[Max]

Invasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by Max

Part 1

“Everything will be fine mom. You and Melanie will be healthy again in no time” said Brian as he help at her mother Darlene to walk to the car. He was an 18-years-old young man who lived in a miner community. His mother and sister were infected by the virus.

“Thanks Brian. Thanks for taking care about us” said Darlene in a fragile voice. She never felt so weak in her life. She barely could walk alone.

“It’s my job mom. While my father is in the hospital, my job is to look out for you” he said. As Brian raised his sight, he saw that the town looked abandon. Only the faces of little children and young boys were visible in the windows of the houses.

The only people on the streets were soldiers of the army sent to protect the town while all the adults had gone to a nearby city where an alien agency was operating.

“I know that your father will be proud of you Brian” said Amanda, Brian’s girlfriend, as she help at his sister Melanie to get into the car.

“Thanks Amanda. I just hope that this miraculous cure will be true” he said putting the seat belts over her mother and sister.

“Sure it’s. I have seen in the TV the images of the first restored women. All of them are tall and green, with great muscles” said Amanda a bit jealous. “I will like to go with you Brian, but since I’m one of the few women immune to the virus, there won’t be a dose of cure for me” she said sad.

“Oh!, Don’t be like. You must be grateful that you won’t gain that green color” he said.

“Perhaps, but I wouldn’t mind having muscles” she smiled. “While you are there, at least you could ask if healthy women can have enjoy the benefits of the cure too”

Brian sighed deeply. “If that makes you happy, I will ask” he said.

“Thank you!!” said Amanda as she hugged him and kiss him.

Brian smiled at his girlfriend and then he got inside the car. There will be a long trip until the city where the alien ship was.

When he arrived at the alien offices, he couldn’t believe how much people were there. Fortunately the doses could be applied at women in large groups, so the attention was very fast. The aliens make at people wait in large room until the moment to be called.

An hour later, an alien hostess walked into the room followed with many alien nurses. All of them were beyond the 7 feet tall. “Dear earthlings. The time for your females to be cured has come. Now, if you allowed at our nurses to take care of your women, the healing process will begin” said the hostess.

Brian saw as two nurses hold at Darlene and Melanie in arms and carried out of the room to the sick bay. “While they are being cured, I will show you some information that you will like to know about the cure and what to expect from your cured females. I assure you that they will be perfectly healed and you can go to your home with them and this whole virus issue will be only a bad memory” said the hostess.

“Thanks from bring us here Brian” said his 16-years old sister. “Now relax a bit while we get cured” she said forcing a smile. He grabbed her hand and gave her a kiss in her forehead.

“Please treat them well” asked Brian to the nurses.

Both nurses smiled at him gently and replied “Don’t worry little man. We will treat them as if they were our small sisters”

His mother and sister say goodbye to Brian as they disappeared behind the metal doors of the room.

Once only men were alone in the room, the alien hostess began her presentation. “Well, now if my duty to explain to you about the virus that is affecting at your females. The virus was produce by a race that is now for its predatory nature. They are pretty much alike at the animal specie know as vultures”.

“For some reasons they like only eat the female of the specie. So, the virus was designed to make sick at the women of your specie and when they will be in the verge of dying, this horrible species would have invaded your world and eat at all the sick females”.

“Decades ago, they try to attack our home world. But our denser and strong nature made us immune at the virus as well as some females in this planet. Since then, my kind have being chasing at the last survivors of this horrible specie to finally exterminate it”

“We know that this race will return when they think that the virus will have put at most of the females at the verge of death. When that moment arrives, we will be sure that it will be the last action they do” said the hostess.

All the men cheered at the alien hostess and thank her for all the effort her specie was doing for the Earth.

“Thanks for your words and we are glad that you appreciate our help. Even so, there are a few things that you should know about what the cure will done in the earthlings females. In order to overcome the disease produced by the virus, we are injecting at your women a serum made from our DNA. The serum would make the muscles tissues several times denser than normal making at women super strong. The muscle growth will be related to the age of the woman, so even the youngest girls injected with the serum will be a minimal muscle development, they will be at least two times stronger than the strongest man in the world” said the hostess.

All the men gasped as they didn’t know that the women will be that strong. Many comments were heard. Most of the men were frightened as the women will have such strength. Other fear that the women will take over the world and make them their slaves.

Hearing this, the hostess tried to calm down at the men. “I know that it will be a radical change in your society but let me assure you that there isn’t other way to help at your women survives at the virus. Maybe in a near future we will find a way to eliminate the virus from the females of your planet and then we will undo the work of the serum, but in the meantime, we hope you can adapt” said the hostess.

“I will like to ask you a question lady” said a man. “Is there any preliminary count about how many women had died so far?”

“You must be happy to know that according to our lectures of your planet, there hasn’t any female casualty so far. Our calculations is that the first women will have start dying in 2 weeks. We just get in time” said the hostess.

Just then, other group of green women entered into the room. It took at Brian a moment to recognize that these women weren’t alien. They were the women transformed by the serum.

Brian and all the men stare in awe at how tall and muscular the women had become. Not to mention the green color of their skin. For their part, the women didn’t approach as they were afraid at what the men were thinking about them. Even they were now several times stronger than any of them, the women look like afraid little girls.

Slowly, the men walked toward their females in a gesture of acceptance and the women ran to meet them. The room was filled with tears of joy as men and women were together again and the thread of the virus had being erased.

