gamma pt. 29(nsfw)

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  • March 2, 2009 at 10:13 am #80819
    bri159
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    here's the latest part gang. hope you like it. i'm definitely pushing the envelope with this one.

    brian

    http://www.brawna.org/stories/gamma-pt-1/gamma-pt-29

    March 3, 2009 at 5:10 am #80820
    SammiChung
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    Hmmmm, not bad…but was hoping Ivan had more of a part in it then just being a living…er dead dildo… XD though I know you obviously have something planned…maybe Ivan isn't really 'dead' at all and can heal like Wolverine or something… but it wasn't a bad little read…

    March 3, 2009 at 7:46 pm #80821
    bri159
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    human dildo. i like that. and you're right, Ivan's story isn't over yet. i won't go into details but he has some more miles to go.

    brian

    March 4, 2009 at 7:53 pm #80822
    bri159
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    hey guys here is the updated link in case the other one didn't work.

    http://www.brawna.org/stories/gamma-pt-1/gamma-pt-29nsfw

    March 5, 2009 at 5:58 am #80823
    Samurai
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    As always, I love this story.

    But I felt as I was reading it, that Jess was WAY to forward with how she was around Ivan. I know he gives off that "Scent" that drives her crazy, but I could tell it was off character. Maybe that's how it was suppose to work? Maybe it was just awkward to put into the story that soon? Idk. I 'm just putting input in.

    I still love each installment. Somedays I just lurk on here to see if you posted the next one. =]

    March 5, 2009 at 6:55 am #80824
    bri159
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    well i appreciate all the love. it was a bit rushed for jess to act so forward. in retrospect i should have had more interatction with them. the "scent" was definitely intended which i will get into more next chapter. that's awesome that you enjoy the story so much. it makes me feel really good that someone other than me enjoys my stuff. lol

    brian

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