how about


Well it would be a lot of extra work but how about 2 driffent versions of the story. One from her view (whats going through her mind) and one from his. It would be an intresting challange to tell the same story from 2 points of veiw. You would be able to add diffrents takes on the story because people veiw the same events diffrently depending on their fears, personality etc. But if i must choose one i would go with her point of view since most storys are from the guys point of view.