[Anonymous]

THREE   STRANGERS   CAME  RIDING  INTO  TOWN  .  THE  FOLKS   OF   COWTOWN  JUST  STARRED   AS  THEY  PASSED  BY  ON  THERE  HORSES  .    THEN  ONE  OF  THE   STRANGERS  CALLED  OUT  "  WHERE  CAN  A  GUY  FIND  A  GOOD  DRINK  AT?   UH  !  UH !   GO  ON THRU  TOWN  , YOU  FIND  THE  SALOON     ON THE  RIGHT  THERE " JOHNNY  THE  SHOP  KEEPER  BLURTED  OUT"    AND  SO  THE  FOLKS  WATCHED  AS  THE  THREE  STRANGERS  WENT  AROUND  THE  BEND   TO  THE  SALOON .                                                                                            WHEN   THEY  GOT   TO  THE  SALOON  , THEY  TIED   THERE   HORSES  UP  .   THE   THREE  STRANGERS   SLOWLY   PASSED  THRU  THE  SWINGING  DOORS.   THEY  STOPPED   AN  LOOKED  AROUND  FOR   LITTLEBIT  .  FIRST  STRANGER  SAID  "  I  THINK  I'D  RATHER  HAVE  ME  A  WHISKEY,  OK  "  SUIT   YOURSELF  STRANGER   3   SAID "   3   WENT ON  SAYING  I  JUST  WANNA  BEER  "   STRANGER   2  SAID"  I  WANNA  ME  A  WOMAN  WITH  MY  BEER"   HE  WENT  TO  EYEING  THE  SALOON  GALS   LOOKING  THEM  UP  AN  DOWN .   HE  FINALLY  SPOTTED   ONE  OVER  TO  HERSELF   WRITING  ON  A  PIECE  OF  PAPER  .   STRANGER   2  WALKED   OVER   BEHIND  HER   , BENT  DOWN  BREATHING  HEAVY    ON  HER  AN  SAID"  HEY  HUNNY   JOIN  ME  IN  A  DRINK .   SHE   WHIRRED   AROUND  AN  SAID  "  SORRY  , I  WAS  PUTTING  MY  TIME  DOWN  ITS  GOING  HOME  TIME  FOR  ME  , THERES  PLENTY  MORE  OF  US  GALS  TO  CHOOSE  FROM.                   NOW   2   STRANGER  WAS  USED  TO  GETTING  WHAT  HE  WANTED  , HE  WAS  NOT  GONNA   LEAVE  THIS  SALOON  GAL  ALONE. HE   THEN  PLACED  HIS  HAND  ON  HER  SHOULDER   AND  SAID  AGAIN  , JOIN  ME  IN  A  DRINK.  NOOOO!  SAID THE  SALOON  GAL  AGAIN.  SORRY!  "  ITS  MY  TIME  OFF   NOW  , SAID  THE  GAL  "                      JUST   THEN  THE  SHERRIF   CAME  WALKING  THRU  THE  DOORS , HEY  ROSE   YOU  ALRIGHT  ?  YES  SHERRIF     "  THIS  GUY   JUST  ASKED  ME  TO  JOIN  HIM , BUT  ITS  MY  TIME  OFF"   ROSE  SAID,  HEY  SON  THE  SHERRIF  SAID  "  WE  GOT  PLENTY  MORE  LADIES  TO  CHOOSE  FROM.   OK  SHERRIF  "  SAID  THE  STRANGER   2  WITH  A  LITTLE  SNARL  TONE  IN HIS  VOICE  "   AS  HE  WALKED  AWAY  HE TURNED   AROUND  LOOKING  AT  ROSE  REAL  HARD.                                          WELL   ROSE   HEADED    ON  OUT   THE    DOORS   GOING   HOME   , SHE  LIVED  A  LITTLE  WAYS  OUTSIDE   THE  TOWN .  SHE  ALWAYS   ENJOYED  THE  WALK   HOME  .   AS  SHE   WAS  ABOUT   TO  STEP  UP  ON  HER  PORCH   SHE  HEARD   SOMEONE  CLEAR  THERE   THROAT  .    