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Frank
Participantalright now that this thing is winding down, i might as well give it a name. anyone got suggestions?
Frank
ParticipantAlright everyone, this is the last installment before the finale. I tried to throw in a little twist at the end. I dont know if it will work, but here it is. Enjoy đ
Dina woke up the next day in pain. Her muscles were still burning from the workout last night. She went to the medicine cabinet for some pain killers, or an Icy Hot Patch. She would need a whole lot of them. But still it wasnât as bad as last night. She waited for it to go away before attempting to break the door down. Eventually the pain went away, so Dina stepped in front of the door and prepared herself. Using all her might she brought her foot up and smashed it into the door. Nothing happened. She tried several more times and the door began to give. This was taking too long! So Dina picked up a heavy barbell and threw it at the door, sending it right through. She stepped through the hole in the door and went up to her room to change out of her sweaty workout clothes. Dina noticed that her clothes were becoming increasingly tight on her body. She flexed her arm and her bicep ripped right through her sleeves. âHa Ha! I really am huge arenât I?
After I destroy Nicole I need to take some time to enjoy these guns.â Dina left her house and started looking for Nicole. She checked the first place she figured a girl like Nicole would be. The gym. âShe is so proud of her muscles sheâll take any time she can to show them off.â Dina was of course right, but this was the first time she had seen Nicole since she drank the potion. Not only was she bigger, she was taller, and as she would soon find out, stronger. âOh No! The potion probably made her able to build muscle faster too. And now sheâs going to work out! Sheâs gonna get twice as big!â
Dina kept out of Nicoleâs sight. She figured if Nicole was going to get bigger, she should try to keep up. So Dina went over to the farthest machine possible and began to work out. She saw that Nicole had too. Nicole was lying on a bench with 300 pounds on the bar. She began to press the weight, and Dina was shocked to see how easy it was for her. After about 15 reps, Dina saw that Nicole was beginning to grow. Even from far away, she could see Nicoleâs body becoming thicker as more veins began to show up. It looked like Nicole had noticed too. She put the bar back on the rack and sat up quickly.âWhat the hell?â She felt her bicep. âIt wasnât that big when I started. How did that hap-â But then she figured out that she could build herself up faster because of the potion. âOh YES! My muscles are getting bigger after every minute I work out. By the time Iâm done, Iâll be the biggest person in the gym!â Nicole added 100 pounds to each side of the bar and continued to lift it. Dina watched in horror as Nicoleâs body swelled up with every rep. âOh shit! She can get bigger even faster than I can. I need a way to keep her from growing. But for now I had better catch up to her. Dina put the max amount of weight on her machine and used every ounce of strength in her to lift it. Since the high amount of resistance was making her muscles work harder, they began to get bigger immediately. âOhâŚ.MyâŚâŚ.GodâŚâŚThisâŚ.Hurts!â Dina was getting out of breath by the 10th rep, but the end result was worth it. Her body was swelling up in comparison to Nicoleâs. She had almost as much veins and she was definitely as busty. She could now no longer see her feet over her tits. As Dina got bigger, she also got stronger. It was becoming easier to manage that weight, and she caught her breath again. She was really fueled up now. âOH YES! WHAT A FUCKING RUSH! You know what. No more stalling. Its ass kicking time.â Dina got up from her bench and walked over to Nicoleâs.
âWell look whoâs here. You saved me the trouble of looking for you!â Nicole said. She stood up and saw that she wasnât as big over Dina as she used to be. âLook bitch, for the past two weeks Iâve been waiting to do this. And you just keep giving me better reasons. First you steal my boyfriend, then you BREAK INTO MY HOUSE and steal my potion, and now Iâm going to give you something youâve had coming for two weeks.â After her little speech, Dina clocked Nicole right in the stomach as hard as she could, sending her flying into the exercise machines. âOh- HELL NO BITCH! I wasnât going to kill you yet, but now you leave me no choice.â
âBRING IT ONâ
A crowd was beginning to form and watch the catfight. The people wanted a show, and that was what they were going to get. Nicole picked up her 300 pound bar and pumped it up and down, and as a result her arms and chest inflated.
