Turntable Anim: Where to upload?

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  • #83092
    Tolan
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    Bah….didn't know that fileshare's free upload was only 10 downloads x_x

    I wasn't able to catch any of the renders….and I much like seeing progress pics/vids.

    Mediafire used to be good at file hosting

    #83093
    CGMann
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    okay I signed up to MediaFire.  Here is render #5.  I did alot of fine-tuning on her upper arms and upper legs.. I think it's about time to add her lower limbs.  I also sealed up her crotch but it needs some adjustment.  I didn't give her a sphincter or vag but… I may add those later.  I expect her to wear a bit of clothing eventually.

    EDIT: Any of you amazing artists out there.. If you see any glaring anatomical errors, by all means, point them out to me!  Oh yeah.. And she has a name now.. "Flexy."  What do you think?

    #83094
    Tolan
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    Not too shabby!  It looks like the biceps end just as the delts do, but that could be because you havn't gotten out the rest of the arm.

    #83095
    CGMann
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    The bicep has evolved already.. You will see changes in the next update.  I have added forearms too.  Just giving you advanced notice.  Because forewarned is forearmed.

    #83096
    CGMann
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    Quickie update.. Number six.

    #83097
    Reason
    Participant

    Wow, it's great to see you tackling a full body model. Should be pretty amazing if you end up using your cloth technique to have all of the muscles bulging beneath the skin! Anyway, it's coming along great. The upper body is particularly stellar, with all the muscle shapes flowing into each other nicely. It might just be a style thing, but the quads don't look quite right to me yet. The rectus femoris muscles seem to end too early and poke out a bit too much where they insert at the bottom. Also, the tensor fasciae latae and sartorius muscles seem to be missing, or at least start too far below the illiac spine. Adding these would help the upper legs flow into the hips better. Again, it might be a style thing, but I would also like her butt to be bigger and go further past her crotch.

    Sorry for all of the anatomical terms, but there just aren't common names for each individual muscle.

    #83098
    CGMann
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    Thank you for your suggestions Reason.  Would you be able to take a snapshot of the model and sketch some correction lines on top of it to illustrate what you are saying?

    By the way… I will not be using the cloth technique.  That test proved to me that it's not workable.  The skin slides around too much.  I've been making alot of changes to her upper arm.  So look for another update soon.

    #83099
    CGMann
    Participant

    Update #8.  Changes to arms and the hole in her neck.  I am quite unhappy with the way her upper arms flow.  The camera orients to illustrate this.  Any suggestions?

    #83100
    TC2
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    The forearm is too pronounced, which is making it give that strange look.  Though the muscles are big and strong there, they should be more imbedded into the arm itself.  If you make the one portion less pronounced it should fix the flow problem you are having.

    It also could be the width of the forearms as well, though obviously not nearly as huge as the biceps or the triceps, forearms can get pretty shapely with the proper training.

    #83101
    Jack
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    Cool modelling!  Wish you all the best with this project! 

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