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March 12, 2007 at 8:44 am #48381
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ParticipantThis is a story that's been dancing around my head for a while. Since it involves two obviously well known comic book characters from DC I figured I didn't need to give a lot of physical description. I've chosen the recent continuity as the starting point. I've tried to edit it as best I can. And I obviously wouldn't be posting it here if I wasn't looking for some type of feedback. Please be kind.
DISCLAIMER: Wonder Woman and Superman are owned by DC Comics (as if you didn't know). All rights belong to them.
Sitting atop a large, isolated mountain two of the most powerful heroes on earth were reclining on a pair of large rocks, looking around in silence, relaxing against the peaceful landscape. It was here that both heroes could talk without fear of anyone else hearing. No subject was taboo. And what was said here, stayed here. With a subtle, relaxed smile Superman turned toward Wonder Woman.
“So now that you’ve regained your powers and have resumed your work as Wonder Woman, what lies in your future?”
Wonder Woman continued to look ahead, her expression remaining calm.
“Oh, I suppose that I’ll stay with the Department of Metahuman Affairs for a while. At least until the Justice League takes up more of my time. It’s been an interesting diversion working closely with non-super powered heroes.”
Superman looked back toward the horizon.
“So, are you back on good terms with the Greek Gods or are they still out of the picture?”
Superman's comment caused a rye smile to cross Wonder Woman's face.
“Oh, I’m not sure good terms is the best way to describe my association at this point. Especially after the last meeting.”
Superman raised his eyebrows and turned his head back toward her. This sounded interesting.
“Why, what happened?”
Wonder Woman chuckled, causing her large chest to bob up and down. Superman’s heart skipped a beat. There was nothing more tantalizing than seeing Wonder Woman’s powerful chest pulse. A breeze blew her long hair a bit into her face and she raised her hand up to push her locks back behind her ear.
“So how is Lois these days? Now that you’re back to full strength.”
Superman sighed and looked down at the ground. He knew what she was hinting at. He also found it odd that she would change the subject so dramatically.
“Well, we still love each other. That’s never been a problem.”
Wonder Woman sighed smoothly nodding her head, still looking straight ahead.
“But in the bedroom?”
Superman let out a soft groan. It wasn’t like Wonder Woman to hit that quickly.
“Well, it’s back to caution. It’s not like I didn’t remember how to control myself. But there are times that I do miss not have any powers.”
He swallowed, not sure where Wonder Woman was headed. He figured to swat it back into her court.
“And you? Anyone of interest? How’s that partner of yours working out?”
Wonder Woman smiled again.
“Oh, we’re just friends. You know what it would be like to get too close to someone you work with.”
Superman bit his lower lip.
“Well, that’s how I met Lois after all. And we still work together.”
He rolled his neck slowly, leaned back and glancing over at Wonder Woman. If he didn’t know her better, he’d swear that she looked more beautiful than ever. And her body looked especially toned, even a little muscular. As she raised and lowered her legs against the boulder, her boots covered calves bulged out into the material and her bare thighs danced hypnotically with each movement, pushing away from her body with powerful grace. Superman could see her tight abdominal muscles through her bodice. And being the gentleman, he could only glance at her large chest and breathtaking cleavage. Her shoulders seemed thicker and her arms were those of an Olympic athlete, which seemed only fitting.
Wonder Woman finally turned toward Superman and their eyes met.
“So you don’t see a problem with two people in say a League becoming closer?”
Superman’s eyes narrowed.
“Why, uh, no, I guess not. If both of them are single.”
Superman waited for a reaction, trying to get a sense of where she may have been heading, but her calm expression gave nothing away. The longer he looked into her deep blue eyes, the faster his heart beat. Turning his head before she picked up on his physical changes he raised his shoulders.
“So how are Cassie and Donna?”
Wonder Woman turned her head back, smiled again and nodded slowly.
“Better than ever.”
Superman sat up straight. She was hiding something.
“So what happened last time you saw Zeus?”
Wonder Woman leaned back and pushed her chest out, causing her outfit to groan a bit, catching Superman by surprise and drawing his attention toward the sound. He suppressed a gasp. Her chest looked bigger than he had ever seen before. Now his pulse was racing. He looked away quickly, hoping Wonder Woman didn’t notice. She let out a pleasured sigh and looked up.
“I was sick and tired of my ‘gift from the gods’ being a play thing to be taken and given. If the gods were going to leave this dimension then they should leave. And Cassie was even angrier since Zeus toyed with her even worse.”
Settling in, Wonder Woman continued.
“So I contacted him and agreed to talk. But before I did I got in touch with the Fates. Seems they were tired of the run around too. They knew of things to come, but would never interfere. At least until now. And what they told me was more than just a little surprising.”
