Hiccups – a complete story


You’ve done the Hiccups as growth device genre proud.

It’s especially cool how you lure the reader in by having everything be so controlled, so specific by the Magic person only to have Jennie’s biology be the culprit in her amazonian development.

Using Ester was a really nice touch. As far as goddesses go she doesn’t get much airtime in fantastic stories.

Cool beans and nice story 8)

Also her final result is a dreamy Tina Lockwood/Yulia Nova bodytype hybrid for that I thankee.