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September 10, 2005 at 3:36 am #13157MaxParticipant
Author note: This is a sequel of my story Disease.
A.D. 2 – Mirror's Interference
By Max
Edited by Rex (tf_wizard)Alyssa Dodson was walking gracefully through the streets. Her
imposing amazon figure called the attention of everybody
nearby. She didn't like the idea of hiding her beautiful body
under boring and baggy clothes, but since Absolute Drainer was
already known by the media, she didn't have other option if she
want to hide her secret identity.Suddenly, her nice walk was interrupted as the alarm of a nearby
bank was triggered. "Not again. This has being the third one this
week" sighed Alyssa as she quickly walked to a dark alley.In the meantime, the bank tellers were giving all the money to
the masked thieves. "Just wait until Absolute Drainer gets here.
You will pay for what you are doing" said a female teller."I wouldn't trust in her to save me if I were you" grinned the
thief under his mask."Throw your weapons and surrender immediately!!" yelled
Absolute Drainer as she entered into the bank. All people sighed
in relief to see at their heroin. Of course, you exactly don't know
if it's by relief or lust the reason men sighed.The thieves looked to each other, dropped their weapons and
raised their hands."That was easy. This hasn't happened before" said Absolute
Drainer. Since she became the city's heroin, she never encounter
a group of bad guys that give up without a fight. "I guess they are
beginning to fear me" she grinned.As Alyssa began to approach the thieves, a female voice behind
her said "Gotcha!". She turned around and saw woman standing
in the entrance of the bank before an odd tingling sensation
started cursing through her body.Shaking her dizziness, Alyssa watched as the woman had a big
grin on her face. She didn't like that expression and in a quick
move, Alyssa ran and grabbed the woman by her shoulders,
lifting her into the air. "Who are you and what have you done to
me?"."My name is Mirror and you will discover very soon what I did
to you" smiled the woman.The confidence Mirror's had was enough indication that she was
plotting something. "Tell me now or I will drain you
completely.""I dare you to do it" Mirror said confident.
"You asked for it. Say goodbye to your muscles" said Alyssa.
Absolute Drainer wanted to show at Mirror she was talking
seriously, so she unrestrained her absorbing powers to extract not
only her muscles, but also all the work that puberty done in
Mirror. Alyssa gasped as she wasn't getting any curve or muscle
from Mirror."My powers!! They are gone!!" said Alyssa.
"If you are standing in front of Mirror, that only means that I
must be you" said Mirror grabbing Absolute Drainer's extended
arms. "And, as a consequence, I must have your power" she
grinned."No!!!" yelled Alyssa as she felt her strength leaving her. Her
legs buckled and she fell on her knees."Oh yes!!" moaned Mirror in ecstasy. "Bow before me, Absolute
Drainer. Your power is mine and with it, I will absorb all the
muscle and strength you have taken in the past" laughed Mirror.Alyssa felt so vulnerable as her great strength was sucked out of
her. Soon she found that her body was shrinking too, as Mirror
was growing in size. She was now suffering the destiny she
granted to many criminals in the past. She looked around and
saw the terror in people's eyes. She had failed them."More, more!! I want to have it all!!" gasped Mirror as she felt
her body getting denser. Her muscles were slowly growing, but
she knew that they didn't reflect the true power she was
obtaining from the fallen heroin."So much strength!! So much power!! I will be unstoppable!!"
laughed maniacally Mirror, sensing raw strength beyond belief
running through her system. Then, something else happened to
her.Mirror was surprised to feel other parts of her body growing, but
no with muscle. She looked down to see at her breasts inflating
under her leather top. Her mini skirt became microscopic as her
derriere grew big and round, exposing the under part of her
cheeks."Your power is amazing Absolute Drainer. Besides taking
muscle, you can also siphon beauty as well. This is just great"
laughed Mirror as her charms were being enhanced by Absolute
Drainer's ones, making her even more voluptuous than she had
been."Let's take a rest, shall we?" said Mirror, while breaking contact
with Alyssa and allowing her to fall flat on the ground.Absolute Drainer was… well… absolutely drained. Her body was
very thin and weak. Also, she was as flat as a board. She even
didn't have the strength to stand up by herself. Mirror had taken
a part of her original strength too. She was breathing with great
difficulty.Without showing any sign of compassion, Mirror turned around
roughly with Absolute Drainer. The mere pull Mirror did in
Alyssa's arm was enough to dislocate it and break it. Absolute
Drainer cried in pain."Ha ha ha!! I enjoy the music your cracking bones produced" she
said with an evil glare. "But don't worry. I won't harm you more.