SHE  TURNED   TO  SEE  WHO  IT  WAS  , IT  WAS  STRANGER   TWO    .  HEY  LADY   I  STILL  WANT  THAT  DRINK   WITH  YOU  .   ALRIGHT   ROSE  SAID"      I  TOLD  YOU  PLAIN  AN  SIMPLE  I'M  OFF  WORK   NOW  ,  SO  PLEASE  GO  ON  .                                                              THE   STRANGER  JUST  STOOD   LOOKING  AT  HER   FOR  LITTLBIT  , THEN   HE  WALKED  UP  TO  HER  , AND  SLAPPED  HER  DOWN  ON THE  GROUND  , SOMEONE  HELP  ME  !   ROSE   HOLLERED   OUT  "  PLEASE  SOMEONE  HELP"   HE  KICKED  HER  IN  THE  GUT  , OOOHH!    SHE  SCREAMED  OUT  !      PLEASE  LEAVE  ME  ALONE  , PLEASE  !  I;VE  DONE  NOTHING  TO  YOU  ROSE   HOLLERED  OUT"  YOU  DIDN'T  DRINK  WITH  ME   STRANGER   TWO SAID"   I  GAVE  YOU  A  CHANCE  TO  , NOW  YOU  GOTTA  PAY  THE  PRICE  YOU  WHORE!  THEN  HE   DRAWED   BACK  WITH  HIS  FIST  AN  SMACKED  HER   IN  THE  JAW  REAL  HARD  , SHE  PASSED  OUT  AFTER   THAT  .                                  HE  LAYED  HER  ACROSS   HIS  HORSE   AND    RODE   OUT  OF  TOWN   .  HE   FINALLY   GOT    TO    DRY  FLATS   A  DESSERT    THAT   FOLKS  SAY   HAS   NO  END   ,MANY  HAVE  ENTERED  WITH  NO  RETURN  .                                                                                            THE   STRANGER   STOPPED  AFTER  HE  RODE  ABOUT  A  MILE  INTO  THE  FLATS  , THEN  HE   THROWED   ROSE  OFF  THE  HORSE  , AND  RODE   BACK   TO   TOWN.                                                                   AFTER    TWO   HOURS   ROSE  WOKE  UP   OHHH   MY  ACHING  HEAD  SHE  SAID  "   OUT   LOUD.     AHH!   WHERE  AM  I   SHE   THOUGHT?    LOOKS   LIKE  A  DESERT. SHE  TRIED  TO  RAISE  UP  BUT  WAS  WEAK  FROM  BEING  HIT  IN THE  STOMACH  , SHE  STAGGERED  FOR  LITTLBIT  , TRYING  TO  GET  HER  BERINGS. FINALLY  AFTER  LOOKING  AROUND  , SHE  HEADED   WEST  , WHAT  SHE  DIDN'T  KNOW  SHE  WAS  GOING  THE  WRONG  DIRECTION  TO  TOWN.  SHE  WAS  HEADED  STRAIGHT   INTO   DRY  FLATS.  WHERE    FEW  FOLK  HAS   SURVIVED.                                                                                         SHE   KEPT  STUMBLING  ALONG  , SHE  COULD  HARDLY  SEE   WHERE  SHE  WAS   GOING   BECAUSE  OF  THE  BLOOD  THAT  HAD  RUN  DOWN  INTO  HER  EYES .  ABOUT  2  HOURS  TIME  PAST  SHE  TRIPPED  OVER  A  ROCK  SHE  DIDN'T    NOTICE   IN  FRONT  OF  HER  ., OOOHHHH  !  SHE  FELL  RIGHT  ON  TOP  OF  HER  ARM  OVER  SOME  KNOBBY  ROCKS .  SHE  STARTED  CRYING  THINKING  ABOUT  HOW SHE  WISHED  SHE  WAS  HOME  IN  BED  .  