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Dude this is great!

It’s like watching the series but without the mind shatteringly dull filler episodes.

Done the Terripen Pervert King proud with your rendition of his hedonistic planning. 😈

The story FEELS like a Akira Toriyama drawing with the massive ancient temples and freaky demons. You would claim a healthy chunk of my mind’s dayadreams if you ever did a Chrono Trigger fan-fic in the same vien.

Also you haven’t had the characters say out loud "Such and Such’s Power is more powerful than some other persons power in a way that leaves no mistaking the power inherent in their power". 😉

Coolness all around. Nice pacing and a fun innocent atmosphere.

Thank you for sharing this volatile fan penned epic Vollar-Tile.