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ParticipantVery good chapter my friend. It's great to see that you retake this little tale. I will be looking foward for more of it.
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ParticipantIt was a great story. I can't avoid thinking that Mildred is in reality Milly. Certainly it will be fun that she is trying to sell a script with something that happen in her real life.
It's clear that Raymond isn't in FMG, right? Also, he has lost a great chance. He could have mentionet at Mildred that the only way to sell her script was is she was the main character. That will definetely do the trick đ
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ParticipantInvasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by MaxPart 9
"If Darlene didn't find him, it's very possible that he is…" began to say Amanda
'… in the shelter under the garden with your mom' completed Brian the sentence as Amanda's thoughts were getting clearer and clearer. 'Maybe he remained at her side to not leave her alone during the Invasion and that save him from being…' he was saying.
"… a prisoner in the mines" completed Amanda.
"Oh no. He isn't a prisoner in the mines. Otherwise Darlene wouldn't try to find him" replied Henry.
Amanda lifted her finger to explain at Henry what she was truly saying but decided to save the explanation for later. "I understand Henry. Now let's go back to the town".
Just when Amanda was about to carry at Henry like a baby, Brian yelled in her mind. 'Don't do it!!. You could crush him with your strength!!'.
Quickly Amanda stopped her action. 'That was very close Brian. Thank you' she said mentally.
'I think that our priority now is that you learn to control your strength. If I recall well, I saw an open cast mine nearby when we were jumping. There are some vehicles and equipment you can use' suggest Brian.
'That is a lovely idea. I really want to test these muscles' said mentally Amanda flexing her arms. Then, she caught the scared look in Henry eyes. "Oh sorry. I didn't mean to scare you. I was just thinking that I need to practice a bit before facing at the women in the town. Will you join me in the quarry?" said Amanda. Henry nodded.
Exiting the woods, Amanda and Henry watched the open pit in front of them. 'Maybe you can try to lift one of those' said Brian pointing to a 13.5 tons excavator.
'Have you seen what the other women were capable of doing? This excavator won't represent any challenge to me' said mentally Amanda.
'The idea is not just to be able to lift the excavator. You must lift it without crushing it' said Brian.
"Oh!" gasped Amanda as she walked to the excavator. "OK, here goes nothing" she said as she placed her hands at one side of the vehicle. As she put pressure to grab it, the metal screamed horrible as she bent it without even trying.
"This is crazy!! I was just trying to grab this thing!!" exclaimed Amanda as she released the vehicle. She gasped at the marks her fingers left in the deformed metal. "I can't be this strong, can I?" said Amanda worried for the first time of the great strength she had. 'I could have crushed Henry's skull when I covered his mouth' said Amanda mentally.
'But you didn't. I think that the reason was that you knew that to cover Henry's mouth you didn't need to apply any pressure. That could be the trick. In your mind, the excavator is a heavy vehicle and unconsciously you apply some pressure. Try this time thinking that it's something very light like a piece of paper' suggested Brian.
"I will try" said Amanda as she placed her fingers in other spot of the vehicle.
'Now close your eyes' said Brian 'and think about the piece of paper'. Amanda nodded and did what he said.
"Whoa!!! That is amazing!! You are so strong!!!" celebrated Henry.
Amanda opened her eyes and watched as the heavy vehicle was suspended above her head. "This is incredible!! I can't feel its weight" said Amanda.
'And you are not deforming it. Now, you have the key to control your strength' exclaimed Brian.
"And now that I know how to do it" grinned Amanda and soon the metal began to scream again. "Let's use my full strength" she said applied all the pressure her muscled arms were capable of.
The crystal window of the excavator exploded as the vehicle was compacted by Amanda's bare hands. "This is so easy" said Amanda excited by the great strength she was using. The enormous excavator was quickly reduced to a great metal ball.
"Those women don't stand a chance against me" said Amanda as she kicked the ball with her powerful leg. The ball turned red and then burned in flames at the great speed Amanda put on it. Brian gasped as the ball was melting as it was disappearing in the horizon.
Having fully mastered her new strength, Amanda was able to carry at Henry in her arms without any thread to his health. Soon, the powerful amazonian ran back to the town, but suddenly she stopped when she reached the devastation field the possessed women had left.
Covering Henry's eyes, Amanda and Brian watched that of the army that was suppose to protect their town only was left pieces of junk and vehicles in flames. The few tanks that were there were completely ripped off or crushed. The couple only sighed in relief as there wasn't any dead body in the ground.
'I guess the alien need at all the men possible to be able to get pregnant' mentioned Brian as Amanda continued running to the town.
With all the women in the City Hall, Amanda entered into the town without any problem and quickly arrived at the ruins that were once her home. "Please, wait here Henry. I need to clean the area" said Amanda leaving at Henry in the deserted street.
