[Yatz57]

Yup, the levels of enthusiasm are almost overwhelming. Thank you to the guys who commented – in case anyone else gives a rat's ass, I'll be posting some of the new stuff at http://yatz.deviantart.com/

[Yatz57]

First of – great piece! You seem to be making steady progress, keep it up (and buff).
Several problems that I haven't seen mentioned above:
– The Lattisimus dorsi on her right side is all but invisible, like it would be if she were half-turned. As it is, she is facing front and her body seems to be out of balance. This would be hard to fix without moving the whole arm complex, but I think it needs to be done…
– The pectoral on the left goes all the way down to the bottom of the breast. Bring it up to the middle (on the same level as the one on the right).
– The breasts: I know she's wearing a costume, but do you know of any fabric in creation that can hold those babies so tight together when those mighty pecs are spread wide? They need to go in opposite directions to some degree.

As for the costume itself: forget it. Like The collector said, She-Hulk never had a decent one. She's a bikini girl, to the thong born! What with the size and crazy muscles (not to mention the green tinge) I don't think there's a chance of anyone mistaking her for Sarah Michelle Gellar…

[Yatz57]

Woof!! 😛 Shulkie craggy and squeezy… Sweet!

[Yatz57]

Remember that episode of Seinfeld, where Elaine is really excited about a guy because he called her "breathtaking", and then it turns out he uses the same word to describe the ugliest baby in America (and just about anything he sees)? Well, not wanting to sound like that guy, but your art really is, well, breathtaking. I'm alternately white (lack of oxygen) and green (yup, that).

[Yatz57]

Happy birthday, Ritz! I've never drawn a furry myself, but you got me interested – thanks! Quite a facinating world – also lots of excelent artists… I gave it my best shot:

[Yatz57]

AZ, seems like you haven't gotten my personal message, so…
Your birthday present is waiting for you at http://www.nachshon.org.il/~yatz/post/gallery/preggers.jpg – get it when it will do the most good.

[Yatz57]

All tahgedda now:
Yatz!
Yatz!
Yatz!
[b]YATZ!
And pls, bud, don't short-sell your ability with the ol' "yeah, drop in a basic color, burn and dodge, meh, done." You have an artist's eye that I would sell my left nut for.

😛 Yeah, well, that was me being my usual facetious wanker self again. I do believe I have a higher opinion of my talents than most people do, but every time I sit down to paint, I want to kick myself in the head – 6 years after I started working in Photoshop, I'm still using the basic tools. There are so many ways I could have made my work better, if only I could sit myself down and study it earnestly!

Master Fly – you're very welcome  :), and of course you can.

[Yatz57]

Woohoo!! Excellent, Yatz-san!
My hubby asks which program you used for this, because the effect looks very nice 😀
(or if you didn't use a program, what media you used)

Photoshop, very basic:
Fill area with base color, shade a bit with the airbrush (bit darker color), then darken with the burn tool, lighten and highlight with the dodge. Voila!

[Yatz57]

xD Wow I'm glad I didn't make her the size I'd normally do.. :p

Me too… ;D She looks just great this way!

[Yatz57]

David, this is shaping up to be one of your best drawings, ever. Can't wait for the highlights…

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