First attempt at a story

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  • #16702
    gblock01
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    I didn't expect a version of the serum to work so fast. This new section is definitely entertaining, showing that it takes more than brawn to fight. It also requires a substantial amount of luck.  😉

    #16703
    El_Roy_1999
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    And bricks.

    #16704
    gblock01
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    Yeah… That too… 😳

    #16705
    alex
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    Excellent!  This story is developing great!

    #16706
    El_Roy_1999
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    The End is near!!! Well, the showdown is.

    Rescue mission

    Meanwhile, Kim was still sitting in her cell. She was bored and very annoyed with the whole situation. Indeed, her position was very awkward: she was sure to spend the next weeks in jail. Meanwhile, Louisa would do whatever she was up to and at the same time, destroy Kim’s reputation permanently. Out of despair, she tried to bend the prison bars, but failed to budge them more than an inch apart. Since she was innocent, it seemed best not to pile on offences. Besides, she was vaguely aware of the fact that the police would lock her into a fully closed cell. This way, she could at least enjoy the sights. It wasn’t much, but at least it helped fighting boredom.
    Outside, more policemen were arriving. The officers who had arrested her were boasting about their desperate struggle. Somehow, Kim felt a touch of pride when she was described as a “powerhouse”. After the big storytelling, some of the officers came to take a look at her. She felt like an animal in a cage. She looked at them in disgust, when she recognised two of the watchers: They were those who had interviewed her after the burglary.
    Kim quickly approached the bars, forcing the policemen to recoil in fear.
    “Hey! It’s me. Kim Carland. You’re the officers who saved me from the burglars. Can’t you tell them it wasn’t me who did whatever I’m in for?”
    “You’re accused of robbing the central bank yesterday. But say…” Her voice trailed off. She pulled out her cell phone and called someone.
    “Hi, it’s Mia. Weren’t you put on patrol yesterday? In the noble district, that’s right. What did you see at the house with the burglary? Yes, I know it’s creepy. But you did see a blonde woman and a guy fucking all night? You did. Great. I don’t care if it was a pretty sight or not. I’ll have the captain call you later.”
    The policewoman addressed Kim:
    “It looks as if you’re lucky. A good friend of mine can vouch for your presence. I’ll talk to the captain to get you out of your predicament as quickly as possible.”
    “Thanks a lot!” Kim was elated. Everything was going to work out. The officer left quickly to talk to her superior.
    Kim sat back down, being gaped at by a growing mass of people. Apparently, the recent surge of musclewomen had caused quite an uproar. Minutes later, officer Mia returned, pushed the audience aside and tried to make herself heard. She shouted: “Okay, you can go. It’s been cleared up!” and pushed the opening button for the electric cell door. The door opened for four inches, when the lights went out. All electrical equipment stopped working. Instantly, the shouting increased. Flashlights went on, as did cell phone displays.
    Outside, Nina stopped her car. They got out quickly, the city swathed into darkness. Jacob looked around, ran to the police station’s door and opened it. He was greeted by a wave of utter confusion. Due to a total power loss, the phone lines were dead, as were the cell phone masts. Grabbing the next police officer, he quickly asked him about the cell block and ran down the hall. Nina came in seconds later, provoking instant hostile reactions. She put up her hands and shouted a short explanation of her innocence at her gun-toting spectators.
    When Jacob finally arrived at the cells, the police officers had mostly left the area. Only the young policewoman remained, trying to get Kim out of the cell. As they pushed at the cell door together, it slowly started to give way. He joined in, helping them free his beloved. At last, the door was open wide enough for Kim to get through. She explained the situation as good as she could, while Jacob informed her about the attack. Finally, Nina arrived, screaming at passing officers that she was indeed innocent, that she was meeting a friend who was just as innocent as she was, and that it would be best for everyone to do their job and put the power back on.
    Minutes later, they left the station, driving to Louisa’s home. They had quickly decided to talk to her, and to stop her if possible.

    #16707
    gblock01
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    Good set up. I'm guessing that you are going to have the vilainess do a man monologue ( :wink:) before the final showdown?
    How much growth can we expect to see?

    #16708
    El_Roy_1999
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    Two shorter ones for today!

