[up2nogd1]

Well I'm back trying another superhero story.  This one isn't quite as intimate as the Wonder Woman story.  All characters are owned by DC and they have all the rights.

Leaving the scene from Countdown 48, Mary was confronted by her brother Billy, who now proclaimed to be the Rock of Eternity, calling himself Marvel.  He told her that Freddie Freeman was to become the new Captain Marvel, now called Shazam.  (For this story I stuck with Captain Marvel.)  Worse yet, he stated his disappointment with her decision to take Black Adam’s powers and her seemingly ruthless behavior.  He told her that her destiny was to be a normal woman, leaving her super hero days behind her.  Mary left in a huff, distancing herself from Billy and flying away.

And this is where we pick it up.

Mary sat at the top of a mountain, isolated and feeling abandoned.  She tensed her fists in anger and a familiar feeling of power rushed into her muscles, creating small electrical discharges to dance around her mighty body.

“How could Billy tell me what my destiny is?  All of my power was taken away.  I was nearly killed!  And now that I’m more powerful than ever, he doesn’t want anything to do with me.  I’ve got Black Adam’s powers!  I’ve got the power of Isis!  Last I checked, Black Adams nearly took down every other superhero on the plant by himself!  Heck, he tore through me, Billy and Freddie!”

Standing up, Mary smiled as the breeze flipped her short black skirt around.  She shuffled her black boots, crunching rock below her and stretched her arms, flexing the skin tight black material that covered her torso up to her neck and over her hands.  Her now ample bosom pushed forth defiantly.

“And speaking of Freddie, he left me alone too.  To become the new Captain Marvel by himself.  I’m Billy’s sister.  I should be the new Captain Marvel!”

Launching herself in the air, Mary thought for a moment.  There were still books about the Rock of Eternity she had found a long time ago.  Prophecies about Billy and herself.  Remembering where she had left them, Mary rocketed back toward the city, toward a life she thought she left behind.

Landing on the fire escape of her old apartment, she broke the lock on the window and stepped in.  All of her belongings were still here.  Someone must have been paying the rent.  Looking around, she headed toward her bookshelf and pulled off the tome she was thinking about and delved into the mystical past and magical tales.  She alone held interest in these things.  Billy and Freddie just cared about being heroes.  Mary had always researched the source of their power, but had been content with her place among her brother and friend.

But now, she pored through the books with a new agenda.  After reading for several hours, Mary stood up and stretched, smiling at what she had found.

“This day has suddenly gotten a whole lot better!  Billy is holding out on me.  And Freddie is in for a surprise!”

Walking toward a full length mirror on her bathroom door, Mary looked at herself, turning to one side and then the next.  She brought her arms up into a double bicep pose and squeezed down, forming two small bumps on her very average looking arms.

“And why is it that those two always transformed into big, strong men while my frame stayed the same.  Even now, I’m still a normal looking woman.  If I wasn’t in this outfit, nobody would know I’m a superhero.  But now I think I can fix that!”

Releasing her pose, Mary let out a sigh and looked toward the window.

“But first, I need to find Freddie.”

Stepping back out onto the fire escape, Mary closed the window behind her and floated up into the air, high above the buildings.  She closed her eyes, becoming one with her powers, sensing the flow of magic all around her and the intersection of great sources.  Opening her eyes, she peered around the sky and smiled.

“There you are.”

Arching forward, Mary flew away so fast that a small hurricane swept behind her, knocking over antennas and dishes on the top of buildings.  A sonic boom soon followed as she roared forward, locked in on her intended target.

Freddie stood on the southern coast of Greece, dressed in his newly acquired Captain Marvel uniform, looking at his impressive reflection in the water, flexing his thick chest and smiling.  The voice behind him caught him by surprise.  He thought he was alone.

“Hello Freddie.”

The new Captain Marvel turned around quickly and blinked his eyes.

“Mary?  Is that you?”

Mary walked closer, slowly, with attitude and confidence.  “Hmmm.  Long time no see.”

He looked her up and down with confusion.