I still have plans for you, so be assured that you won't die"Mirror ordered at two of the thieves, who weren't other than her
minions, to lift Absolute Drainer. "Take her to our hideout and
chain her as I instructed you" she said.Quickly, the thieves dragged at the heroin to the van they had
outside the bank. Alyssa watched impotent at Mirror. Now that
she had her strength and power, she was virtually unstoppable.
The thieves threw her inside the van and drove away.In the meantime, inside the bank, Mirror caressed her dense
muscles. "I can't believe my plan worked so well" she said
flexing her arms to tense her biceps. "I have not only succeeded
in taking out at the local heroin, but also I gained her strength to
do with it as I please" she said.Turning her attention to the people of the bank, Mirror said "All
of you, get out of here. My minions and I need some space to
work and I don't want any distractions".People didn't think twice and rushed scared toward the exit.
"Now that we are alone, bring the vans here. We have a vault to
empty" she said to her minions.The minions obeyed and they broke the bank entry with their
vehicles. They drove until they were almost in front of the huge
steel door, that protected the bank."Let's put this muscle to work, shall we?" smiled Mirror as she
walked toward the vault. She pushed her fingers against the hard
metal and became pleased to hear the sound the door was
producing while her fingers were penetrating it."Amazing" gasped Mirror as she has inserted her hands into a
thick door of metal, as if it was made of water. Closing her
hands, Mirror concentrated all her strength to pull out the door.
The force she applied was enough to yank the door off its hinges
and to send it flying to the second level, destroying the ceiling of
the first floor."What an unbelievable strength!" said an astonish Mirror, while
she was looking at her hands. They weren't even bruised. "And
it's all mine" she laughed maniacally as her minions rushed
inside the vault to steal everything they could.In another part of the town, Dr. Leon Dodson and a young
woman were leaving the training room he built for his wife,
inside of his mansion. "Your progress is very remarkable,
Samantha. It seems that you have finally gained full control over
your powers. Soon, you will be joining Alyssa in the fight
against crime" he said."That will be great, doctor. I'm eager to work with Alyssa and
kick some ass!" smiled Samantha.Leon raised an eyebrow. "That is not the language for a young
lady like you"."Sorry" said ashamed Samantha.
"That's OK. You can say those words when you are wearing
your costume, but only on those occasions, agreed?" he said,
extending his hand."Agreed!!" said Samantha jumping at Leon hugging him tightly
and kissing him on his cheek. Then, she rushed to the kitchen to
get something to eat.Looking at the young woman, Leon wondered when he and
Alyssa will have kids of their own. He couldn't avoid thinking if
they had a daughter, she would inherited the powers of her
mother.This thought lead him to another. It seemed that Alyssa's
condition wasn't as unique as he thought in the beginning.
Samantha was the proof of that. Thanks to his connections as
doctor, he was informed of about 23 cases more of females
developing special abilities.So far, women are the only ones that have showed these abilities.
It could be nothing, and at the same time everything. Alyssa and
Samantha were nice women and they wouldn't use their abilities
for evil, but he couldn't expect the same from all women.Falling over his couch, Leon turned on the TV to see the news.
"… And what you are seeing, dear viewers, are live images. Right
now, an unstoppable woman who called herself 'Mirror' is
literally tearing apart the police force outside of the bank which
she has just robbed" announced a voice."This is bad" said Leon as he watched how the muscled woman
was lifting the police cars and breaking them in two with her
bare hands, while the police opened fire on her. "That what I
feared, has happened. There is a superwoman who is using her
abilities to commit crimes. I hope Alyssa can manage her. It
looks like she is invincible" said Leon."Witnesses inside the bank have confirmed that this Mirror
incapacitated our heroin Absolute Drainer and took her powers
and strength from her. The police is keeping a safe distance in
case this villainess want to increase her strength. Without our
heroin on the scene, who will save us?" said the reporter."This is terrible" said Leon, while he turned off the TV, because
he couldn't believe what he was hearing."What is terrible?" asked Samantha as she exited the kitchen
eating some ice cream."I wouldn't like to put this on your shoulders Samantha, but
something awful has happened and you are the only hope this
town has" said Leon very serious."Tell me what I need to do" said also serious Samantha.
Two hours later, Alyssa heard as two vans were parking outside.
