[Max]

Great story. I only feel bad for Martha since being that old and can't have a lover. Well, if number 500 wasn't the one, maybe the 1000th will be  😀

The ending was unspected and brillant. It's nice to see that she does good with the money and care of poor people. But I guess that she must be careful about at which person she gives the serum. Otherwise, this supergirls can kill at some people in a rage attack.

Max

[Fonk]

I really like that ending. It's quirky and smart. Great stuff, sir!

[rick powers]

Hey Max,

I had that same concern: having some superpowered, revenge-seeking, women running around LA. Might liven the place up some! Actually, that's why I put in that little bit at the end of the story where I say she gave Deni a double dose. It must work exponentially, because just a single dose only makes a woman a lot stronger than than most guys. But a double dose would make her like lots and lots of times stronger than an average guy (how's that for scientific accuracy?)

Thanks for the comments.

-Rick

[Max]

she gave Deni a double dose

Indeed, yes. I must say that I was intrigued by that. Why Martha gave a double dose at Deni when only one as enought? My guess is that Martha must know the behavior of the person which she trust her serum. Deni suddenly change in mood was due a rush power, just as it happened to Jennifer. Besides that, Deni should be a nice person just as Jennifer is.

I hope Martha will continue seeking for a man that love her, understand her work and most of all, that doesn't have a change in attitude as the other men in her life once they get too powerful. 

Thanks a lot for such fun story. It was very good.

Max

[gblock01]

What an amazing story! Will we get to see a sequel?

[Author]

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