Since Brian was 5’ 10” tall, most of women he had known in his life were shorter. Now, even a girl that should not be older than 12, seemed to be an inch taller than him. Most of the women were easily more than half foot taller than him now.

He was watching the emotive reunions when he felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned his head just to watch a green neck “Looking for us?” said a giggling voice that Brian recognized as his sister. He looked up and gasped to see that her sister was more than 7 inches taller than him.

“Oh my, you have grown!!” exclaimed Brian.

“Yep. Now, I’m the big sister” giggled Melanie.

“Remember what the nurse told us about not tease at men. I bet that your brother doesn’t feel as excited as you for your change” said Darlene as she stood behind Melanie.

Brian watched astonished as his mother had become green muscle amazon of 7 feet tall. She and his sister were standing in their own feet without any trace of the devastation the virus produced in them. Both women were wearing metallic clothes like the aliens in order to cover their bodies.

“Sorry Brian. I didn’t want to be mean to you” apologize Melanie.

“That is better” said Darlene. “Now, I feel so good that I will drive back home Brian. I think that after taking care of us, you deserve some time to relax in the company of Amanda” said Darlene.

“Thanks mom. I will really like that” said Brian. “That just reminds me…”

Brian approached at the alien hostess and asked her to bend in order to whisper in her ear.

When the alien bend, Brian whispered “Is there a way that a non-sick woman can also receive the serum?”

The alien smiled at him and responded “Sorry, but if we applied the serum at a normal woman, she will be hundreds of times stronger than any cured woman. We don’t want to imagine how many times stronger she will be compared to normal men. The same will happen if the serum is apply at normal man. Since they are strong by nature, we can’t imagine what the results will be”

Brian nodded in understanding and left the office in company of her mother and sister.

As the family returned to their home, Brian still was having a hard time to believe that her sister, who has being always smaller than him, was so tall. He was intrigued to know how strong she was.

He could notice that his mother had very defined muscles, noticeable even under her metallic clothes. ‘I’m sure she must be very powerful, but what about Melanie?’ he thought as he looked at his sister. “She had only toned arms and subtle muscles. How strong she can be?” he wondered.

Melanie couldn’t avoid detecting the interest her brother had on her. “Is there anything you want to ask me?” she said to her brother.

“No. Why?” said quickly Brian.

“I have noticed that you are looking me with interest. I don’t know if I must be flattered or scared. Why you just don’t tell me what is crossing your mind?” said Melanie.

“Well, you see. I’m intrigued to know how strong you are, but I kind of embarrassed to ask you to show me your bicep” said ashamed Brian.

Melanie was shocked by such revelation, but then she smiled gently to him. “Don’t feel embarrassed. I guess that you must be very curious about my strength”.

Brian made a muscle and Melanie did the same. He felt secured as his bicep was bigger than her sister; barely, but bigger at the end.

“I know that your muscles are denser, can you give me permission to touch your bicep?” Brian said pulling out courage to say such thing.

“I will be glad if you do it” smiled Melanie.

When Brian touched it, he couldn't even dent her skin. “It feels as hard as a rock” he gasped.

Melanie blinked him an eye and whispered “It’s harder than that”.

[Max]

I must say that I'm glad that people is interested in this story. Since from part 3 the story will be focus in the theme of the Invansion, I was wondering what you will like to see before that part.

Part 1 will show at the main characters and how part of them are transformed into powerful amazons. The second part will show how the world have changed due the transformations of the women.

When I began to draft this story, I really want to show a brieft look of how a world of powerful amazons will look like. The funny thing is that around that time, Marknew began to work on Pendant Changes and later Jimmy Dimples started Power Play, so I stoped drafting that part since it will have look a lot like their works since I couldn't avoid feeling inspired like them.

I only wrote a couple of scenes with the main character interacting with powerful amazons (as a normal guy will do with normal girls) and I will really like to change that.

So, if you have ideas about scenes that you will like to see, feel free to send them as personal message, or post them here. I will do my best to include them in the story.

Also, if you have questions about the story also feel free to post them here and I will try to explain those question as the story develops.

Thanks a lot for reading and I hope you enjoy this story.

Max

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I guess that many people is thinking the same. Are they good or bad? So I decided to left the question unanswered for now to create some mystery  :-D. But I can say is that the main characters will see at the bad aliens in about 3 parts.

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Glad you enjoy the prologue Rudi. Don't worry that the story will have characters. I'm still in the process of adding dialogs to them. I'm planning to post parts of the story as I work on them.

The prologue was just to give a general image at the reader to know what is happening in the world, but the story will be centered in two main characters and in a far miner town. You will know about them in the next chapter.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate it.

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Wonderful story. It's good to see at Vanessa and her ring back. It seems that the ring has more powers that the ones he mentioned in the beginning  😉

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Amen, my friend.

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Very good luck with the writer's block. Take you time, but try that it won't be too long  😀

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Great addition Frank. It seems that the winner will take it all. One thing I must say is that even Dina has the upper hand, since Nicole can build muscle faster than her, she will be able to match her in no time.

About the name, what about "Muscled Revenge"

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Well… that was a quick way to end a fight. Certainly, Asling became corrupted by power. I wonder what other alternatives she has.

Thanks for updating your story. I will be looking forward for the other two endings.

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Good story. I definetly looking forward for the next part. I don't know why but I guess that Dr. Florida will soon become the "female archaeologist" that most people think in these days and more.

I think that it will be Lara Croft turns to be jealous.  😆

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