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I can’t tell you how many GTS stories I have started. And if I do say so my self, I have some rather inventive ways of getting her to grow. But you would not know this because they always fall apart. And this is kind of frustrating because I do a lot of writing, and have a fairly good idea of what I am doing.

But obviously, writing erotica is a whole different ball game than writing science fiction. Research into this type of writing has been for naught. No one likes to talk about it, something about Ashcroft looking over the shoulder or something.

One of the questions that bugs me is POV, that is Point of View. Take a guy and gall in the room, and she starts growing. In the story, you have to pick a POV. You can focus on her as she grows through the roof, or focus on him as he tries to dodge falling debris. Or you can switch between the two.

That is where my stories start to fall apart, with the POV question. Focus on her, and you get the full thrill of the growth, but absolutely no conflict. Focus on him; you got lots of conflict, but virtually no thrill. And switching between the two only brings out the worst in both worlds.

So, for those of you who dabble here? What are your thoughts on the subject? And for the readers, what sort of stories sticks into you mind the most?

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Well it would be a lot of extra work but how about 2 driffent versions of the story. One from her view (whats going through her mind) and one from his. It would be an intresting challange to tell the same story from 2 points of veiw. You would be able to add diffrents takes on the story because people veiw the same events diffrently depending on their fears, personality etc. But if i must choose one i would go with her point of view since most storys are from the guys point of view.

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