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Go for it.  I'd love to see what you can do with her.  I only ask that you keep in mind that she is NOT a violent character.  Other than that… knock yourself out! ;D

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Cute.  I wanna see that competition!  ;D

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Sorry chief, it has been removed. Nudity won't fly on youtube now… and daily motion is starting to crack down too.

Ah, but it was nice while it lasted.  Try Veoh.  They have adult content filters, but at least they still allow nudity if you're over 18.

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Ah, I see. I'm trying to keep the roster to all original characters, though. So unless  Dicey or Meagan are original characters, they may be out of luck. If I don't get enough requests to fil all the boxes though, then I'll see about adding pre-existing characters.

They are original- I made them up all by my lonesome. ;D

I just can't draw. :-[

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Also, what do you mean your characters are too "old school", Jimmy?

This is just a W.A.G., but I'm betting that he means that his characters, like mine, don't currently have visual representations.  I'd love to see Dicey or Meagan (from One Shot) in this game, but I don't have any talent drawing or rendering, so I'm entirely dependent on the good will of people who actually have skills with pencils, pens, and brushes.

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I will freely admit that she is the physical inspiration for Kalida in my Sylph stories. 😉

Very timely, fbbsare2hot, as I was looking for a good way to describe the character and then you posted those pictures.  As soon as the paramedics revived me with the paddles, she went straight into my little stories. 8) ;D

Many, many thanks.

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I'm sorry, but I think this kind of contradicts itself, no? That first part sort of ruined the picture of her I had in my head. For example, look at the last renderings of Tigersans "Michelle". Not even she is wider than she is tall.

Think more in terms of a rectangle than a triangle.  That oughta help.  Even so, I admit that Sylph goes a ways beyond what anyone would consider "realistic."

If I tried to draw her like that, she would probably turn out like some Ogre with a pretty face. It would make her legs look stubby and she would lose all "femininity". I know what your point was with such a description – to emphasize how immense and gigantic her muscles are. But really – think about it: Shoulders as wide as the entire body-length? That certainly isn't "perfectly balanced" as in "body symmetry" Maybe phrase it like this: "but it almost seemed that Sylph was wider across her shoulders than she was tall."

That would be why it's a challenge… 🙂  If your drawing doesn't exactly match the words I put down on paper, I won't be offended, I promise.  And Sylph is good-natured enough not to take offense, either.

Sorry for my nitpicking. No hard feelings.

Not from me, anyway.  Don't expect me to make huge rewrites, but I will certainly consider your critiques when making future chapters.  I don't promise to change what I'm doing, of course, but I am thinking hard about what people tell me when I write.  I know that I'm far from perfect, and I'm still a fairly new writer in this genre.

another amazing part!! are you planning in the story to make kalida gain "more muscle" by training with Sylph?

Who, me?  Eventually, yes, Kalida will certainly put on a bit more mass, although she won't ever take on Sylph-like proportions.  In point of fact, I'm not really planning on her getting much beyond fitness model proportions, although that may change.

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I just had an idea about a story where Sylph demonstrates to a doubting classmate that she is not clumsy.  Interested?

Things like this always interest me.  Were you wanting me to write it, or did you want to try your hand at a fan-fic?

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Okay.  A big thank you to everybody who offered ideas.  After much thought, I decided to go with Cowprobe's "Assisted Composition."

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Smokin!  Are you trying to give me a coronary?

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