“What happened to you?  You’re dressed in black.  Did Billy do this to you?”

Containing her anger toward her brother, she moved closer and stopped a few feet away, placing her fists on her side and pushing out her left hip.

“No.  Billy seemed to think that I no longer need any powers.  I received my new powers from Black Adam.”

Freddie looked shocked.  “Black Adam?  Are you crazy?  He’s a madman!”

Mary frowned.  “Well does that make me a madman too?  I would think you’d be happy to see me.  We used to fight along side of each other, remember?”

Freddie’s expression changed to confusion.  “Yes, but that was before the Rock of Eternity was destroyed.  I’ve gone through terrible trials.  I’m the new Captain Marvel.  I’m stronger than ever.”

Freddie smiled and puffed out his large chest, looking to impress Mary.  Mary for her part looked disinterested.

“And I was supposed to be left a mortal while you and Billy take all the power for yourselves.  Quite a little boys club you two have formed.”

Freddie’s expression softened.  “Well it wasn’t my decision.  Billy is the new Rock of Eternity.  He sent me on these trials.”

Mary sniffed.  “Yes.  My dear brother told me all about your trials and my place in the new order.  Seems I’m no longer wanted.  Or apparently needed.  But I have other ideas.”

Freddie gasped.  “You talked to Billy about this?  I mean, look, I had my own stuff to deal with.”

Mary growled.  “And you told me not to look for you.  I remember.  But I’m afraid that there’s more to the Rock of Eternity than you or Billy know.”

Freddie raised his eyebrows.  “What do you mean?”

Mary’s lips curled back into a smile as her eyes narrowed.

“The magical abilities given to Billy were actually set for our family.  It was predestined.  The Wizard made it sound like it was all an accident, but he lied.  Your powers were a gift.  Always have been.  But my powers have always been a matter of bloodline.  Only it seems that the Wizard was less thrilled having a girl share in the power, just like Billy is now.  The problem was, the Wizard couldn’t deny me.”

Stepping closer, Mary looked up at Freddie, who had transformed himself to a 6 foot 2 inch powerhouse, much larger than Mary’s 5 foot 6 inch frame, even raised to 5 foot 8 with her heels.

“Just like Billy can’t deny me.  Just like you can’t deny me.”

Freddie looked down, back to being confused.

“What are you talking about?”

Mary flashed a wicked smile.

“Your powers, Freddie.  I want them.  They’re mine.  Now be a good boy and hand them over.”

Freddie scoffed.  “Are you crazy Mary?  I can’t just give you my powers.  And beside, if you already have Black Adam’s powers, what do you need mine for?”

Mary chuckled.  “Because they’re mine to take.  And you could give me your powers, but if you don’t want to, I guess I’ll have to take them myself.  This should be quite enjoyable.”

Before Freddie could figure out where she was headed with all of this, Mary pulled back her arm and connected with a solid uppercut to his wide chin with a thunderclap, sending him hurtling up over the sea.  Mary blew imaginary dust off her fist.

“Man, did that feel good!”

As Freddie rocketed away, he arced high and began to plummet toward the water.  Shaking his head, he recovered in time, righted himself and flew down and circled back up, stopping to get his bearings.  He rubbed his sore chin just as Mary flew up toward him.

“Awe.  Did that hurt, Freddie?  I can take the pain away.  Just say the magic word.”

Freddie pulled his arms up into a fighting position.  “You ARE insane!  I can’t let you do this Mary.  Not like you are now.”

Mary laughed mockingly.  “Oh, please.  You abandoned me remember?  I really don’t care what you think anymore.  And if you want to try and stop me, bring it on.  I’ve got the power of Black Adam and Isis!  Last I remember, he kicked your butt good.”

Freddie growled.  “That was before.  And you’re still just a girl!”

Mary frowned again as Freddie zipped forward, plowing his shoulder into Mary’s chest, sending her flying backward, skipping along the water and tumbling back onto the beach.  As Freddie flew after her, Mary pulled herself up and smiled, brushing the sand off of her outfit.