This was the second time the thieves returned, so she knew that
another bank was robbed. She felt completely hopeless as she
was restricted to a bed even while she was too weak to even tie
her shoes.She heard at the thieves laughing at how easy it was for Mirror to
overpower the army that was sent to stop her during the robbery
at the second bank. Alyssa cried in silence as she heard that
Mirror had used her power to take the strength of some of the
soldiers."You won't believe the size of her muscles" said one of the
thieves to the guard outside Alyssa's room. "They are simply
huge. They look very intimidating in her 8 feet tall frame"."You two, stopping chatting and help at the others to download
the cargo. I will take care of the prisoner" said other male voice."I have orders to not allow at anyone to stay close to the
prisoner" said the guard."And I have orders from Mirror herself to check at her. If you
don't want me to go inside, that's fine, but you will explain to
her why I couldn't" said the other voice.A couple of whispers where heard and then the door was
unlocked. "Good. Now it will be better that you two help to
download the van. Mirror will be here in any moment" said the
other voice.As the man stepped inside, Alyssa noticed that he was one of the
thieves of the bank. The man locked the door after closing it.
"Are you alright?" he asked at Alyssa with a worried expression.The kindness of the thief took by surprise at Alyssa. "And why
do you care about me?" asked Alyssa."Because I'm your friend" giggled the man. "Leon sent me".
"Samantha?!" Alyssa gasped. She was astonished.
"Etheria please. You won't like it when I call you by your first
name, right, Absolute Drainer?" the man said."Right. I'm so glad that you're here. There is a woman…"
"Don't worry. I know everything about Mirror. Right now, we
need to focus on you. Are you badly injured?" the man asked."Nothing that my powers can't solve, but I don't have them
anymore. Mirror stole them from me" said Alyssa.The man checked his watch. "It's almost time. Grab my hand and
try to take a bit of my strength" said the man giving his hand to
Alyssa.Alyssa did what Samantha said and concentrated in transfer a
small part from the man. She gasped when she actually felt the
strength flowing toward her."Don't be greedy girl" said the man as he stumbled a bit for the
transference. "It seems that your power is back. Now hold my
hand tight while I abandon this body"Once Alyssa held tightly the man's hand, the ethereal form of
Samantha began to leave his body. "He's all yours" smiled
Samantha as she looked like a ghost.Without hesitating a moment, Alyssa concentrated and quickly
sucked all the strength from the man's body. He was only able to
sigh before collapsing – completed drained – on the floor."I feel much better now. All my injuries are healed, but still I'm
not strong enough to break lose of this restriction" said Alyssa."Let me help you out" said Samantha as her body turned solid.
Once Absolute Drainer was free again, Etheria told her what
happened while she was incapacitated. "When Leon saw the
news, we rushed to the scene where Mirror was. I used my
powers to possess one of the thieves and learn everything useful
from him" Samantha said."I learned that Mirror has the ability the swap powers with other
persons. You got her powers and she got yours. Since you didn't
know that, you couldn't swap your powers back" she said."Since I have my power back, that means that the swap is
temporally" said Alyssa."Exactly. That is why Mirror ordered to hold you as a prisoner.
To take your power again when she needs it" Samantha said.
Then, she took a small vial from her pocket that Alyssa knew
very well."Even with your powers, Mirror is far stronger than you. She was
able to take your strength because she caught you by surprise. If
you try to put a finger on her, she can make you a lot of damage.
That is why Leon gave this vial"."I must admit that Leon is a genius" smiled Alyssa.
"Indeed. Well, now let me tell you the plan to take Mirror down"
smiled Etheria.A couple of minutes later, Etheria left the room and quickly took
possession of another thief's body. She conducted him to
Absolute Drainer. Once the man was only skin and bones.
Alyssa's muscles looked like before but a lot less denser, but
there was nothing she could do to improve her curves."There are 5 more thieves. Do you want me to bring some
more?" said Samantha"Don't worry. I'm strong enough to do it by myself" grinned
Alyssa."Let me help you. You still can be hurt by bullets" Samantha
said, while taking her ghostly form.The thieves were counting their bounty when a young woman
appeared. "Hello boys. Let me introduce myself. I'm Etheria"
Samantha said.Immediately the men opened fired at her. Dozens of bullets flied
towards her and passed through her. "You can't hit me, but
certainly I can hit you!" smiled Etheria as she ran towards one of
the thieves.Using the training she received from Leon, Etheria kept her body
in ethereal form and only turned solid the parts of her body she
used to hit at the thieves. Bullets kept passing through her while
she punched and kicked the thieves at her will.The thieves were so distracted attacking at Etheria that Absolute
Drainer began to take them down one by one. A seven feet tall
Alyssa hugged at the last man from behind. Her tight embrace
made him expelled all the air out of his lungs as well as drain all
his muscles. They belonged to Absolute Drainer now."It's good to be strong again" said Alyssa as she flexed her arms.