âOh so thatâs how we are going to do it. Hmmm, if I can build fast muscle by working out, maybe it will work with protein shakes too.â She took a shake from one of the audience members and guzzled it down. Just as she had hoped, she bulked up a little more too.
âWe can stand here and do this all day, but it wonât prove anything. I was going to kick your ass, but I think I have a better way to humiliate you in front of all these people. Weâre having a weightlifting contest. We will have a bench-press contest, a dumbbell curl contest, and cap it off with a deadlift competition. The loser can never show her face in this gym again, and the winner is entitled to three free punches at the loser. What do you say? Do we have a dealâ Dina thought for a moment. If she lost, she would get her ass kicked, but if she won, she could get rid of Nicole for good. âYes. Dealâ They reached out to seal the agreement with a handshake. Dina was angry, so she tried to crush Nicoleâs hand. When she put pressure on Nicoleâs hand, something began to happen. Nicoleâs body was becoming visibly smaller, and it appeared as if all that muscle was being transferred into Dina. Nicole pulled her hand away at the sight of Dinaâs hulking body. âWHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO?â Dina was amazed herself. Sine both of them drank the potion, they could drain each other of their strength by having the stronger handshake. âWell, well, well. Looks like I have a new stake to add to our bet. The winner gets to drain the loser of all her muscle and strength. Still want to do this?â Nicole was hesitant, but her egotistical self figured she could easily win. âOkay fine, but give me back what you already took for the contest.â Dina let Nicole squeeze her hand until she was back to original size. This was more than a matter of revenge now. If Dina lost, she would lose everything she had gained. All those hours of painful weightlifting and working out and the new body she had come to love. She had to win this. It was more than a bet, this meant war.Frank
Participantthanks for the encouragment. this happens all the time with me though. i hit the third story and i cant come up with anything. i get writers block.
Frank
ParticipantDina woke up for school around 6:30. She couldnât wait to get there and see Nicoleâs reaction to her new muscles. Little did she know that Nicole would not be there today. She had called in sick from the bush outside Dinaâs house so she could search the house for clues to how Dina got so big. When she arrived at school, Dina was disappointed to see Nicole was out, but she cheered up when she saw her ex-boyfriend. âOh yeah, I was so busy getting ready to kill Nicole that I forgot I need some revenge on him too.â Dina walked past him without saying anything, but made sure she was noticed. âDina? What happened to you?â he called to her. She turned around and said angrily, âI spent all weekend working out. I had some free time. I was supposed to go out on a date with you but you left me for that bitch Nicole! Remember that?â He was sort of stunned at how forward she was. âListen. About that , Iâve been feeling bad all weekend, I shouldnât have done that to you. Iâm sorry.â Dina could not believe that was all he had to say. She knew he was happy that his new girlfriend had a better body, or used to have a better body. But she didnât want to get into that now. All she said was, âSave it, dickweed.â She then kicked him in the nuts, and stormed off to class.
Meanwhile, at Dinaâs house, Nicole had just woken up in the hedges across the street. âWhat the hell? Where am I? Oooh yeah, Dinaâs house. School started a half hour ago so it should be safe for me to go in.â
She took the spare key that was hidden under the doormat and let herself in. âWhere should I start? Maybe Iâll check her room.â Nicole made her way up the stairs to Dinaâs room. Nicole checked through the closets, drawers and under the bed, there was nothing that could have given her muscles. Finally, she checked the mini fridge under the nightstand. âLets see, waterâŚ.CokeâŚ.wait, why does she have Gatorade in a test tube?â Nicole turned the vile and noticed the label. âMuscle growth potion? Thatâs not fair! I worked long and hard to get my muscles, and she gets bigger ones just by drinking! Well Iâll make sure she canât get any bigger.â With that, Nicole uncapped the bottle and drank the remaining half of the potion. Taking a bigger dose of the potion seemed to make it work quicker. Suddenly that post workout feeling Nicole loved came over her, only she wasnât working out, and it was 10 times stronger. âWhoa, that feels pretty good.â The feeling increased every second, and Nicole started to notice that the feeling wasnât just getting bigger, so was she. âHoly shit! So this is how she did it. This is going to be funâ Nicole started to take in the moment. She stepped in front of a mirror to watch the transformation. Her muscles began to throb and veins appeared all over her. âOh..YES!â She cried out as whatever of the little body fat she had disappeared and was replaced with more muscle, giving her an already extremely pumped-up body. But those muscles began to grow too. âOhâŚmyâŚ..GOD! I just doubled the size of my muscles in a couple of seconds! And Iâm not even done yet!â She began to flex her new muscles and emphasize the growth. She flexed both biceps. Nicole could feel them becoming harder under her hands. The veins began to pulse as she continued bulking up. She wasnât even trying now but her muscles cold be clearly seen. Her stomach was like brick now, as Nicole ran her fingers down she could feel the grooves deepening and the muscle becoming harder. âOh yes, OOH YEEEESS! DONâT STOP! I WANT MORE MUSCLES! BIGGER!â Tears began to form in her jeans, as her thighs and calves simultaneously filled them out. They were becoming hard as rocks, possibly harder. Finally, her breasts inflated to twice their normal size in proportion to her massive bulk. Looking in the mirror, she saw that her frame was almost as wide as it. Even though she was done growing she could still feel that burning, pumping feeling through her body. She also noticed she was sweating. She really got into the transformation.
