The White Knight Cometh (completed 8/10/06 w/Part 10)

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  • August 11, 2006 at 5:08 am #32089
    Max
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    Lovely ending indeed. It was great that Amber showed good determination and the direction she will take with her powers.

    Also, it was nice to see her feeling guilty about lying at Devon.

    Great story my friend and certainly I hope to see more of Amber's adventures in the future.

    Max.

    P.S. As a funny note, wasn't she call herself The White Knight "Cometh"? Otherwise, there is an extra word in the title ;D

    August 11, 2006 at 11:38 pm #32090
    Fonk
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    P.S. As a funny note, wasn't she call herself The White Knight "Cometh"? Otherwise, there is an extra word in the title ;D

    If there's one thing I hate doing, it's giving titles to my stories. "Cometh" is just a posh word for "is coming", so it should really read "The White Knight Is Coming".

    Sorry for any confusion, my good sir!

    August 12, 2006 at 6:19 pm #32091
    The_Pimp_NeonBlack
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    A most excellent completion to your tale, dear Fonk.

    Can we expect further tale of the White Night in the Future?

    Thank you for all that you have done and written.

    Peace
    Neon

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