"Time to put these muscles to work" she said as she start to move the debris of what it was once her home. Heavy chunks of cement were lifted and placed aside. Soon, the work of Amanda paid off as she found the secret entrance to the shelder.
'It will be better if my father sees the old me' said mentally Amanda to Brian. Brian nodded internally. "Please Henry, can you turn around for a moment?" asked Amanda to Henry and he quickly look away.
When Amanda unhooked her bra, the unmerging process began. Slowly Henry emerged from Amanda's back and she was back to normal. "This outfit doesn't look so impressive anymore" said Amanda as she tried to keep her oversize outfit in place.
"Yes, we will need to find a solution for that later" said Brian.
"Brian? You are here!" said Henry turning around when he heard his voice. "What happen to Amanda?" he asked shocked to see a restored Amanda.
"That is a long story that I will explain to you later" said Brian to Henry. "Right now, we must see if Amanda's father is alright"
Amanda walked nervously to the shelter's hatch and knocked it saying "Dad!! Are you there??!! It's me. Amanda!!"
A metal lock being opened was heard and then Victor, Amanda's father' came out. "My dear daughter. Are you alright?" he said looking at the improper way Amanda was dressed.
"I'm fine dad. Let's get inside the shelter. We will explain everything" said Amanda.
Moments later, Brian explained at Henry and Victor the situation of the Earth and the only way they had to save at the women of the world. "I have a plan to save at the people trapped in the mine as well as save at my mother and sister. But first, it will be good if we take care of you wife" said Brian to Amanda's father.
"How do you plan doing it?" asked Victor
"Once you fused with your wife, the disease on her will vanish and she will be cured" said Brian.
"This fusion thing is a hard pill to swallow Brian. Are you telling me that you can fuse with Amanda and make her even stronger than those aliens" said Victor skeptical about the whole thing.
"It's true. I saw the altered body of Amanda and what is capable of do" said Henry, but the Victor still had his doubts.
"Maybe a demonstration should be necessary" smiled Amanda as she unhooked her bra. "Now Brian, come to momma and enhance my strength". Brian understood and walked behind her.
In front of the astonished eyes of Henry and Victor, Brian began to fuse with Amanda. Once he was inside her, Amanda got her powerful body back. Her body grew again filling out properly her outfit and the size of her muscles made gasped at her father.
Without saying anything, Amanda lifted at her father and Henry into the air by wrapping a single finger in their belts. "Now you believe me?" said Amanda to her father. Certainly, he nodded in agreement.
Once Victor was convinced, there was the problem about how to give them the milk that was stored in Amanda's breasts. 'I don't think I won't feel comfortable if you have to breastfeed them. Could you yes give them your milk in cups?' said Brian.
"I understand your feelings sweetie. It will be done as you said" said Amanda as she looked for two cups. Once she found them, she stripped her bra and began to milk herself. Two thick jets of white milk flew from her nipples and filled the cups quickly.
After both men have a taste of the delicious milk, Victor was ready to could cure at Sarah, Amanda's mother.
"We will be waiting in the other room" said Amanda as she and Henry left at her parents alone.
"Hope this works my love" said Victor as he undone his wife dress. Then he placed his hands over her stomach and watched them disappeared as if they were over quick sand. In less than a minute, Victor was absorbed inside Sarah.
Moments later, a female voice said "Where I'm??".
Amanda quickly entered into the room as she recognized the voice of her mother. "You are cured!!" cried of happiness Amanda as she hugged as her mother. Sarah looked very confused and still wasn't sure why she had her opened dress digging in her skin. Bigger was her surprise when she noticed the hard muscles that were all over her body. Not to mention her incredible 8' 3" height.
After a few seconds she understood everything as Victor thoughts mixed with her own. She knew soon about the aliens, the fusion, everything. At the edge of teats, Sarah hugged at her daughter. "Thanks Amanda. You and Brian have saved me. Now, it's time to save at Brian's family" said Sarah.
To be continued…
Max
ParticipantInvasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by MaxPart 8
'Well, that's. We are alone baby' said mentally Brian to Amanda 'I think that our first action should be to return to our town and try to see what we can do to free it' said Brian."What should be our first priority now…" said Amanda "… is to find something I can wear on. Or do you want me to walk naked?" she said sexily.
'I guess you are right. It is impossible that you could use your old clothes' said Brian.
"Indeed. I saw something in the kitchen something I can use" said Amanda as she picked up the cups left in the table. She gasped as the cups broke at the pressure she applied to lift them. "Oh crap!! I don't know my own strength" she said.
'It will be better that as we are in the lab, we must remain defused. Just until you can workout your strength' said Brian as the unmerging process began.
Amanda closed her eyes as her spectacular body was reducing and weakening. Then, Brian's body started to sprout from Amanda's and quickly they became two individuals again.