Nicole stood up straight. She had grown 3â taller and had veins all over her body. Even unflexed, her muscles were bigger than Dinaâs by a long shot. They flinched every time she made a move and when she flexed, she ripped out of her shirt, leaving her in a sport bra. âHa! Now Iâm the biggest girl in the state. Lets see that bitch try and even touch me now! It really doesnât matter, if she tried to punch me sheâd just break her hand anyways!â She flexed her arm again to admire it. They seemed bigger every time she flexed. Nicoleâs bicep was about as perfect as they come. Completely shredded, with a peak reaching halfway up her arm, and solid like steel. âWell I took care of that pretty quick and I still have the whole day off. I think Iâll go rest. Iâm going to need the energy.âWhen school was finally out Dina ran home. But she stopped when she noticed that her door was open. She slowly crept up to the porch. âIs anyone in there? Youâd better get out now if there is!â There was no response so she made her way up the stairs and into her room. If there was anyone there she could take them. She locked the door just to be safe and started watching TV. After a while she got thirsty and went into her mini-fridge for a drink. At first she didnât notice her muscle potion was gone but then she saw
A little piece of paper with note on it. It read:Dear Bitch,
Just so you know, I drank down the rest of your muscle juice and
now those muscles are mine. I am bigger and buffer and stronger
than ever. So keep in mind that if you even try to hurt me, you will
go down.PS. I have your boyfriend too! HA HA
Now Dina was starting to get mad. âOkay, that is the last straw. First my boyfriend, then my muscle, I have got to teach this bitch a lesson once and for all. I need to get bigger.â Dina ran out of her house full speed to buy more muscle potion. When she arrived in the market, she was upset to find no trace of the man selling the potion. She asked the shopkeepers next to his spot. They told her he just stopped showing up one day.
âOkay, this isnât good.â Dina was talking to herself on her way home. âI need more muscle and fast. But where else will I be able to find a potion? Alright, I guess thereâs only one thing I can do.â Dina ran in her house and into her gym. She locked the door and slid the key under it. Then she turned all the bold locks and locked it with a padlock without looking at the combination âThere! Now Iâm not coming out until Iâm strong enough to break out on my own!â Dina set right to work. All that night she hit the weights, working every muscle in her body to the full amount of weight they could stand. A half hour into the workout she was so pumped up she thought her muscles would explode. She stopped every once in a while to down a protein shake and take a shower. Dina was so into the workout she did not notice she had been up all night, and it must have been worth it. She saw that she had built more muscle unusually fast. âThe potion must have made me able to build muscle quicker! Cool!â She was definitely bigger, and she felt stronger. She probably could have busted the door down if she wasnât so tired. Every muscle ached worse than anything she had ever felt. âOw! That was one intense workout. After a good sleep I should be able to break the door downâ Dina pulled out the couch and laid down. Once she was out of the basement, Nicole would pay. She could only dream about what she was going to do to her.
TO BE CONTINUED
Frank
Participantokay guys hers part two. not alot of growth, but more like a set up for a lot of growth in chapters to come. enjoy!
