[rimmer8]

This is the first time I’ve read any of your work Cowprobe, and since I’ve got to chapter 3 that must mean your doing a good job!

Mysterious, weird, lots of unanswered questions (mostly about Mandy) it was interesting being in Barkeley’s (slightly empty) head for a while.

The writing style helps promote the bizarre atmosphere of the story but I have to say that at times it was so packed with similies that I lost the thread.

That aside I hope you post more 😉