    Act of war

    Louisa was enjoying herself endlessly. Her troops had seized all vital points in the city. All around her, civil order was caving in, yet widespread panic had not yet started. She was calmly rehearsing the speech she would give on the radio. Controlling the capital meant controlling the state, thus providing her with an excellent base for further expansion. Having cut off the state’s government and it’s military and political elite (mostly by killing them at the order’s headquarters), she had all the threads in hand. Louisa had clearly inherited her father’s ruthlessness which had then be honed to perfection by the permanent repulsion she was met with after her mother’s death.
    Marrying Kim had only deepened the emotional chasm between her and her father. However, bringing this country to his knees would definitely qualify as a masterpiece of strategy. Still, there were two things that were bugging her. First, Nina. Apparently, she had repelled her agents’ attack and even managed to defeat them. Clearly, Louisa should have monitored her accomplices more closely. The damage was done, and it was evident that she would have to face her three opponents later on. She was just getting everything prepared.
    The second thing that made her wonder was that she slowly realised that she had no real plan for after the operation. She had devised an outrageous number of scenarios for escaping in the event of a premature discovery or failure, but oddly enough, she was unsure about what to do next. Her ideas had been quite vague on this subject. She could either proclaim herself mistress of the whole state and create a dictatorship, or just steal all the money she could find and most property certificates and be incredibly rich for the rest of her life. The problem was that she neither had any real interest in administrating a country (she couldn’t care less about politics) nor was she in need of any further money.
    Still, she could at least turn Kim and Jacob’s life into an endless misery. She had already sent copies of the information to the local newspapers, who would probably run the story once this shock was over. The more she thought about it, the clearer her goal became: She would show the world what she was capable of and vanish, but still remain a constant threat to everybody.
    This was ideal: She would expand her army and keep all the options for herself. She would rule the world by fear. Best of all, she would get her revenge. Tomorrow!

    The cavalry

    Meanwhile, Nina was driving her car through the blackened city. First signs of beginning riots were visible. Some of the windows in the area had been smashed, sirens of the fire department were audible. People were on the street, trying to leave the city, but invariably getting stuck in the traffic. Luckily, Louisa’s house was close to the old city centre, where no one wanted to go right now.
    The two girls sat on the front seats of the car, horribly cramped together. Their shoulders touched each other every time Nina switched the gear. Seeing the enormous mountains of muscle quiver at every obstacle gave Jacob a very comfortable hard-on. He silently wondered if he would be able to convince the girls to have a threesome. Kim tried to turn around, but only caused Nina to protest loudly. Watching Jacob in the rear-view mirror, she scolded him and added:
    “Did you know that I thought that you were the messed up kid in your family? I really couldn’t have imagined that your sister was this crazy.”
    “I really don’t know what got into her. She was always a scheming little monster, but this is way too large!”
    Suddenly, Nina interrupted them:
    “I wasn’t aware that the whole area was enclosed. Look at this: they blocked the access road and these buildings actually look like watch-towers, don’t they?”
    Indeed, the whole area around Louisa’s place was now joined together. This had always been the case, but the previously visible access ways had been shut by barricades and barbed wire, making an entry difficult. On the up-to-mention buildings, the dark shadows of further soldier-women were visible.
    Nina stopped the car, hiding it in an alley. They got out, albeit slowly, and hid in the darkness. Nina wondered:
    “How do we get in? This should have been easier. We’re no secret agents!”
    The other two nodded. As they thought about what to do next, the ground started to shake. At first only gently, it became stronger and stronger, until loud mechanical noise announced the arrival of the state militia. As the first tanks appeared in the distance, two of the warriors on the watchtower picked up a large weapon and opened fire. Instantly, the air was filled with explosions. Jacob and the girls hid further down the alley, but were suddenly faced with the option of climbing up a fire escape.
    Minutes later, they were on the roof of a tall warehouse close to the compound. Below them, the first assault smashed into the fierce defence. The ground was shaking, explosions boomed and militia soldiers desperately tried to avoid getting killed. Watching the other side of the building, they realised that the assault was attracting the attention of the guards. They slowly started climbing down, thus entering the area. Once again, the girls’ strength came in handy, allowing them to descend safely by using the various handholds of the ancient brick buildings.

    #16709
    gblock01
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    Unfortunately, I will miss out on any additional installments for the next five days, due to Thanksgiving. I really regret that I won't get to see another growth scene for a while. Still, this is a great story, and definitely worth the wait.

    #16710
    El_Roy_1999
    Participant

    GROWTH!

