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That sounds just great Wachsende. I'm looking forward to it.

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I know this was meant be the end Wachsende but I thought this story had such great angle to it and you handled it in such a fine way. Maybe you could find a way to bring Sarah back, maybe four years later when she is more self confident and less likely to be discouraged by her little friend's protests and take him into her big arms and show him what she has learned since then.

This story was very well thought out and put together. The ending which maintained the gender roles in light of the change in control and power was a welcome change to the norm. It also served to raise the tension levels and leave open opportunity and speculation.

This story has an intriguing way of leaving you wanting more at the end of each sentence. It's a great work by itself but of course my purpose here is convince you that it would be better if you continued. Here is a toast to the HPV vaccine and also to your continued success Wachsende.

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Fantastic stuff Crazyfck. You write really great stories. I hope you can find time to create some more fine tales for us all to enjoy.

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Crazyfck you are one Crazy F*ck! That was an excellent chapter. The girls just get sexier and sexier. I love the way you’re putting this story together.

Your writing is exceptional and you really connect it all to produce a very exciding erotic thriller!

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Oh my gosh Wachsende! That was a fantastic chapter the sexual tension had reached and unbearable level when you backed it off. Very well thought out and put together.
Oh, and did I mention I really liked it!
LOL

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Great stuff, can't wait for more.

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yea, you have some great stuff crazyfck. I was really into your story and right when Fernanda was comming on real big to Benjamin I went crazy. This is brillant, please continue. The free world is counting on you!@

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Could it be "Searching for Sparky" by Stewy?

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/stewy/sparky01.txt

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/stewy/sparky02.txt

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/stewy/sparky03.txt

http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/stewy/index.htm

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Hi Ratlaf
You have to be regestered. You can do it here:
http://www.giantesscity.com/
Its free but if you have any problems I'll post them somewhere for you.

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Magic Wand Part 1 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=13335

Part 2 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=13369

Part 3 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=13948

Part 4 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=14179

Part 5 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=20793

Part 6 http://www.giantesscity.com/forum/viewtopic.php?highlight=wand+magic&t=23593

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