so glad that I'm not going to need to rewrite that- not that it would've been a huge rewrite, but it's the principle of the thing, y'know?

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Thanks, much.  I hit upon another one who fits my criteria while I was exploring amg…

Aimee Molleman: http://www.amg-lite.com/aimee_molleman/

Basically, I'm trying to get together enough images to get a firm picture in my head of Tris by the time she turns ~20 or so…

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