"I must say that it was a great experience" said Brian as he kissed at Amanda strongly. "You don't know how much I wanted to do that" he said.
"Whoa!!" she said startled by the sudden kiss. "You are so impulsive sometimes" she said catching her breath.
Using her sewing skills, Amanda use the little useful she could find in the lab to create an outfit according to her measurements.
"It won't be pretty, but it will have to work" said Amanda as she saw her creation.
"Considering the limited number of items you have to work with, I will say that you have done impressive work" said Brian.
"Let's see how this works" said Amanda as she grabbed a big elastic band with two dry towels sewed on it. She passed the band over her shoulders and then let it rest on her breasts. "OK. If this works, I will have a bra to support my breasts" said Amanda happily.
"I don't like the idea of not wearing a proper underwear, but this is a unique situation" said Amanda as she put a skirt she made with the fabric she obtained by cutting the legs of her jeans. The oversize skirt and top were loose on her frame.
"Now, let's see if they can manage your altered form" said Brian.
Amanda nodded and Brian began to fuse wit her by using her exposed bare abdomen. Soon Brian found himself being pulled inside Amanda as her body grew. In no time, they returned to be one
"This feels kind of sexy" Amanda moaned as her breasts and torso expanded stretching the elastic band. Her baggy skirt quickly turned tight and short on her. "Oh yes. My muscles are back!!" grinned Amanda as she flexed her arms. Great biceps containing immeasurable strength popped from her them.
Now that she felt comfortable by being clothed, Amanda started to discover the new ramifications of being hosting at Brian. "I don't know how you feel Brian, but I feel amazingly strong and healthy" exclaimed Amanda enjoying the moment.
A big grin appeared on her face as she saw a heavy metal desk. "Let's test my strength" she said as bent her body to pick up the desk.
'Do it carefully. Try not to use all your strength' said Brian.
Amanda gasped at how easily she lifted it from the floor. "This is incredible!!" she exclaimed as she passed the desk from one hand to other. "I can hardly feel its weight and I'm only using a fraction of my strength!!".
Suddenly, Amanda dropped the desk as her mind was filled with new memories. "Oh my… this is…" gasped Amanda as Brian's life was passing in front of her eyes.
'We are now sharing our memories Amanda' said Brian as he experienced the Amanda's memories.
Amanda sat on the desk as anything that Brian knew was quickly assimilated by her mind. Soon, she blushed and Brian would have done the same if he had cheeks as they knew they more intimate secrets they had. Everything that a person is embarrassed to say and normally it's taken to the grave was quickly share between them.
Once they knew all about each other, Amanda knew first hand that Brian truly loves her and he knew that his feelings were equally corresponded. 'I love you' said both mentally at the same time.
"Well, it's time to go darling" said Amanda as she shutdown the lab. "We have a work to do"
'Since we have shared our memories, I presume you must know how to drive' said Brian. 'But, I think you will have some troubles to get into it' he said thinking about the colossal body Amanda had. 'Not to mention that you can end ripping of the wheel'.
"Don't worry Brian. I know another way" hesitated Amanda as an idea formed in her mind.
'I love it!! Let's do it!!' said Brian as he could read what Amanda was thinking.
"Naughty boy. Who told you to read my thoughts?" said Amanda raising an eyebrow.
'Well, I can't avoid it. We are one, remember' said Brian. 'Besides, what are you going to do, hit me?' he teased.
"Ah! You are so clever. I will remember this moment when my period time arrives. You are going to feel first hand what it feels like" she grinned.
'You wouldn't do it' said Brian a bit afraid.
"Continue teasing me and you will discover it" she smiled. "Well, it's time to go and we must get back to the town in the shortest way. In straight line" exclaimed Amanda as she used her strong legs to jump from the edge of the mountain.
âWhoa!!â exclaimed Amanda as she did her first super leaping. She kept her best to keep her balance but she barely landed with her two feet. Her impact left a deep hole in the ground. After another super jump, Amanda landed more coordinated. âIâm beginning to under thisâ she said as she realized another jump, this time she landed perfectly.
"I won't be green, but I feel like Hulk" laughed Amanda as she jumped over mountains and rivers as they were nothing to her. Her mighty legs propelled her into the sky and for short moments, the space designed for birds was invaded by a muscular amazon that was having the time of her life.
With her new strength and vitality, Amanda covered the distance from the lab to the town in only 5 minutes. 'This is impressive. we took an hour and half to make this distance' said Brian impressed.
"It will be better that we go slowly from here" said Amanda as she landed at the edge of the wood that surrounded the town. "An 8 feet tall amazon girl that is not green will certainly be easily to notice and could generate an alarm between the invaders' said Amanda as she walked in the woods.
'You are right. We better use a slow approach. Besides you can be stronger than any of those women, but I wouldn't like to test if you can overpower at all of them' said Brian.