Superman’s interest was piquing and he took another look at Wonder Woman who had pulled her torso upright with her arms tensed, pushing out muscles he never thought she possessed. Triceps molded into perfect horseshoes nearly as big as his and her forearms looked strapping, seemingly pulling her bracelets tight. Nodding his head to get her to continue, Wonder Woman cocked her head toward him, catching him in the corner of her eye, but continuing to look forward.
“Turns out that the Fates can control all of the power available to the gods and everything associated with what became Greek mythology.”
Superman’s eyes got wide.
“And exactly how much power are we talking about?”
Wonder Woman snickered, ignoring his comment.
“They of course knew all about the continued meddling of the gods, which is the words they used. They wanted to move on themselves, to no longer be responsible for so much power.”
The breaks were starting to drive Superman crazy. That and her movements that seemed to be a bit more than just stretches. She tensed her thighs and they solidified into defined cords, pushing away from her body, then pulling back in as she relaxed.
“So they told me to confront Zeus himself and demand to talk to the other gods. To tell them that the Fates were to bring us together.”
Superman let out a frustrated sigh. “And?”
Wonder Woman snickered.
“So I did. Zeus never is pleased when you demand anything from him, but mention the Fates and he turns into a puppy. Seems he knew just who had the control.”
Wonder Woman turned toward Superman and her voice seemed to lower a bit, becoming more commanding.
“So I told him that I was no longer going to be under his control, that Donna, Cassie and I would take what was ours and keep it. We would remain on earth in this plain of existence and they would leave. Forever.”
Superman’s eyes got wide again.
“And how did he take that?”
Wonder Woman let out a small smile.
“About as well as you’d expect. He laughed. Along with the rest of the gods.”
Superman shook his head. Wonder Woman had been mad at the gods before, but had never completely disrespected them. Seeing that she was serious, he leaned closer as she continued.
“Only the Fates had already set everything up. According to them, all I needed to do was speak the poem they had given me. They made me memorize it. But even as I said the words, I was unsure if everything was going to transpire as they indicated, since the Fates remained cryptic to the end.”
Superman was stunned. “Great Scott, Diana, what happened?”
Wonder Woman leaned forward, tensing her chest, exposing now swelling pectorals and breasts that pressed up hard against her chest plate causing the metal to grown and buckle.
“Everything the Fates said would transpire began to happen. As I spoke the words in Greek, commanding all of their power be stripped away, the gods began to yell in protest and turned against me.”
Superman gasped. The power of every Greek god was more than anyone had ever calculated before. If it was turned against Wonder Woman, how could she possibly survive. Wonder Woman’s pace quickened as she continued.
“The might unleashed was incredible. Thunder, rain, wind, energy discharges that nearly blinded me exploded everywhere. But none of it reached me. The Fates had seen to that. Once I finished the poem, the yelling and screaming stopped abruptly. The gods all looked at me with fear and betrayal, but it was too late. They began to fade from view. And not all of them were so dismayed, I could tell Artemis looked relieved.”
Wonder Woman slowly stood up, continuing to look down at Superman.
“The Fates appeared for a moment once the gods had disappeared, thanked me for releasing them, and faded from view also, having completed a task they thought would never end.”
Superman was stunned and looked up at Wonder Woman with renewed awe. She smiled down on him as though he were a child, and placed her hands on her hips.
To be continued….
March 12, 2007 at 9:01 am #48382TC2
ParticipantNow this story is off to an interesting start! I love the dynamic, the innonence of Superman and the wild sexiness and independance of Wonder Woman bowing to no man.
It is extremely difficult to get me to read a story, everytime someone writes a story if they haven't caught me from the first setence I don't bother reading all the way. The descriptions as Wonder Woman's body slowly started getting more muscular were simply phenominal, it was one of the sexiest things to visualize and there wasn't even any need to get graphic!
Great job, I look forward to seeing the rest.
March 12, 2007 at 9:38 am #48383Deadly Pixxxie
ParticipantThis sounds like a promising story…
March 12, 2007 at 5:55 pm #48384Anonymous
GuestThe first chapter is very interesting! I can't wait for more of Your writing!! 🙂
March 12, 2007 at 6:08 pm #4838500tree
ParticipantLooks great so far. Can't wait for more. It would be nice to see WW outmuscle superman. I'm more of a Power Girl fan myself as many of the people on this board know but WW can be cool to If drawn or written properly.
March 13, 2007 at 8:38 pm #48386Mr. Stone
ParticipantI have always loved your stories, GBM. I am sure, and I wish you wouldn't, but I'm sure that you'll have Wonder Woman blow up into ridiculous mountains, literally, of muscle. Most any other character I wouldn't care, but Wonder Woman is a favorite. 😉
I'm sure I'll enjoy it regardless. I'll just have to use my own imagination. 🙂
Thanks for writing!
March 13, 2007 at 11:30 pm #48387Deadly Pixxxie
ParticipantMore..more….I WANT MORE.
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