“Heh.  Not bad.  This should be interesting.”

Freddie landed on the sand and walked toward her, tensing his large muscles, looking very serious.  Mary looked him up and down, nodding her head as she admired his physique.  She stood tall, tensing her muscles and small electrical discharges shot around her body, causing her frame to add some muscle.  Her legs became more defined and surged out a few inches, her stomach built up with visible definition and a hint of a six pack.  Her outfit groaned as her back expanded and her pectorals pushed forward, making her already prodigious chest even more impressive.  Her average arms added some definition beneath her outfit, outlining subtle muscle bulges and curves.  Mary chuckled gently at the realization that she was able to add some muscle size already, transforming her body into that of a fitness model she remembered seeing in those paid commercials for some exercise equipment.  Freddie, still much larger than Mary, hardly noticed any change in her appearance as he drew closer.

“Give it up Mary.  You may have gotten in one lucky punch, but you’re no match for me.  Don’t make me hurt you.  Let’s go back to see Billy and straighten this all out.”

Mary grunted.  “Lucky was I?  We’ll just see who winds up hurting who.”

Mary pulled her arms up into a fighting stance.  “And I’ll be seeing Billy soon enough.”

To be continued.

[yaracyrrah80]

Ooh, good start!  Please continue 🙂

[Anonymous]

It's sounds very interesting!

The wait for the next part will be a nightmare…

Please… don't let US wait too long:)

[KeithXZ]

Excellent start.  I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

[TheDuck]

The worst part of your story is having to wait for the next part.

GREAT WORK!!! Keep it coming.

[00tree]

sweet, this is gonna be good.  ;D

[peirrotlunaire]

C'mon, c'mon, c'mon.. I wanna read the next part NOW!

But seriously, this is a really great start.  Great story so far.

[up2nogd1]

OK.  Next part follows.  I was going to expand the fight further, but got tired and moved on.  Anyway, hope you like this part.

Freddie sighed and shook his head, but quickly pulled his arms up and renewed his attack.  As Freddie dove forward to deliver his own uppercut, Mary flew back up avoiding his punch.  He shot up after her, throwing out a hard right cross that she blocked with her left forearm.  The clash of their arms boomed with a loud crack of thunder.  Freddie backed up with a surprised look, while Mary responded with a cocky smirk.

“Hmmph.  Looks like I’m not the pushover you took me for, aye Freddie?”

Freddie’s look turned toward anger and he swung wildly with a right hook.  Mary turned to her right, pulling herself just out of reach.  Snickering at how fast she was moving, Mary continued darting around Freddie with precision, frustrating him at every turn as his punches continued to connect with air.

“What’s the matter, Freddie?  Don’t you have the speed of Mercury?”

Gritting his teeth, Freddie flashed forward, lowering his shoulder and plowing hard into her upper torso once again.  Only this time Mary was ready and the thunderous crackle echoed in the sky as Mary withstood his blow, getting pushing back only a few feet.  Freddie grunted, taking the brunt of his own body tackle, falling down toward the ground momentarily.  Mary smiled with surprise and glee.  Perhaps she really was more powerful than him already.

“Ha!  You seem to have taken the worst from that charge.  You knocked me back a half a mile last time.  Perhaps your power isn’t as great as you thought.  Or perhaps I haven’t quite reached my potential.  After all I’m still new to my powers.  All I did was flex up a bit after you smashed into me the first time and now I seem to be as strong as you.  Maybe even stronger.  Well, if that’s the case, let me show a little more of what I’m capable of.”

Placing her hand on hips, Mary flexed her muscles again as Freddie looked on dumbfounded.  Her muscles responded with another surge in size and power, creating more pronounced discharges that snapped loudly, emboldening her further.  Her impressive calves ground out bigger to 16 inches around, causing her mid-calf level boots to groan.  Her thighs added cords of defined muscles, transforming her once ordinary legs into those of a lightweight female bodybuilder.  Her back widened with thickening muscles and her pectorals added more intimidating layers of hard, striated might, pushing her chest out a few more inches, stretching the outfit taught across her chest.  Her arms and shoulders bulked up impressively, twitching into solid blocks as she flexed them.

