Magic iPhone

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  • September 13, 2009 at 11:41 pm #86759
    ratlaf
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    Not to be confused with the Voodoo iPhone story.  This is my fan-fic building upon that story, and one other too… ;D 

    http://ratlaf.deviantart.com/art/Magic-iPhone-Part-1-136911813

    http://ratlaf.deviantart.com/art/Magic-iPhone-Part-2-136912915

    Enjoy!
    8)

    September 14, 2009 at 1:14 am #86760
    Cowprobe
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    Some earlier themes of yours showing up in this story took me by surprise.

    I liked the broadening of your other tales by their connection to this one.  🙂

    September 16, 2009 at 10:37 pm #86761
    ratlaf
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    Some earlier themes of yours showing up in this story took me by surprise.

    I liked the broadening of your other tales by their connection to this one.  🙂

    Thanks!!  ;D

    Hmmm, I'm curious, what are the "earlier themes"(long tongues sure…) and what other tales were "broadened" by this one?  Just curious because I'm probably too close to my own stories to see it…

    September 19, 2009 at 2:26 am #86762
    Cowprobe
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    Well you had a Dark Tower fan-story vibe going on that got plugged into some of your earlier unconnected original tales like "Amazon Cruise". The omniversal threat of the Crimson King, and a potential Walking Man alternate with the Man In Black came to the fore in this most recent retooling as well.

    In regards to the erotic content there's some interesting innovation that hasn't happened before in your tales. The girl protagonist in your recent "MAgic I-Phone" addition actually finding a coherent advantage with her transhuman sexuality for example.  8)

    September 29, 2009 at 12:16 am #86763
    ratlaf
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    Well you had a Dark Tower fan-story vibe going on that got plugged into some of your earlier unconnected original tales like "Amazon Cruise". The omniversal threat of the Crimson King, and a potential Walking Man alternate with the Man In Black came to the fore in this most recent retooling as well.

    In regards to the erotic content there's some interesting innovation that hasn't happened before in your tales. The girl protagonist in your recent "MAgic I-Phone" addition actually finding a coherent advantage with her transhuman sexuality for example.  8)

    Right on!  Thanks for the critique.  You're also right on target too!  Goodonya!

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