Her muscles bulging with the strength she absorbed from the
thieves. "Now, if I can only get my curves back" she said,
touching her flat chest. Her pectoral muscles were incredible, but
still she wanted her large breasts back."Do you think I will be as strong as you, someday?" smiled
Samantha."If you eat all your vegetables, maybe you'll have a chance"
smiled Alyssa. Both women burst in laughter.Suddenly, the floor began to tremble. "Mirror must be
approaching. Are you ready, Etheria?" asked Absolute Drainer."I hope this works. She must be denser than you have ever been"
said Etheria."That's is true, but without the compressing formula her muscle
shouldn't be too dense. Now go" whispered Absolute Drainer
and Etheria vanished in a wall.Absolute Drainer gulped hard as the entire building was
trembling. She could see that Mirror had grown a lot. In fact, she
was completely naked. Her body was bigger than the doorframe.
Taller and Wider. Without ducking, Mirror walked inside the
building, destroying the hall with her invulnerable body. Her
breasts were huge and denting the concrete, as she walked
forward. The walls didn't stand a chance against her hard skin.Finally, Mirror reached the room where the bounty was. Her 11
feet tall frame covered in her inconceivably bulked muscles
made her into a shocking sight. She looked down to see her
drained minions and a healthy Absolute Drainer waiting for her.
"So, you find a way to free yourself and steal the strength of
some of my men, ah?" laughed Mirror. Her ominous voice
rumbled the whole room."Thanks for sparing me the problems of catching those men and
taking the only useful thing from them. It will be easier to take it
from one person only" she grinned."This is where you go wrong, Mirror. Now that I have my
powers back, I will claim what you took from me" said Absolute
Drainer."Not in this life. I'm the one who owns your power and let me
tell you that it's a great power. I lost the count of how many
officers and soldiers surrendered their strength to me. I'm at least
7 times more muscular than you have ever been, but I still don't
feel that powerful" said Mirror."You should have seen what these guns are capable of doing"
said Mirror, while flexing her arm. A mountain of pure muscle
sprouted on it. "I was able to carry a tank over my head and I
didn't feel its weight. Then I put some pressure on it and the
metal screamed in pain as I compressed it with my bare hands"."Then, I reduced an entire division of tanks into heavy metal
balls. The army decided to attack me from the air. I guess they
didn't were trained to confront hard turbulences because the air I
expelled from my lungs pushed them against each other making
them explode in the sky. It was a nice firework show" laughed
Mirror."Another thing that I enjoyed was to demonstrate how powerful
my body was" said Mirror, while she grabbed a gold bar from the
bounty. "It really turns me on, being able to do things like this"
she smiled as she gently pressed the gold bar against her bare
breast.She removed the bar and showed Absolute Drainer the deep
impression her breast left in the golden bar. "I can turn metal into
liquid if I apply a fraction of my strength. The resulting hot
liquid can't even bother me" Mirror laughed."But what I enjoyed the most was draining the beauty from
women. It was an utter orgasmic experience. I have reached the
most powerful orgasms in my life by siphoning all the beauty
and sexiness of 4 women. Their combined essence gave me this
mega voluptuous body" laughed Mirror while she was caressing
her large breasts. For Absolute Drainer, they looked like torpedo
heads."But if you are confident enough to take your strength and
beauty back from me" said Mirror, while Absolute Drainer began
to feel the same dizziness that hit her in the bank that morning. "I
invite you to come over and take it" she grinned.'She must have switched powers again. This is my chance'
thought Alyssa. "Showtime!!" she yelled.Quickly, the ethereal form of Etheria came out of the wall and
jumped toward Mirror. Mirror turned her body and tried to catch
at Etheria but their hands grabbed the air. Grinning, the young
heroin entered into Mirror's body through her breasts."Oh!!" purred Mirror. She began to caress her body and
especially her breasts."Etheria, is that you?" asked Absolute Drainer.
"Yes, it's me. Quickly give me the formula" said Mirror.
"Mirror's body is too dense to keep a possession for too long.
Still, it feels incredible. This body is hard and at the same time so
sensitive" gasped Mirror."Here is the formula. Drink it fast" said Absolute Drainer.