“Face it Freddie.  I’m still growing in power.  I’m still getting stronger.  I no longer need to contain these surging muscles or hold back my rising might.  Get ready to see and feel me at full strength, Freddie.  Your power just doesn’t stand up to mine!”

Freddie flew back up toward her, trying to shake the feeling that she was right.

“I’m not nearly done yet, Mary.  I’m still much bigger than you!  My power is greater!”

Mary chuckled and continued to tense her strong female muscles, holding her position and looking more intimidating than he ever remembered seeing her before.  Freddie blinked as he stared at her body, trying hard to maintain his own intimidating stance.  But his thoughts betrayed his outward appearance.  Just how much bigger were her muscles now?  Was she really still getting stronger?  Mary flashed him a smile as she watched beads of sweat form along his brow.

“Oh, is that so?  Well then go ahead.  Give me your best shot, Freddie.  How about one right in the my stomach.  My weak, little girl stomach.  Use the strength of Hercules.  Knock the wind out of me.  Show me who’s boss.”

Looking determined, Freddie didn’t hesitate and to Mary’s surprise he quickly unleashed a punch right where she had indicated.  Mary was shocked that her taunt was taken to heart.  It was unlike Freddie to sucker punch someone, but she saw him coming just in time, tensing her abs down hard into a formidable six pack now clearly outlined against her black outfit.  Mary sucked in air as Freddie delivered his blow with a devastating crack that sent shock waves and lightning discharge out for hundreds of feet around them.

Mary had closed her eyes momentarily, waiting for the pain and planning some type of counter move.  When she opened her eyes she was not the only one with a surprised look on her face.  For she hadn’t moved but an inch and Freddie was shaking his hand in pain.  Her smile returned quickly and this time her taunts dripped with condescending tones.

“Like I said, Freddie.  More powerful.  Now let me show you how it’s done.”

Quicker than the eye could follow, Mary plowed forward, delivering a punch to Freddie’s midsection as more lightning discharged around them.  And to her delight, the punch had a much different affect on him, breaking through his tough abdominal muscles, caving in his thick trunk against her small fist, bending him over.  Moving back, Mary laughed as Freddie clutched his stomach.

“More powerful than ever, huh?  This ‘girl’ nearly cut you half with one punch, while your punch bounced off my female abs like rubber against a brick wall.  I guess we’re finding out who is more powerful than ever!”

Before he could recover, Mary reached her arms over her head against the backdrop of a billowing black cloud, brought her fist together and slammed Freddie in the back with a deafening explosion, sending his large frame hurting toward the ground in a red blur.

Tearing downward, Freddie’s limp body plowed into the earth with a roar, creating a small crater as dust and sand blasted outward.  As the sand settled, Mary floated to the ground and walked up to Freddie who was struggling up to his knees.

“I’m glad you’re trying to get up Freddie.  It means I can dish out some more punishment.  You can take some more can’t you?”

Mary giggled menacingly.  Freddie looked up at his former friend through blurred vision, pulled in a painful breath and reaching his arm out quickly, floated off the ground and pulled away from the 3 foot deep indentation in the ground.  Only to his shock, Mary reached out and snatched his right ankle even faster, pulling him back down slightly, keeping him from flying away.  He pulled harder, but to his growing frustration, was unable to break free.  Mary could hardly contain her glee.

“Ha!  You can’t even fly away from me!  I’m standing firm, holding your entire body back with one arm!  I can taste the magical power dancing all around me Freddie, more power than I’ve ever felt before.  I must be stronger than I’ve ever been!  Now be a good boy and stay put.”