"You don't know how I'm looking forward for it" said Amanda tensing her muscles.'Exactly because I DO know how you feel about it is the reason why I'm warning you' said Brian.
"Maybe this sharing-thoughts-thing isn't as funny as I thought" pouted Amanda.
As Amanda walked quietly in the woods, she felt a terrible sadness coming from Brian. "Don't worry Brian, I promise you that the first invaders I will squash will be the ones inside Melanie and your mother" said Amanda serious. "I won't allow that you family will continue suffering".
'Thank you Amanda. I just can stop thinking about my mom. If it wasn't for her, we will probably locked into the mines' said Brian.
"Yes, what she did was a brave thing. Now it's our time to return the⌠" was saying Amanda when she heard that somebody was coming. 'We need to hide' she mentally said jumping to the cope of a tree and hid.
Soon, Brian noticed through Amanda's eyes a young boy that was running from something. 'Can you see if someone if following him?' he suggested. Amanda turned her head and saw that nobody chasing the boy.
'According to your memories, that boy is Henry. One of Melanie's friends said mentally Amanda to Brian. 'Maybe he has some information about the town's situation' she said jumping back to the ground and cutting off Henry's escape.
Henry was about to scream, but Amanda quickly covered his mouth. "If you scream, you will only help the women find us" she whispered in his ear. "Everything is fine Henry. I'm Amanda, the girlfriend of Melanie's brother. I'm on your side".
Henry nodded, and Amanda uncovered his mouth. "Please, tell me what had happened" she said.
"Everything has being horrible. The women destroyed the army protecting the town and all the non-possessed people are locked in the mines. I could barely escape" said Henry still catching his breath. "There were only 2 guards watching the mines as the rest of the women were in the City Hall waiting for orders from the alien ambassador."
"Henry, do you know if my father is in the mines with the other men" asked Amanda worried.
"He is not with you? I saw when Melanie's mother destroyed your house looking for you and Brian. Nobody was inside, so she suspected that your father helped you to escape. By the way, where is Brian?"
"He is very close" smiled Amanda as she felt at Brian laughing inside her mind.
To be continued…
March 1, 2006 at 9:32 am in reply to: Striking Punishers Magazine – Part 13 (Updated 05/24/06) #23203Max
ParticipantStriking Punishers Magazine
By Max
Edited by dragoon0123456789Part 8
Before the song ended, Eliza moved slowly toward their table. Gently, she placed Sean in a chair. 'I just hope that people think that he drank too much,' thought Eliza as she noticed some odd looks from people nearby.
Fixing the veil over her shoulder, Eliza grabbed a glass of water and carefully helped Sean drink from it. "Are you alright Sean?" asked Eliza, worried.
Slowly, Sean opened his eyes. The first sight they registered was the beautiful face of Eliza. "My angel," he said touching her right cheek with his hand. Then, he moved and kissed her. Eliza blushed as an intense feeling washed her. Before she could properly reply the kiss, Sean broke it and settled back into his chair, unconscious.
"Fool", smiled Eliza tenderly as she took a sip from the glass of water. She sat next to him and playfully began to mess with his hair.
When a new song started, Eliza watched as Paul and his wife moved to the center of the room and began to dance. For a moment, Eliza closed her eyes and imagined that she was the one in the white dress, dancing with Sean.
Soon, the song ended and Eliza opened her eyes again. "It would be lovely to be married to Sean," she said absently.
"I think the same thing about you, Eliza," said Sean.
"When did you wake up?" gasped Eliza, feeling embarrassed about what she had said.
"A few seconds ago," said Sean. "Fortunately, I did it in time to see your beautiful daydreaming face," smiled Sean, making Eliza blush even more.
"Do you feel fine?" asked Eliza, changing the subject.
"Yes. I must say that I wasn't prepared for seeing that. I didn't know that you were making such amazing progress in the gym!" said Sean, excited.
"And what if I tell you that these muscles aren't the product of a workout?" grinned Eliza.
"You aren't taking steroids, are you?" asked Sean, suddenly disgusted.
"No. It's not that!" assured Eliza, allowing Sean recover his breath. "It's more like magic," she smiled.
"Magic? Well, if that is the case, show me," dared Sean.
"My pleasure!" grinned Eliza. "Take my hands," she said, extending her arms over the table. When Sean took them, she added, "Now, just look at my biceps, darling".
Sean did that, and as impossible as it looked, he noticed that the veil was being lifted as Eliza's biceps began to grow in size. "You are flexing, right?" asked Sean, perplexed.
"Feel my hands. Do you sense that I'm flexing?" said Eliza, coyly. "Are you convinced? Because I can continue if you like," she said imagining herself with bigger, denser, stronger biceps.
"OK, I believe you!" gasped Sean as Eliza's muscles were reaching professional bodybuilder proportions.
"That wasn't so hard, was it?" smiled Eliza as her biceps reduced in size.