ALL  OF  A  SUDDEN  SHE  HEARD  THIS  RUSTLING   ABOUT   100  YARDS  IN  FRONT  OF  HER  , SHE  KNELT  DOWN  BEHIND  A  BIG  ROCK  WATCHING  TO  SEE  IF  SHE  COULD  SEE  ANYTHING  .                         ABOUT   20  MINUTES   SHE  SEEN  A  DARK  SHADOW  COMING  TOWARD  HER .                                                                                  SHE    KEPT  WATCHING  THE  SHADOW  AS  IT  GOT  CLOSER  AN  CLOSER.  TEARS  WELLED  UP  IN  HER  EYES  , FINALLY   ROSE  CRIED  OUT"  PLEASE   DON'T  HURT  ME  ! PLEASE  !  I'VE  DONE  NOTHING  TO  YOU  !  ALL  OF  A  SUDDEN   A  SWEET  VOICE  CALLED  BACK  TO  HER  FROM  THE  SHADOW  , SHE  WAS  BEGINNING  TO  MAKE  IT  OUT  TO  BE  A  SMALL  WOMAN.  "MY  CHILD   , I'M  HERE  TO  HELP  YOU  !  PLEASE  DO  NOT  BE  AFRAID  "   ROSE  FINALLY  MADE  THE  SHADOW  OUT  TO  BE  A  SHORT  INDIAN  LADY.  ROSE  GOT  UP  AN  WENT  AN  HUGGED  THE  OLD  INDIAN  LADY  , CRYING  DURING  THE  TIME  TOO!THE    INDIAN  LADY   TOOK  ROSE  BY  THE  HAND  AND  LED  HER  DEEP  INTO  THE  DESERT  ROCK  FORMATIONS, SHE  FINALLY  LED  HER  INTO  A  DEEP  CAVE  ,  CHILD  I'VE  LIVED   HERE  FOR   OVER  A  100    YEARS  .  I  KNOW  YOUR  SURPRISED  BY  THE  YEARS  I'VE  LIVED  , HOLD  ON , ALL  YOUR  QUESTIONS  WILL  BE  ANSWERED  SOON.            THEY    FINALLY  CAME  TO  WHERE THE  OLD  INDIAN  LADY  LIVED  AT  IN  THE  CAVE   ,  SHE  MOTIONED  FOR  HER  TO  FOLLOW  HER   TO  A  SMALL  OPENING  IN  HER  LIVING  SPACE  .          AS  SHE  FOLLOWED  THE  SPACE   KEPT  GETTING  WIDER   AND  WIDER, TIL  FINALLY    SHE  SPOTTED  WHAT  LOOKED  LIKED  DIAMONDS   ALL  OVER  THE  CEILING  AND  WALLS  OF  THE  CAVE.  ROSE   SAID"  THIS  IS  BEAUTIFUL   ".     MY  CHILD  SEE  THE  SPRING  DOWN  THERE ? , IT'S  WARM , GO   DOWN  THERE   AND  WASH  YOUR  WOUNDS    .   THE  WATER   HAS  STRANGE HEALING   EFFECTS   IN  IT   , YOU  WILL  FEEL  IT  WORKING  NOT  LONG  AFTER  YOU  HAVE  BATHED .  SO  ROSE   DONE  AS  THE  INDIAN  LADY  REQUESTED  ,  SHE  TOOK  HER  CLOTHES  OFF   ,  LOOKING  AT  ALL  THE  BLOOD  AND  BRUISES    , SHE  SLOWLY  EASED  INTO  THE  SPRING  , SHE  THOUGHT  "  THIS  FEELS  SO  NICE  ."    SHE   JUST  LAYED  IN  THE  WATER  FOR  A  LITTLEBIT  , BECAUSE  IT  FELT  SO  GOOD  TO  HER  WOUNDS  AND  BRUISES  , ALL  THE  WHILE  SHE  WAS  THINKING  HOW  THE  SECOND  STRANGER   SHOULD  BE  PUNISHED .  SURE  ENOUGH   SHE  WENT  TO  FEELING  STRANGE   ALL  OVER  , TINGLY  .   SHE  FELL  INTO  A  DEEP  SLEEP  .                                                         AFTER   AWHILE    ,  SHE  AWOKE  !  SHE  WAS  STARTLED   , CAUSE  SHE  HAD  FORGOT  SHE  WAS  IN THE  SPRING  WASHING  HER  WOUNDS.  