    Into the lair

    Kim, Nina and Jacob ran quickly into the shadows of the buildings surrounding Louisa’s home. The guards seemed occupied with the assaulting militia, easily holding them off from even reaching the gate. The three intruders sneaked around the building, finally coming in sight of the loft. It’s door was being guarded by two muscular women, wearing cumbersome suits of armour, composed of layers of impact-resistant plastic plates. This gave them a somewhat insect-like appearance. The matted black armour suits were completed by a fully enclosed helmet, including a large helmet. Each of them carried a large-calibre rifle, apparently designed to fire explosive shells similar to those causing mayhem outside the compound. Also, the strange tubes of red liquid were visible on their backs. They had not yet discovered the intruders. Jacob muttered:
    “I don’t think bricks will suffice this time…” Nina gave him a worried look. “But I guess I could cause a distraction. You could try to get in and stop Louisa.”
    Kim grabbed his arm.
    “I won’t let you. You’ll get killed. Let’s just wait until the military resolves this situation. They’ll be in here any moment.” Outside, a large cloud of smoke rose. Pieces of a large war machine, probably a tank, rained down. Nina looked at the pair sternly.
    “I don’t think they’ll make it. But I have an idea: Jacob, if you could just lure them over there,” she pointed at a large industrial age warehouse, “we could try to beat them. We just need to use the element of surprise.”
    Kim stared at her friend in disbelief. Nina had definitely changed during the last months.
    “And how do we stop them? They wear armour! And they look as strong as me.”
    Nina lifted her sports bag, showing them the rifles and the harness she had brought with her. She pulled it out and took off her T-shirt. Her large, heavy breasts spilled out, instantly covered in goose bumps. She noticed the others’ admiring stares, flaunting her full figure quickly. She then tried to put on the harness. However, her enormously broad shoulders got in the way, giving Jacob the chance to help her while at the same time touching her muscular back. Finally, she closed the harness, arranging the broad strips of clothing that held it together over her nipples. She felt a little more dressed this way. She grinned broadly:
    “I’m starting to look more like a superhero, don’t I? Okay, Jacob, you can be on your way. Kim, I need you to help me. If they turn their backs on us, I’ll lift you and you’ll kick them in their heads as strongly as possible.”
    “And how am I going to get through their helmets?”
    “You won’t need to. I’ll give you enough impetus to knock them out.”
    Jacob slowly walked away, desperate to keep an eye on Nina. He knew what was to come. Kim didn’t, and asked:
    “How exactly are you going to give me this impetus? You’re strong, but I’m quite bulky myself!”
    Jacob’s near-permanent erection started to throb again.
    “Like this!” With this, Nina thrust her head back, activating the harnesses’ mechanism. She felt strange stings of pain in her bag as the little containers emptied into her already powerful muscles. She then looked down, waiting for the chemical to activate. Jacob was soon noticed by the guards, who quickly lifted their weapons. He dived into the warehouse seconds before they opened fire.
    Suddenly, Nina was wracked by pain. She gritted her teeth, desperate not to scream. This was definitely working fast! All over her body, little electrical surges seemed to dance, causing her muscles to spasm. Every jerking movement caused her body to grow. The muscles on her body, already large and heavy, started to expand. She felt her chest expand, slowly blocking her feet from view. She tried to watch her shoulders, but somehow found it difficult to turn her head as her neck muscles expanded, pushing against her ears. Her shoulders gradually became basketball sized, her arms pushed into a 45° angle by her now-enormous lateral muscles. She admired her melon-sized biceps out of the corner of her eye, looking down on the massive cones of her forearms.
    She felt that she had used up a lot of energy in her transformation, and was now hungry. She was also very horny. She lowered her hand to her crotch, ready to help herself, when she realised that Kim was staring at her.
    “I have never, ever seen anything remotely like this!” Nina looked at her reflection in a grimy window and was awed. She was bigger than anything. Bigger than Diego, bigger than any living man on earth. She was quite certainly the most muscular human ever to exist. She stepped back a little to admire her whole body in the reflection. She had definitely lost a lot of her baby-fat, causing her baseball-sized abdominals to appear under the skin. She had, however, kept her large legs. They still brushed together when she walked, but seemed much more solid than before. She smiled lustfully at Kim:
    “Me neither. And I love it!”
    Just as she turned to the window again, they heard Jacob scream for help. Instantly, Nina grabbed Kim, easily lifting her, and started off to the warehouse.

    #16711
    Fonk
    Participant

    Fantastic growth sequence there, Mr. El! I can't wait to see how this turns out. 😀

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