August 20, 2004 at 7:53 pm
#640
alex
Participant
Excellent! Very wicked. I felt specially bad for Lisa.
I like transfer stories in which the corruption of the character is not so obvious. I really don’t care for the one’s where the characters are 100% evil. They don’t feel so real.
You could continue this. Having her bring other people to the house, such as her busty cousin, and some tall muscular men. It would be nice seeing her lording her huge body over her family, specially poor little Lisa, who would become her tiny little maid. Hehe…ok, I’ll stop fantasizing.
Anyway…great work! 🙂