2 FMG Gals and a Wimp (old story idea & pic)

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  • #11895
    fbbfan
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    Is this the right place to post this?

    I was going to post on the FMG art thread, but here goes….

    Since I am posting up pics, and stories(eventually)

    I am posting up this llittle sketch/drawing from 1996 for a story I never wrote.
    This is my 2nd drawing post.

    Basically the setting was a college campus.  A pathetic mean bully, and two bookworm
    gals in their early 20's that love to study science. These two used to be skinny and tiny of course.
    About 4'11 or so.

    Not too original, I know, there must be similar story ideas.

    But these gals would have eventually become even larger & more muscular by stories end.
    And would have eventually fallen for each other.

    The whole point of the story would have been that the two gals were never noticed,
    By the end of the story, that would not have been a problem.

    The last scene would have been these two gals holding hands.  While most of the school
    just gawks at their statures as they are walking down the campus walk-way.  The 2 gals would
    have been  over 10 feet tall by that point.

    I lost the energy though, and I couldn't even write it.  Only this sketch exists.
    One of them is wearing a bikini, that I could not get right at the time, see pic.

    Anybody like it? 

    I am not Hemingway or Picasso..I know.

    #11896
    thatdude
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    nice stuff man, too bad you never got the story through, i have an idea though, if u still want to do it maybe u can finish your story in short little mini comics like david did with dyna, just a thought 😀

    #11897
    fbbfan
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    Hmm thanks…that's a good idea.

    That reminds me, I have several comic strips from the 90's,
    artwork is terrible though, but I can use that as a rough template.

    I had one, were there was an abused girlfriend, and she was literally being
    beaten to a pulp by her boyfriend.  They break up.

    The skinny scrawny gal starts hitting the gym, and starts being taught by a buff male trainer.

    By pure will alone, in the next 3-4 months she grows height and muscle,
    and starts overshadowing her trainer.

    I was literally making the girl so big, by the end that I was running out of paper.
    My comic ended with the heroine making a phone call to her ex-boyfriend,
    wanting to get back together to make peace.

    That is one I would love to re-do again and work on.
    We'll see, I will be going back home, so maybe I can pick these materials up.

    #11898
    10-4
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    Cute. I like it. Keep up the good work.

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