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Marja's thighs always steal the show.  ;D

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Ah, it gladdens me to see another entry into the world of sculptures depicting hypermuscular females!  And it is unmistakably your style AD.  As Jedediah observed, the wildly fluctuating body thicknesses are quite dynamically exciting.  ;D  More in this vein would not be taken amiss!  My thanks!

(you can probably tell I've been spending far too much time RPing in WoW lately… heh)

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It's even better the second time around. 😉  I didn't even notice the paleness of the face until you mentioned it.  She's an amazing perfectly-sized specimen of the FBB form, not too big at all.  I love the way you draw, keep it up!

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Cool, would love to see more of this.  If only I had someone that distracting in my living room. 😀

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Normal sized girls are probably taller than she is. :p

I'm not hearing an argument against this idea…

Oh, yeah and by the way, cute drawing, and cool bio. 8)

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Wow… lovely work as always.  Though I am much more partial to the level of muscle on your drawing of Natsumi, I will not stop you from drawing them larger. 🙂

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I hope you enjoy.

Oh, I do, very much so.  Nice sequence, thanks!

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Glad to see you're still at this.  Wonderful story, though the narrator's obsession perhaps hits a bit close to home for me. 🙂 I would've liked more detail in the development of their relationship too, but I suppose time constraints didn't allow.

Yes, it's common not to remember dialogue exactly, but for the purposes of storytelling, people tend to put something actual there, rather than resorting to saying "So then I said something with the gist of …".  That's just awkward and brings the flow of the story to a crashing halt.  It's better practice to relate conversations in conversational form, without disclaimers after every sentence, even if they may not have been the exact words spoken.  With accounts given from memory, it's taken as understood that details may not be precise.  With many kinds of writing, there are implicit assumptions that are tedious to have to read through repeatedly, just like in reviews and editorials where it is bad form to use phrases "In my opinion" or "In the author's estimation" all the time.  Just a little food for thought.

Anyway, thanks for writing!  Mention the name "Mayim Aquus", and I'm hooked. 😉

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I'd also like to express my appreciation of your Autumn Raby and Bonny Priest morphs in particular, and the femxman-style growth sketches.  Great work!

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Ah, thanks for checking the proportions Tigersan.  Maybe the photos have more foreshortening than the renders, and I will be eager to be proven wrong when the final photos are out!

Heh, you mentioned making measurements and calculating proportions… tantalizing for us numbers-oriented people.

Anyway, I love what you did with her back and upper arms.  They're so immensely bulging it makes me light-headed.  Great start on the neck too.  I'd like more of a horseshoe shape for her triceps instead of the two-lobed thing, but it's a minor quibble, really.  I'm sure you know what to do much better than I can tell you.  Keep up the great work!

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