Pulling her arm back and up harshly Mary brought Freddie up over her head, twisted her body and pulled him down quickly, slamming him into the ground even harder than before with a earth shaking concussion, planting his body back into the hard sand, shooting dust up all around them.  Releasing his now limp leg, Mary moved her foot under Freddie’s belly and casually turned him over to face her.  He looked up with pain against labored breaths.  He pulled himself up slowly with a grimace.  Allowing him to rise slightly, Mary pulled her right arm back and set her hand into a fist.  With a wide grin, she delivered a hard jab to his nose, snapping his head back violently, cracking cartilage and spewing out blood, sending him quickly back to the ground with a thud.  Relaxing her arm, Mary looked down at his now motionless form with satisfaction.

“I think we’ve proved who the more powerful one is around here.  Who the stronger one really is.  I could crush you now Freddie, crush your bones beneath my female muscles.”

Freddie groaned, wiping the blood away from his face and flinching as he touched his broken nose.  Mary sighed with satisfaction.  She looked his large body up and down and glanced down at her frame.

“I may be more powerful, but you’re still much bigger than me.  You and Billy like looking muscular and powerful don’t you?  Makes you dismiss a girl like me, even though I’m now a woman.  Perhaps it’s time for me to look the part, seeing as I’m now stronger than you.”

Pausing as she waited for Freddie’s head to clear, Mary smiled and continued.

“And Freddie, I don’t need you to give up your power.  It was always mine to take.”

Freddie’s expression turned back toward confusion.  What was she talking about?  Looking down and giggling, Mary let out a satisfying sigh.

“Seeing as you’re not going anywhere, this will be even easier than I thought it would be.  And all it takes is one word.”

Freddie looked up and winced in pain.  “What are you talking about?  You can’t just take my power.  You’ll turn back into your human form if you say the word.”

Mary’s smile widened as her knowledge of the magical gifts was about to be utilized against her unsuspecting former friend.

“Sure.  If you weren’t next to me.  But since you’re lying helpless on the ground beneath me, my bloodline trumps your gift.  When I say the word, I’ll be adding your power to mine.”

Mary paused for a moment, allowing that thought to sink in, enjoying Freddie’s concerned and pained look.

“Just image that Freddie.  All of that power being wielded by one small woman.  Only I don’t think I’ll stay this small any longer.”

Sniffing with anger, Mary looked down at her body, admiring the growing musculature, even if it didn’t match Freddie’s.

“And if Billy didn’t like this uniform, what I have in mind will bother him even more!”

Mary stepped forward and planted her foot on Freddie’s large chest, pressing down enough to cause him to grown in pain.  He reached up to try and push her leg off, but even with all of his strength, he was unable to move her at all, nor was he able to penetrate the calf muscle that bulged out ominously.  Mary held her leg firm, smirking at his weakness.  Freddie was shocked at the size and strength of her calf, rubbing his hand up over her boot and toward the top of the exposed calf muscle that sported more muscle than he had ever seen her flex before.  Mary twisted her boot, rubbing the ball of her foot into Freddie’s once proud pectorals, breaking through his powerful muscles and causing him to drop his arms to the ground in pain.  Mary smiled wickedly.

“Thought you were pretty strong didn’t you?  Well you are.  You’re just not as strong as me.  Even as my muscles have grown bigger and more powerful during this one sided battle, you’re still bigger.  But now that you’re beneath me, I believe I’ll re-claim my destiny and show the world a brand new Mary Marvel!”

Freddie peered up with concern as Mary pulled her foot off his chest, looked to the sky, and yelled out toward the heavens.

“SHAZAM!”

A huge thunderbolt ripped from the clouds, sending waves of lightning all around, covering Freddie and pulling upward toward Mary.  Her body glowed as the concussion crackled across her feminine frame.  Freddie closed his eyes and pulled his hands up to cover his ears.  As the lightning settled, Freddie was shocked to discover that he had been turned back to his mortal form and that Mary stood beside him, no longer a small woman dressed in black, but a muscle loaded powerhouse in an outfit that made him blush with embarrassment and envy.

