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  • July 13, 2005 at 7:16 am #7678
    fasola
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    Should I keep on triing to draw, or just do photoshop stuff?

    i really need feedback

    July 13, 2005 at 8:13 am #7679
    10-4
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    Keep on trying. It takes time to become a master of this stuff. You’re off to a good start with this picture.

    July 13, 2005 at 8:35 am #7680
    Debido-San
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    The muscles are great! Just work on your faces some more! And it’s almost refreshing to see a drawn girl without breasts…

    July 13, 2005 at 9:36 am #7681
    Matthew Lim
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    Practice makes perfect. Good drawing isn’t just about putting lines on paper, it’s also about knowing the subject of your drawing back to front. I can see that you used a photo for reference and it helped you do several right thing with the drawing. But although you made some right moves with the drawing somethings were handled in the wrong manner. Some of the pectoral lines are moving in the wrong direction. The pectoral muscle moces toward the arm and tucks under the deltoid. The trapezius muscle is a back muscle but in the angle you have the woman, the deltoid will wrap behind it. You have it drawn correctly on the right side, but it goes behind the deltoid on the left. The neck looks like you took shadows that looked important and put them down on th paper. I’ve said this before in several other threads but it really does help out to go through an anatomy book, which is much more beneficial than copying photos. I know it gets old hearing me reapeat that statement over and over again, but any good artist will tell you the same thing. Hope you find all of this helpful.

    July 14, 2005 at 1:57 am #7682
    Kitsunekun
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    KTM knows about this!!!!

    And some general tips:

    -Nose tends to look better the less defined it is(if you erase the vertical lines besides the tip of her nose it would look better)

    -Front teeth looks better if they’re not fully defined (draw the teeth as a single horizontal line or nothing at all, though you could define her canines and molars)

    -Remark her upper eyelids drawing them 3 or 5 times

    Hope this helps, south-american partner!!! 😀

    July 14, 2005 at 10:51 am #7683
    Anonymous
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    looks nice 2 me…

    July 15, 2005 at 3:15 am #7684
    fasola
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    to kitsunekun and KTM thanks for the tips.

    KTM, you are right, that deltoid thing, is something i didn’t notice. and you’re no to repetitive, you are Freekin’ ANOYING.

    JAJA, JUST KIDDING, THANKS TO ALL………..

    OPs, forgot to unlock caps.

    and in another different thing

    I MADE TO PILLAR OF THE COMUNITY, YEAH

    July 16, 2005 at 2:10 am #7685
    Anonymous
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    I think this is very nearly a great pic. Perhaps only the bottom of the nose and the mouth need a little adjustment, but I think the musculature is well-observed and overall it looks lovely. Keep at it! Thanks for sharing with us!

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