Mirror took the vial and gulped it down. "I'm feeling weaker. I
guess that the formula is working. Now is the time to move on"Etheria floated out of Mirror's body and got into Absolute
Drainer. 'Hello Alyssa' said Samantha mentally. 'While I was in
Mirror's body, I learned how you can activate her powers. I'm
now giving you that knowledge'Alyssa nodded in agreement and moments later, Samantha left
her body."Why have you done to me? I'm feeling weaker" said Mirror as
she grabbed Absolute Drainer by the neck and raised her into the
air. "You did something to me, but I won't let you take
advantage of it" said Mirror pressing tightly the heroin's neck."Your muscles are relaxed now. You can't apply more than the
strength of 2 average men. Since I have the strength of 7 average
men in me, you realize who is the stronger of the two, right?"
grinned Absolute Drainer.She knew that the formula will relax Mirror's muscles, but her
body still was invulnerable. 'Trying to hit at Mirror will only
result in hurting myself' thought Alyssa as she calmly await
Mirror's next move."Of course I do!! Once I drain all your muscle" grinned Mirror.
To her surprise, she found herself unable to do it."What's the matter, Mirror? Did you forget how to do it? Let me
show you" smiled Absolute Drainer as she easily broke Mirror's
grip and began to extract her strength."No!! My marvellous strength!!! Don't take it away from me!!"
gasped Mirror as her voluminous muscles were dwindling in
size. Then, she began to feel a heavy sleep falling upon her."I don't want to imagine the terror that you have unleashed in the
city. How many lives have being lost. At least your madness will
now come to an end" said Alyssa as she enjoyed the warm flow
of strength that was leaving Mirror's body.Mirror couldn't do anything to stop at Absolute Drainer while
she felt her eyes collapsing. Unable to say something, Mirror fell
into a deep sleep."Good thinking that Leo added some sleeping formula in the
vial. He thought that it will be easy for you to manage her
unconscious" said Samantha."Leon thinks of everything" said Alyssa hearing at Mirror
snorting. "With her out of the picture, I can rebuild my body
again to its former glory and more" she said.Absolute Drainer concentrated more and soon her curves began
to blossom again. All the femininity that Mirror snatched from
her was coming back and they were increased as well. She filled
out perfectly her outfit as her womanly proportions were
restored. Then, the outfit began to get very tight as she kept
getting more voluptuous with every passing second.Samantha only stared with devotion as Alyssa was growing
bigger and bigger. Her muscles practically exploding from every
extension of her body. Her increasing beauty only assured she
was becoming the most powerful woman alive.A couple of seconds later, the transfer stopped. "Why did you
stop?" asked Samantha since Mirror still had some muscles left
on her."I'm not sure, but I felt something. Something I hadn't felt
before" said Alyssa."What is it?" asked Samantha intrigued.
"It's hard to explain. I wonder if…" said Samantha as she closed
her eyes. Suddenly her eyes were wide open. "Quickly,
Samantha. Fuse with me and give me an ethereal form" she said
with hurry in her voice."Due to your new nature, I won't be able to keep you ethereal for
long" said Samantha."Understood. Now do it!!" Alyssa commanded.
Samantha quickly entered into Alyssa's body from behind.
Absolute Drainer turned into a ghost and without support, Mirror
fell flat into the ground. 'Now what?' asked mentally Samantha."This" said Alyssa as she stocked her hand inside Mirror's chest.
"It's nearby. I can almost feel it" said Alyssa as she scanned
Mirror's upper torso.'I can feel it too' said Samantha as her feelings were connected
to the ones of Alyssa. 'What is it?' she asked."I have a good idea" grinned Alyssa.
'Please, hurry. I'm getting weaker. I can't stay to long in your
body' said Samantha."I almost have it. Hold on a bit more" said Alyssa. Then, her
hand stopped. "I GOT IT!!!" exclaimed Alyssa as she felt an
energy source inside Mirror. She closed her fist and pulled out
her hand from Mirror's body, just in time to let at Samantha
stepped out."What did you find?" asked Samantha intrigued.
Alyssa opened her hand and a luminous pink big scale atom was
glowing over her palm. "I must know if this is what I think it's"
said Alyssa as her absorbing powers entered in action. The pink
atom melt in her hand and a wave of pure electricity hit her body."You are not going to believe this Samantha, but I was able to
yank the mere essence of Mirror power from her and merge it
with my own" smiled Alyssa."Really?" asked astonished Samantha.