Sean took a moment to digest what he had experienced. After thinking it over, he only managed to say one word: "How?"
"That is my little secret," said Eliza, winking at him. "When we get home, I will tell you all about it."
"In that case, what are we waiting for?" said Sean, standing up.
"But… your cousin…" said Eliza, confused by the sudden change in Sean's mood.
"He is fine with his wife. I want to be fine with my future one," he whispered in her ear.
Eliza felt excited and scared at the same time as she watched how fast Sean was driving back to his house. She only hoped that the cops were too busy with other things to notice the racing car that was Sean's vehicle.
In no time at all, the couple was back at Sean's house. As a gentleman, Sean helped at Eliza get out of the car. She gladly accepted the help and first put out her legs. Sean gasped as he saw how firm and long Eliza's legs appeared. That surprise was soon forgotten as Eliza stood up. Sean now had to bend his neck up to look at her face.
"Maybe you will need to buy a new car. I feel constricted in it," smiled Eliza, towering over Sean.
Sean saw a sparkle in Eliza's eyes and he knew that she was more than ready to give him the tease of his life. So, instead of asking her about how she grew, he decided to play along.
"Sorry Eliza, I tend to forget how tall you are," he said, smiling. "Can you tell me your height again?" he asked.
Eliza lifted an eyebrow that sent at Sean the clear message that the game was on. "Why is it so hard for you to remember these kind of things? It's not polite to ask a woman about her measurements so often," she sighed. "In case you forget it again, I'm 6' 4", but I kind of feel around 6' 5" tonight," smiled Eliza.
Sean gasped as Eliza grew an inch taller, right in front of him. 'Oh my… she is almost half foot taller than me,' Sean gasped inside his head. "Sorry for that Eliza. I will try to keep you height in mind," he said.
'It won't do any good my dear. I'm planning to be a lot taller,' thought Eliza, smiling, before saying, "Apology accepted. Now, how about we go ahead and go in?" Then, whispering in his ear, Eliza said, "I would really like to have a more 'private' conversation."
Again, the warm breath of Eliza would have steamed up Sean's sunglasses if he was wearing any. He quickly took his keys from his pocket and, giving his arm to Eliza, he guided her inside the house.
"Will you mind if I change into something more comfortable, Sean?" said Eliza, softly.
"Not at all. Would you like something to drink?" he said.
"Tea would be nice," said Eliza, removing her veil. Sean gasped as he could see the well formed biceps Eliza had on her arms. They looked bigger than the first time he saw them, and remembering the little trick she did outside the house, he didn't doubt that they were indeed bigger.
"I will boil some water. Why don't you take a shower?" suggested Sean.
"What a lovely idea. I would really like to look my best for you," smirked Eliza as she winked at him. With her increased height, the length of the dress wasn't enough to cover her feet, but Eliza still decided to picked it up to climb up the stairs
Sean only stared in awe at the muscular legs Eliza was showing off. He did his best to control himself, but his eyes couldn't believe how strong Eliza looked. Her arms, legs, and even her back were covered in muscles, making her look extremely hot in his opinion.
Once upstairs, Eliza couldn't resist taking a peek over her shoulder at Sean. 'You are mine now!' she thought, clearly seeing the devotion in Sean's face.
Inside the bedroom, Eliza shrank herself in order to take off her dress easily without damaging it. Standing naked, Eliza grew to her previous figure, and, wrapping a towel around her waist, she went into the bathroom.
The cool water washed over Eliza's body, and, grabbing the soap, she began to clean every spot of her tender skin. "I had sex two times today and I'm definitely going for a third experience." said Eliza as she washed the evidence of her episode with Jane from her body.
Eliza stood for a moment to stare her face in the mirror. "I look truly beautiful" Eliza said as she noticed that her face was free of any kind of imperfection. "Just as I wish to be," she smiled, noticing her bright, white teeth. "This magazine is amazing!!" said Eliza as she enriched the color of her eyes and increased the texture of her lips.
As Sean was preparing the tea, Eliza descended the stairs. Sean saw that Eliza was wearing another pair of her gym clothes. Since he was prepared this time, he successfully hid any trace of admiration. This action caught Eliza off guard.
Eliza pouted as her body wasn't having any effect on Sean. 'And I thought that this outfit would drive him crazy,' thought Eliza. Her expandable gym clothes were stretched as taut as they could get by her firm muscles.
Her shorts and top fit her like a second skin. The round and big cheeks of her rear, plus the great muscle definition of her legs were clearly visible through the thin, stretchy fabric. Also, her washboard abs were exposed over her tiny waist. Her top was filled out sexily with her round breasts and her strong arms looked really impressive.
'Even with such an image of feminine power and perfection in front of him, he didn't seem to notice me!' thought Eliza, feeling her mood sinking through the floor. As she lowered her head, she noticed the great bulge in Sean's pants. Quickly, Eliza's mood lifted up again.
