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  • in reply to: Brandi: the Workout (by request) #18063
    avburns
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    THANKS for posting this Hatour.  It really made my day.  Keep up the GOOD work!

    Adrian Burns

    in reply to: A Superman story by Hatour #12009
    avburns
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    Great writing as always, Hatour!

    Quick request:  while you're UN-retired for the moment, is there any way you can post the second Brandi story?  I remember reading it, but it appears to no longer exist on the 'Net.

    Thanking you in advance,

    Adrian Burns

    in reply to: Brandi 3.5 (story now posted here) #3782
    avburns
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    Great work as usual, Mark! I was shocked by Supergirl’s fate, though. Don’t worry, I’m not going to spoil it for those who haven’t read it yet, but if I recall correctly, this is the first time that anything like that has happened in one of your stories. You’ve had enhanced females lose their powers or not become as empowered as others on various occasions ("JillyMilly" and "Transfer Student" come to mind), but Dynamitum-enhanced nerds!?! Wow! I thought enhancing guys went against your basic philosphy?

    But suprises like the above, combined with how 3.5 was inserted so nicely in your "Brandi" series made for a great read.

    Keep up the great work,

    Adrian Burns

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