AS  MATTER  A  FACT  SHE  DIDN'T  SEE  NO  OPEN  WOUNDS  WHERE  THE  SECOND  STRANGER  HAD  HIT  HER. " WHAT  IS  GOING  ON ? "  SHE  SAID  ALOUD  .   THE  OLD  INDIAN  LADY  WAS  CLOSE  BY  ,  AN  SAID"  " MY  CHILD  I  TOLD  YOU  ALL  YOUR  QUESTIONS  ABOUT  ME  WOULD  BE  ANSWERED  "  NOW  DO  YOU  SEE   WHY  I'VE  LIVED  SO  LONG  HERE  IN  THE  DESERT  ?    ROSE  THOUGHT  FOR  A  LITTLEBIT  ,  YES  SOMETHING  IN  THE  SPRING  , ITS  LIKE  MEDICINE.                                                                            AS   ROSE  AND  THE  INDIAN  LADY  HEADED  BACK  TO  HER  LIVING  SPACE  IN  THE  CAVES  ,THE  OLD  INDIAN  LADY  TOLD  HOW  SHE  CAME  ABOUT  THIS  PLACE  , SHE  TOLD  HOW  HER  TRIBE  HAD  CAST  HER  OUT  CAUSE  SHE  COULDN'T  BEAR   CHILDREN  , THEY  BROUGHT  HER  TO  DRY  FLATS  TO  DIE  .  WELL  MY  CHILD  MY  TRIBE  HAS  LONG  BEEN  GONE  , YOU  SEE  I'M  ALIVE  AN  WELL  ALL  BECAUSE  OF  THE  SPECIAL  SPRING  .                                                AS  THEY  SQUEEZED   BACK  THRU  THE  CRACK  IN THE  WALL  TO  HER  LIVING  AREA  SHE  NOTICED  THE  OLD  LADY  HAD  FIXED  SOMETHING  TO  EAT   AND  A   BED  FOR  HER  TOO!    THANKYOU  SO  MUCH   INDIAN  LADY  SHE  SAID"   CHILD  JUST  CALL  ME   SWANNEE, THAT  WAS  MY  NAME  IN THE  TRIBE  I  WAS  IN  .  THATS  A  BEAUTIFUL  NAME  ROSE  ANSWERED  BACK"                                         THEY  GOT  THRU  EATING  AND   THE  INDIAN  LADY  MOTIONED  HER  TO  LAY  DOWN  , THAT SHE  WOULD  HELP  HER  GET  BACK  HOME  TOMORROW  .SHE  LAY  THERE  THINKING  ABOUT  HOW  NICE  THE  CAVE  WAS   WHERE  SHE  TOOK  HER  BATH  AT  IN  THE  WARM  SPRINGS  , SHE  STILL  FELT  THE  TINGLY  SENSATION   ALL  THRU  HER  BODY  , BUT  JUST  KEPT  IT  TO  HER  SELF  , SHE  FINALLY  DOSED   OFF  ASLEEP .                                                                      THE   NEXT   MORNING  SHE   YAWNED  AAAAAHHHHHH!   SHE   SAID   AAAAAHHHH  AGAIN !   SHE  THOUGHT  "  WHY  IS  MY  VOICE  DEEPER?  SHE  OPENED  HER  EYES  AN  LOOKED  AROUND  , THEN  NOTICED  HERSELF  .  MY  LORD  WHATS  HAPPENED  TO  ME!!!!!  OH  ME  , I'M  ALL  SWELLED  UP  , I  GOTTA  FIND  THE  INDIAN  LADY  QUICK  ! I'M  SICK! BUT  AS  SHE  GOT  UP  TO  GET  HER  CLOTHES  ON  SHE  NOTICED  SHE  DIDN'T  FEEL  SORE ANYWHERE .  SHE  NOTICED  SHE  FELT  MUCH  STRONGER TOO! , THEN  SHE  WENT  TO  EXAMINING   HERSELF  , STARTED   FLEXING  HER  ARMS  , I  GOT  MUSCLES  LIKE  A  MAN ROSE  THOUGHT"  MY  LOOK  HOW  BIG  THEY  ARE  , SHE   SAID   TO  HERSELF"AND LOOK AT  THE  SIZE OF  MY  LEGS , THERE  BIGGER  THAN  A  HORSES  LEGS. DAMN !   