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  • October 22, 2005 at 1:45 pm #15779
    scat
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    hi !
    here is the first try of a sequence. i hope i'll post it coloured but that's too long because my computer allways bugs with big pictures.

    http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/3310/coffee10kx.jpg

    http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/1155/coffee26yf.jpg

    please tell me what you like and what you dislike.

    i think these sequence will be too at http://thecove.me.uk
    thanks to asusus

    October 22, 2005 at 2:39 pm #15780
    tourist
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    nice story, nice art
    esspecially like the buttons flying to catch the guys attention.
    i don't like the fact that most drawn muscular woman always have to become some kind of dominant person, but that is just me.

    all in all it is a very nice piece of work and i would love to see it colored.
    very big female.

    thanks a lot.

    tourist

    October 22, 2005 at 4:50 pm #15781
    Amazon Lover
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    And this, boys and girls, is what happens when you become addicted to coffee.

    Seriously, it's great artistically and conceptually.  Very well done.  My only pet peeve is that the dialogue is a bit awkwardly-phrased.  But otherwise, awesome work!

    October 22, 2005 at 6:06 pm #15782
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
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    Most wonderful, dear Rescator. The man's expression of fear and the woman's look of triumph are most excellent.
    Kudos.
    Peace
    The Pimp NeonBlack

    October 22, 2005 at 6:10 pm #15783
    gimme size
    Participant

    Fun stuff!!  Yeah, the buttons are a great little detail.

    As for the dialogue, I don't think English is his first language, so extra respect for the effort.

    October 22, 2005 at 6:24 pm #15784
    10-4
    Participant

    It’s pretty cool. Good work.

    October 22, 2005 at 8:44 pm #15785
    scat
    Participant

    thanks everybody for the comments.
    you're all right  : english is not my native language! but i will try to progress  😆

    October 23, 2005 at 12:12 am #15786
    smitty
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    Fantastic, wonderful stuff.

    Please keep up the great work, particularly on your sequences.

    smitty

    October 25, 2005 at 4:07 am #15787
    X-Greg
    Participant

    Fantastic sequence, all is there, talentuous artist drawing, inhuman muscle growth (my favs) and of course a little of fun in the story.

    It couldn't be better.(just a little with some colouring but not that much)

    Bravo

    The greatest job I saw this month with the last Femmefortefan's one

    October 25, 2005 at 1:20 pm #15788
    Vic
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    LOL very nice scat, a bully gets his comeupance!

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