Mary laughed and brought her arms out away from her body, bending her elbows slightly.  Freddie gasped at the size of the muscles now covering her frame.  Large, bulbous shoulders and traps rose up along her neck with powerful bands of muscle.  Her incredible chest was thicker than his was, presenting a set of massive, striated pectorals and large heaving breasts covered with a skin tight red sleeveless tank top with black trim and a black lightning bolt that sunk into cleavage 12 inches thick!  Her bare arms sported meaty, striated six inch thick triceps, wide powerful forearms and large, pulsing biceps just waiting to explode.  Her wide, muscle laden back curved quickly into a bare stomach sporting dense, insanely separated blocks of muscle and detailed obliques.  Her powerful abdominals flowed back out into a micro mini red and black skirt and black thong and back out into the thickest, most muscular pair of thighs that Freddie had ever seen.  Every little twitch caused giant bands of muscle to contract and push forward into bullish quadriceps 8 inches thick and 14 inches wide!  The massive thighs hung over girlish knees that pulled back out into a pair of powerful calf muscles, pulsing to six inches wide and four inch thick.  Her black boots were now ankle length, allowing her to showcase her bare, muscle loaded legs.  Mary held her position, taking great pleasure in watching Freddie look her new body up and down.

“So how do you like my new muscled up form, Freddie?  Too big perhaps?  Well it certainly feels right to me.  It’s about time to show everyone just what I’m really capable of!  The magic is flowing though me, flooding my muscles with impossible power and dominating strength!  I’ve got the strength of the most powerful Egyptian Gods with the might of the most powerful Greek Gods!  I’m stronger than Captain Marvel or Black Adam ever dreamed of being!  There’s no superhero who can match me now!  No super villain who stands a chance against me!  I’ll take down ANYONE and EVERYONE who gets in my way!  And I’ll take great pleasure in intimidating them with my new power packed body and crushing them with my mighty, rippling muscles!  Just look at me!  Giant, powerful legs!  Surging abdominals!  A wide, super strong back.  The most powerful chest ever flexed, bigger than Superman’s and Wonder Woman’s put together!  The entire Justice League and Justice Society will bow down before my might!  And check out these arms, Freddie!”

As Mary pulled her forearms up, lightning crackled around her arms as she flexed her biceps into two mountains of rippling terror, 26 inches around each.  As she tensed her fists, twin lightning bolts exploded along her pulsing peaks, racing down her mighty biceps, tattooing the bolts onto her arms as they pushed even bigger!

“Oh yeah!  Now this is what power is all about Freddie!  28 inch biceps with the strength to curl MOUNTAINS!  The power to lift an entire island and hurtle it into space!  The biggest, strongest biceps ever flexed!  And you thought your new frame was big and powerful.  Well it was nothing compared to what I’m sporting now.  Whose got the strength and power now?  Who’s got the intimidating, jacked up muscles?”

The lightning subsided as her biceps stopped their monumental growth at 30 inches around and nearly a foot tall!  Laughing, Mary pulled her arms to her side and looked down on Freddie.

“Well, that really was a blast, Freddie.  And now that I have your power, it’s time to go reclaim MY power that a certain selfish brother is holding.  And then we’ll just see who will wield the power of the Rock of Eternity.  You think I’m strong now?  It’s time to claim everything that should be mine!  And then I’ll REALLY show the world what I’m capable of!  My power is going to rip right off the scales!”

Letting out a satisfying sigh that caused her enormous chest to push out even further, Mary smiled broadly.

“See you Freddie.  And don’t try looking for me.  Ha!”

Mary looked up to the sky, bent her massive legs and jumped into the air, rocketing upward with a cloud of dust.  Freddie shielded his eyes and when he opened them she was gone.  He sighed and got up, having somehow recovered after the transfer.  Freddie looked around, wondering just how he was going to get home.

[iceman75]

Hey GBM, you're doing a great job with this story, and I hope you do more here in the future. I love the way you described her muscle and strength, and her desire to use it as well. Hope you have some really, really cool feats of strength in the next chapter. Jeremy W.

[Fonk]

Hey, that there is a fantastic piece of work! Can't wait to see where you take it next.

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