'You almost caught me, clever boy!' thought Eliza, impressed by Sean's self-control. 'But your body can't lie to me. Let's see how long you can ignore me'.
A loud gulping sound came from Sean's throat as he noticed the grin on Eliza's face.
To be continued…
March 1, 2006 at 9:27 am in reply to: Striking Punishers Magazine – Part 13 (Updated 05/24/06) #23202Max
ParticipantThanks a lot for all the possitive feedback about this story my friends. I really appreciate it.
An idea I thought I'd mention – maybe Eliza will accidently drain sean of most of his muscles, so she'll have to help him and take care of him for a while.
Later she'll figure out how to give him his muscles back again, and then she'll be able to have a strong or a weak boyfriend whenever she feels like it.I must say that the idea is good, but the magazine works in a specific way and what you suggest isn't possible.
I appreciate your suggestions and feel free to share any other you have. Maybe I will use it in the story, who knows? đ
Max
Max
ParticipantOK, I think I fixed that one. I didn't have the permissions se…nevermind. It should work now.
Yes, the stars are visible now. Thanks Lingster for your quick and effective action.
Max
February 25, 2006 at 7:04 pm in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17940Max
ParticipantAnother great chapter Fonk. The Queen of the Amazons discovered that she is not unstoppable after all. What kind of plans the Coronel will have for her. Maybe he saw her dancing in the strip bad and wanted her for himself đż
I would đ
Max
Max
ParticipantInvasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by MaxPart 7
âIt's delicious!!â exclaimed Brian after swallowing the milk.
âWell, I'm not a queen for nothingâ said Niftiow blushing. âNow, both of you need to be naked in order to proceed with the fusionâ she said.
With some embarrassment, Brian and Amanda stripped off their clothes. They had seen each other naked before, but this was the first time they got naked in front of a complete stranger.
As Brian was removing his shirt, he couldn't stop watching Amanda taking off hers. Amanda's natural beauty always left him spellbound. In silence, he stared at her gorgeous legs were as she peeled off her jeans, revealing them little by little.
Brian took his time to unzip his jeans, distracted by the vision of Amanda unbuttoning her blouse. Placing her blouse aside, Amanda stood a bit ashamed as she was only in bra and panties, while Brian was only half-undressed.
âThat piece of fabric over your breasts will be useless for you once the fusion is done. I don't know about the piece protecting your womanhood, but you can keep it if you wantâ said Niftiow to Amanda.
Brian was trying not to drool all over the lab floor as his mind understood Niftiow's words. He had witnessed all the possessed women developing muscles, and they also increased their bust lines. If the development was according to the mass inserted, he tried not to think what will happen with Amanda's breasts once he was inside her. He didn't want to pass out or worse!.
As soon as Brian removed his jeans he wished he hadn't done it. He saw the innocent expression of Amanda as she unclasped her bra. With the garment removed, Brian could enjoy the wonderful sight that was Amanda's perfect and round C-cup perky breasts.
âNow that I remember, you don't need to be naked Brianâ said Niftiow. Brian couldn't be more thankful as he quickly pulled up his jeans to cover his erection. Once he put his shirt on, the queen proceeded. âThe fusion is simple. Brian, once you make contact with Amanda, you must think about getting inside her. After that, everything will go fineâ she said.
âAnd how I do to get out?â asked worried Brian.
âJust think about getting out of her. The fusion is a trust pact between two people. In your case, Amanda will be the one with the total control over the fused body and over the strength resulting of the fusion, but she canât force you to fuse with her. You donât have control over the fused body, but you are free to fuse or defuse from her. Another interesting result of the fusion is that if one or both of you are wounded, you can heal real fast while you stayed fusedâ explained Niftiow.
âI guess that the ability can be useful if we plan to fight against the whole female population of this planetâ joked nervously Brian. Then, looking at Amanda into her eyes, Brian asked with trembling voice âAre you ready?â
Amanda smiled and got closer to him. âI'm more than ready my love. This is a very special moment in our relationship, Brian. We knew that one day we will share our bodies and souls but we never imagine that we will do it so literally. I know that what we are about to do, we do it for the mankind, but not for that, I want to cherish this momentâ she said.
Brian couldn't stop the tears flowing from his eyes as he watched the most romantic woman in the world. He kissed her deeply and she kissed him back. Niftiow smiled as she felt the great love the two earthlings had for each other.
Feeling the confidence Amanda had deposited in him, Brian gently placed his hands on her stomach. âIt has begunâ said Brian as slowly his hands began to melt in her skin.
âIt ticklesâ giggled Amanda.
âI must say that it's a funny sensationâ said Brian when he realized he couldn't feel his fingers anymore. âWell, here I comeâ said Brian throwing himself into Amanda.