MY  TITS  GOT  BIGGER  TOO!NOW  THE  GUYS  BACK  AT  THE  SALOON  IS  GONNA  HAVE  SOME  FUN  WITH  THEM. THEN  SHE  REMEMBERED  THAT  STRANGE  TINGLY   SENSATION  SHE  FELT  THROUGHOUT   HER  BODY  LAST  NITE.  THAT  EXPLAINS  IT  ROSE  THOUGHT  "  HOW  IS  SHE  GONNA  EXPLAIN  TO  HER  FRIENDS  BACK  IN  TOWN  WHAT  HAD  HAPPENED  TO  HER  ?HOW  AM  I  GONNA  FACE  THEM  WITH   THE  BIG  MUSCLED  BODY  LIKE  THIS  ? MAYBE  SWANNEE  CAN  HELP   ME.   AFTER   SWANNEE    HELPS   ME  TO   FIGUIRE   OUT  WHAT  TO  DO   , THERES  A  CERTAIN   GUY   I  NEED   TO  TAKE  CARE   OF.  PAY    BACK   TIME!                              SWANNEE    WALKED   BACK  OUT   TO   THE  ENTRANCE   OF  THE    CAVE   WALKED   OUT  INTO  OPEN    MAKING  HER   WAY    AROUND  THE      ROCKS   .   SHE  SPOTTED   HER   TWO   HORSES   ,  WALKED  OVER   WENT  TO  PETTING  THEM   .  WELL   JACK   AND  MOLLY  I  GOTTA  LET  ONE  OF  YOU  GO  , THERES   A  LADY  IN  THE   CAVE   NEEDING   TO  GET  BACK  HOME  .   SHE  NEEDS  OUR  HELP   .     SHE   WIPED  A  FEW  TEARS   AWAY   THINKING  ABOUT  GIVING   UP  ONE  OF  HER  FRIENDS  . SHE  DIDN;T     HEAR   ROSE  COMING  UP  BEHIND  HER.  NO   YOU  WON;T  EITHER   SWANNEE,  ROSE  SAID!    SWANNEE  TURNED  AROUND  REAL  QUICK.  MY  CHILD  LOOK  HOW  YOU  HAVE  GROWN  .  I  TOLD  YOU  THE  SPRING  WAS  SPECIAL.   YES  YOU  DID  ,  BUT  I  DIDN'T  KNOW  HOW  SPECIAL  IT  WAS.  SWANNEE  DON'T  GIVE UP  YOUR  FRIEND ,  LOOK  HOW  STRONG  AND  POWERFUL  I  AM  NOW.  I'LL  JUST  WALK  BACK  TO  THE  CITY  .  CHILD!!!!!!!!  NO  SWANNEE   SAID  ROSE.  I HAVE  GREAT  STRENGTH   NOW  I  CAN  TAKE  THAT  LONG  WALK.  OK  ROSE  ,  YOU  JUST  BECAREFUL  FOR  WILD  ANIMALS  ON  YOUR  WAY  BACK  TO  TOWN  !  WITH  THAT  SWANNE  GAVE  HER  A  LONG  HUG  GOODBYE , I  LOVE  YOU  MY  FRIEND SEE  YOU   SOON  AGAIN   SOMETIME  ,  YES  YOU  WILL  SWANNEE  ROSE  SAID"WITH  THAT  SHE  GRABBED A  BAG  OF  FOOD  SWANNEE   FIXED  FOR  HER  AND  HEADED  TOWARD  TOWN .  LOOK   FOR  THE  FURTHER     ADVENTURES   OF   DESERT  ROSE!!!!!!

[Axel3.14]

keep going…

[Anonymous]

folks please be patient with me it takes time to do a good story . THANKYOU! 🙂

[Lingster]

folks please be patient with me it takes time to do a good story . THANKYOU! 🙂

It’s good, but please use caps appropriately. It’s difficult to read as is.

[X-Greg]

Interesting beginning, and no transformation yet…you want to kill us !!!

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