Dina woke up around 9:30 the next morning. She had forgotten what happened the night before and was startled when she looked in the mirror. She was happy to see that the potion had again taken effect. Her biceps were now easy to see, even though they were not flexed, and a single vein ran down each one. The same went for her calves which now also bulged every time she took a step. She noticed her shirt seemed looser around her stomach, which she discovered was because the potion caused her to shed whatever fat she had there. What she now had was a finely cut washboard stomach. He thinning of her abdomen made her breasts seem even bigger than they were, which was still very big. She flexed her arm and it jumped up to double its size. âAlright , this should be enough. But just in case, Iâll save the rest of the stuff.â When she walked down to her kitchen for breakfast and passed the door to her basement, her curiosity got the best of her. âI wonder if I got as strong as I got big. Well thereâs only one way to find out.â She made her way down the stairs and looked over at the weights. The other day she could curl 10 pounds with a bit of a struggle. She grabbed a bar and added 15 pounds to each side. âThere thatâs 30.âDina grabbed the bar and lifted it up like it was a piece of paper. âHa! 30 pounds and itâs still to light. Lets see how much I can really handle.â
She went over to the bench her father used. There was 100 pounds on each side. Dina laid down on the bench grasping the bar in her hands. She pulled it off the rack and brought it down resting on her chest. âOkay half way there,â she said. She took a deep breath and thrust the bar up with all her might, which wasnât necessary because it was also light for her. âOh my God! 200 pounds. Iâm really strong.â She jerked the bar up and down for a while. She could feel her muscles pumping up as they began to strain from the weight. âOkay thatâs all I needed to know. I think Iâm in ass-kicking shape!â She went over to the heavy bag and began to swing at it. She pictured Nicoleâs face on the bag and put every ounce of strength she had into it. She hit the bag so hard it fell over. âOh yes.â Dina marveled at her powerful new body. âIâm stronger than any girl in this state. Nicole doesnât stand a chance against me!â She continued punching the bag. âThis is just practice for what is going to happen to Nicole. That bitch has some beating coming her way!âââŚ7.âŚâŚ8.âŚâŚ.9.âŚâŚand 10!â Nicole put the barbell back on the rack and sat up. She loved the feeling she got after working out. Every muscle in her body felt as if it was swollen. Whenever she bent her arm her bicep doubled up in size, as did her calves when she walked. She loved having these muscles and knowing that not one other girl in her grade could match them. This is because she had not seen Dina since she had stolen her boyfriend. Nicole looked in the mirror with satisfaction. She flexed her bicep and started to feel it. She loved that she could not make even the smallest dent. It was hard as rock. Guzzling down a protein shake, she left the gym and started the walk home. Nicoleâs route home included passing Dinaâs house. As she was walking by, she caught something in the corner of her eye. Double-taking, she looked in the window to confirm. Sure enough there was Dina, but it didnât look like Dina, she now had a large chest and muscles slightly bigger than Nicoleâs. âOH MY GOD! That canât be Dina. Can it?â She checked again. Yep that was Dina. âOh fuck. Perfect time for her to start working out. Right after I steal her boyfriend. Sheâs gonna kick my ass for sure.â But then Nicole began to think. âWait a minute, I saw her only two days ago and she was a runt. Thereâs no way she could have got that buff that fast. No one can. Something isnât right, and Iâm gonna find out what.â
Nicole ran home for her sleeping bag and some snacks. She was staking out tonight. Tomorrow she would search Dinaâs house for clues. Since her and Dina used to be friends, she knew where the spare key was hidden. She hid in the hedges across the street and tried to fall asleep. âSheâd better enjoy being bigger than me while she can. âCause when I find out her secret, Iâm going to steal it and use it for myself. HAH! And I thought I couldnât be in any better shape!âTO BE CONTINUED AGAIN
Frank
Participantsure thing jimmy dimples. ill remember that when im writing part 2 đ
Frank
Participantthanks guys đ part two is in the works. should be up soon!
Frank
ParticipantI remember an episode of Disney Channel's Pproud Family where Penny is dressed up as a superhero for halloween and becomes buff. I think she flexed. and they just made a TV movie where the family is cloned and Penny and her mom have super strength. No muscle in that one though
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