âOh my…!!â moaned Amanda as Brian got inside her body. In a blink of the eye, the two bodies merged together and Brian with Amanda became one.
For a moment, Amanda stood silently. Then, her body slowly enlarged and her slim body got toned. Soon her transformation speeded up as her feminine muscles started to gain size and density. Her increase in height was keeping up with the one in her muscles. Niftiow estimated that for every inch Amanda grew in size, her muscles also increased in that amount.
As her transformation continued, Amanda regained her consciousness. âThis is incredible!!â she gasped. âI feel invincible!!â she exclaimed as she touched her still growing biceps. âThey are like steel!!â.
Then, she looked down at Niftiow and watched how the queen got smaller and smaller in front of her. âI will be a giantess!!â grinned Amanda as her body extended toward the ceiling.
A stretching sound caught the attention of Amanda. She noticed that it was coming from her panties. The elastic underwear was being forced to its limits as Amanda's hips were expanding.
The concern about her panties was soon forgotten as Amanda experienced a pleasant, almost erotic, change happening in her. Her smile couldn't be wider as Amanda felt a warm tingle sensation spreading into her breasts.
âOh yes!! It's time!!â moaned Amanda as she massaged her breasts. Soon, they responded at her touch by swelling up. Her breasts got heavier on her chest, but her pectoral muscles kept them in place. Amanda felt her nipples engorging and she was sure that it was due the lactation condition that Niftiow mentioned.
Finally, Amanda's transformation slowed and then stopped. âWell, I think that is all I will growâ said Amanda as she stretched her muscular amazon body. Niftiow watched her, wholly satisfied with the result.
âYou are truly impressive Amanda. I knew that you will more powerful that any of Keispa's forces, but I never imagine something like this,â exclaimed the astonished queen. âAnd how is Brian?â
âOh my…!! I forgot about Brian!!â Amanda exclaimed, feeling bad for Getting so carried away by her enhancing body experience, not worrying how Brian was. Frantically, Amanda began to touch her stomach, chest and legs looking for a sign of her boyfriend. âBRIAN! BRIAN!! Where are you Brian?â she asked, increasingly worried.
'I'm here Amanda' came a voice Amanda heard inside her head. 'Don't worry, baby. I'm fine in here' Brian said, now just a disembodied voice in her brain.
âWhat a relief!â Amanda sighed.
âIt seems that the fusion was a successâ smiled Niftiow. âWhy don't both of you look at the body you are sharingâ suggested Niftiow pointing out to a large crystal door of the lab.
'Are you ready to see how your Super Amanda looks, my little man?' mentally said Amanda to Brian as she walked to the door.
'Please don't start. I don't know what could happen if I get aroused in here' pointed Brian feeling excited. Amanda only smiled and continued walking.
When Amanda stood in front of the glass door, she and Brian gasped at sight reflected on it. âHOLY…â exclaimed Amanda as she had grown in size tremendously. âI must be like what? 8 feet tall?â she wondered.
'Who cares about your size. Look at your muscles!! With those guns you can put in shame at best bodybuilder on the planet' gasped Brian.
âI think you are rightâ said Amanda as she flexed her arm tensing her mighty biceps. âBut don't forget about theseâ grinned happy Amanda at the amazing size of her breasts. âWhere I will find bras for these?â she exclaimed cupping her over-generous bust.
Suddenly, she heard at Brian gasping inside her head. Recalling what Niftiow told her about sharing with Brian anything she felt, Amanda began to caress her breasts. 'How do they feel Brian?' asked Amanda mentally.
'Terrific' gasped Brian as he could feel how warm, firm and big Amanda's breasts were. Then, his pleasure turned into frustration as he realized that as gorgeous as Amanda was, he couldnât be able to do anything with her. After all he was inside her body.
âWe will find a way Brian. Donât worryâ said Amanda as she could read Brianâs emotions and thoughts very easily.
âI have great hopes in you twoâ interrupted Niftiow. âI will really like to stay with you, and fight Keispa's forces, but as you know, the weapons she had built will destroy my whole fleet if I try to land. Besides in the current state of the situation there is nothing we can doâ said Niftiow.
âWhat I can do is leaving two ships behind the dark side of the moon. Since the satellites of your planet aren't too advanced, my ships will be virtually invisible and they will be ready when you need them. If you want to deceive Keispa, my forces can fuse with the women you free in order to let those women have the appearance Keispa expect. Can you imagine what will happen if Keispa communicates with one of her forces and doesn't find a green woman in the other side?â said the queen.
âYou are right. Thanks for your help your majestyâ said Amanda.
âI just wish I could do more, but as I told you, I must continue my journey in order to prolong the life of my speciesâ said Niftiow as she pressed a button on her suit.
