New story by Amazonfan

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  • September 9, 2005 at 3:05 pm #13102
    Mark Newman
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    There's a great new FMG story on DTV this morning.  Definitely worth a read.

    http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/amazfan/inchbyinch.txt

    It's always dangerous when your girlfriend goes on these new experimental drugs.

    September 9, 2005 at 7:12 pm #13103
    AmazonFan
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    There's a great new FMG story on DTV this morning.  Definitely worth a read.

    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

    AmazonFan

    September 9, 2005 at 9:23 pm #13104
    Hunter S Creek
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    Very cool story, AmazonFan!  Thank you for writing it and for sharing it!

    Tschuss!
    Hunter

    September 9, 2005 at 11:35 pm #13105
    BlackKusanagi
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    Dude….the story kicked ass. ^_^

    September 10, 2005 at 1:58 am #13106
    Anonymous
    Guest

    I think she should share these with her friends …

    September 10, 2005 at 8:59 am #13107
    Warren Vehec
    Participant

    I thought the story was pretty good.  Would have liked to see more of the scene where they wrestled and somewhere along the line she got bigger as well as stronger.  and she got heavier where it took more of an effort for him to move her.

    A little benchmarking wouldn't have hurt the story as to when he stared straight ahead, he was looking at her chin, that kind of stuff.  But all and all, I thought the story was pretty good.

    I'm looking forward to your next story AF.  Keep on writing!

    September 10, 2005 at 1:05 pm #13108
    limit
    Participant

    I too liked the story. I think for it was somewhat reminiscent of when a girlfriend of mine went on Adderall and Wellbutrin and had an interesting reaction: hyper sex drive, weight loss in key spots coupled with a marginal bust gain, increased energy that lead to a slight increase in muscle mass, and a bit of rage…

    The only part of the story that seemed clearly missing was what Trish's bra size after she had a few nights out – numbers? Though the story is written and posted, it also would have been nice to hear a bit about the reactions that the fellows from the few nights out had. Nitpicks for I read it twice through and certain parts several times. 🙂

    limit
    (A part two could work out quite well)

    September 10, 2005 at 6:51 pm #13109
    Trent Harlow
    Participant

    Loved it, especially, the Twilight Zone-ish ending.  Hope to see some more.

    September 10, 2005 at 8:44 pm #13110
    cwmoss
    Participant

    Simply fantastic story. Thanks for your wonderful effort.

    September 11, 2005 at 3:58 pm #13111
    Anonymous
    Guest

    That's a great story, man.  Thanks for writing it and sharing with us!  I would have liked to have seen her develop a bit further and perform some superhuman feats of strength, but perhaps that's for chapter 2?  Brilliant writing, though.  A great story, well told.

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