Favorite Parts — Loss of Control


There is a scene on a beach in my "What I Want" story that you’d probably like. It’s the scene where our main character and a bratty little girl have their final confrontation.

This scene is absolutely burned into my brain!

"Hey, Cliff, notice anything different about me?"

That being said, I am with some of the others who like to see happier endings.

One idea that I had was a sequel to "Popped" by Warren Vehec. I would like to imagine Rose and Cindy Ann developing the same magic juice that Lola had created. And what if all of that muff diving that Rick is "forced" to do results in HIM eventually growing? This has the promise of unending cyclical growth! If only I had the talent to put something like this down in type…