"Why don't I show you?" said Alyssa.
"What was that?" gasped Samantha as she felt a momentarily
dizziness."That, my friend, is the confirmation that you now have Mirror's
and my own powers. Of course, that implies…" said Alyssa
turning ethereal. "That I have yours""Cool!!" said Samantha. Then her eyes were on Mirror. "May I…
you know…" she said a bit embarrassed."Go on Samantha. I have taken more than she took from me"
said Alyssa, taking the time to realize that she was beyond the 9
feet tall. Fortunately, Leon improved the muscle compression
formula. Otherwise I would have to give up these babies" said
Alyssa, while she was caressing her large breasts. She was sure
that she had become two cups bigger at least."Are you sure I can do it?" asked again Samantha feeling very
anxiously."You asked me if someday you could be as strong as me. Well, it
seems that you have taken a big step today" Alyssa smiled.Samantha blinked her an eye as she placed her hands over
Mirror. Soon, she felt the euphoria of being able to do what she
had always dreamed of doing. Her skin-tight outfit began to
stretch obscenely as her muscles sprouted and grew like popcorn
bags over the fire.Her muscle development was quickly followed by her curves
development. Her nice rear soon inflated with muscle giving her
an impressive view. Her legs grew longer and shapelier as more
muscle appeared. Her pectorals developed impressively pushing
even further her enlarging breasts.When Mirror was sexless and thinner, Samantha decided to let
her go. "Whoa Alyssa. Check me out!! I'm stacked!!" gasped
Samantha as she looked at her improved profile. "And, look at
my muscles. I should be the second strongest person on the
planet" she said, while she was admiring the size of her biceps."Definitely you are Samantha and now that you some muscle to
support you, there is no doubt that we will be able to keep this
city safe. Of course, if you still want to work with me as my
partner" said Alyssa."Sure!! I wouldn't want things to be any different" smiled
Samantha as she took out the muscle compression cream Leon
also gave her. As Samantha was applying the cream over Alyssa,
helping her to return to normal proportion, she added "Promise
me something…""What?" asked Alyssa.
"If we encounter other villainies, you will share some of their
powers with me, Okie dokie?" asked Samantha."Okie dokie artachokie" smiled Alyssa. Both women laugh
together.The End.
September 11, 2005 at 3:19 am #13158Trent HarlowParticipantExcellent story!!!!!!! I was a big fan of Disease and this was a great sequel. Please tell me there's more coming!!!
September 11, 2005 at 8:59 am #13159BlackKusanagiParticipantI was really feeling Mirror…but hey, ya win some…ya lose some. Cant wait for the next installment.
September 11, 2005 at 4:10 pm #13160AnonymousGuestHey, great story! It's interesting having the good guys going around draining people rather the usual evilness. I think the growth segments were very well described and the plot was interesting too. Thanks for posting it!
September 12, 2005 at 12:37 am #13161MaxParticipantThanks a lot for your words dear readers. I'm glad that you have enjoy this next installment of Alyssa's life. I can't assure you that this will become a steady universe to work with, but if people like, I can explore more this universe.
As you have seen, in this universe only women have powers. So, if you have any ideas of what to see in a future story with this two heroins and what dangers they can confront, please feel free to PM me.
Max
September 12, 2005 at 12:47 am #13162iceman75ParticipantYeah, it was a pretty good story, Max, would love to see more along these lines from you, I loved the muscle description and the feats of strength you had Mirror perform.
September 12, 2005 at 1:02 am #13163MaxParticipantThank you. I can't promise a next sequel, but if it would, it will have a lot more of strength feats. That will be for sure.
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Max
September 13, 2005 at 7:36 pm #13164Axel3.14ParticipantDoes this mean that Alyssa can extricate the powers of the villainesses she defeats? If so, it would be like Megaman, only hotter.
September 13, 2005 at 9:03 pm #13165Mark NewmanParticipantI really enjoyed this story. Thanks Max.
September 14, 2005 at 8:35 am #13166MaxParticipantThanks my friends for your support. I'm so glad of the comments this story received that I have decided to make a third one. This one will take place a couple of years in the future.
To answer your question Axel, yes Alyssa can now extract the powers of the villaness she defeat, but only with the help of Samantha. I guess that what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger ah?
I have some of the plot for the next installment already drafted, I almost have defined at the villaness of the next story, but I still looking forward of any ideas that people will like to see.
Axel and Mark, if you have ideas for the next part, I will be more than glad to hear them.
Thanks again for your appreciation.
Max
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