Gently, Amanda carried Niftiow in her hand and took her outside. Then, she remained in silence nodding before saying âNiftiow, Brian wants me to tell you that he is very grateful for what you have done for us and for our whole planet. We understand the dangers you exposed yourself in order to meet us. We will do our best to try to save our planetâ said Amanda.
âI know you willâ said Niftiow. The strong wind indicated that her ship had arrived. Once the ship was visible, Amanda left the queen on the ground. When Niftiow was boarding her ship, she added âWhen the Earth recovers its freedom; I will love to go back and talk to youâ. With the queen secured, the ship turned invisible and took off.
Amanda returned to the lab and put the speakers on. Soon she heard the queen âKeispa. I don't want to put in danger at the people of this planet. Unfortunately, I can't stay here to make a plan against you since I have to assure the existence of our race. But I promise you that before you notice it, I will return to see at the Earth freeâ said Niftiow.
âYou are doing the right thing my queen. Run like a wounded prey and never returnâ laughed Keispa and the communication ended.
To be continued…
February 25, 2006 at 7:48 am in reply to: Striking Punishers Magazine – Part 13 (Updated 05/24/06) #23194Max
ParticipantStriking Punishers Magazine
By Max
Edited by dragoon0123456789Part 7
âI think it would be best if you just lose some of your muscle so you can fit into your clothes,â said Jane, picking up Elizaâs dress. âTake it and hide in the stall over there. I will apologize to everyone out there for closing the door. See you outside,â she said.
Eliza nodded and got inside the stall. She heard at Jane opening the door and apologizing for locking it. After that, she heard other girls getting inside the bathroom.
Looking at her dress, Eliza sighed. âRight, if I could just lose muscle by only thinking about it. If Jane only knew how I…â. For a moment Eliza sighed as she watched her muscles receding in size. âNo way!!â she gasped.
Concentrating in being stronger, Eliza watched in pleasure as her muscles grew in size again. âCan I control this?â wondered Eliza. She tried thinking about small muscles again and watched in amazement as they got smaller.
âI really need to test what Iâm capable of!â thought Eliza as she restored her body to the way she entered into the party. She put her dress and veil on and abandoned the stall.
Outside the restroom, Jane was waiting eagerly for Eliza. âDid you have any problems in there?â asked a worried Jane.
âNot a one, Jane. I even took time to brush my hair and apply some makeup,â smiled Eliza.
âIâm glad,â Jane sighed in relief. Then, gulping hard and her face blushing deeply, she asked, âWill I see you again?â
Eliza had being thinking in the restroom about how to reply if Jane asked her something like that. âCertainly Jane. I guess that you want to have muscles like I do, right?â Eliza smiled as she flexed her arm and thought about a big bicep.
Her bicep bulged incredibly causing Jane to drool in excitement. âOh yes. I really doâ Jane cried anxiously.
Relaxing her pose, Eliza concentrated in returning her bicep to its previous size. âI can help you to reach your desire. Do you have a piece of paper?â asked Eliza.
Jane quickly gave Eliza her cell phone. Eliza saved her address and telephone number on it. âNow, be sure to visit me tomorrow at 10 am. Iâm still experimenting with all of this, but if you want, you can help me to discover more about this muscle growth thing,â said Eliza.
âOh, Iâm so glad that you let me be part of this! I wonât fail you! I promise to be at your place tomorrow morning!â said Jane, excited.
The new friends said goodbye and Eliza decided to return to Seanâs side. As she was walking, Eliza couldnât stop thinking about what happened to her muscles. âI accept that the magazine allows me to gain the strength and size of the bad guys a striking punisher catches, but when I decided to have less muscle, what happens to it? I feel weaker when my muscles shrink so that indicates I lose that strength and certainly I became smaller in size. Will the strength and size return to the men and then I can pick it up at will?â Eliza wondered.
âStill, there is the issue about why my looks changed. Maybe being the âWell-built Punisher of all timesâ has more advantages than I imagined. Will I be able to change my looks at will?â wondered Eliza, cupping her breasts.
Eliza gasped in surprise as her breasts swelled creating a deeper cleavage. âThis feels so goodâ Eliza moaned as her hands were quickly overshadowed by warm womanâs flesh. âNo! I canât do this here!! Nobody must see me like this!!â realized Eliza in fear. Overcoming the erotic feeling of her breasts growing, Eliza concentrated in shrinking them before they get too big. Soon, her breasts were back to the way they used to be.
âMaybe I did it too wellâ sighed Eliza. She was back to her normal B-cup. âLetâs see if I can do this right this time. What about if I want to be a C-cup?â said Eliza. She smiled as her breasts enlarged according to her wish. âThe magazine rules!! I have complete control over my body looks!â exclaimed Eliza excited. âNow, I will give Sean something to look at,â grinned Eliza as she concentrated.
âCongratulations Paul on getting married. You donât know how jealous you make me,â said Sean as he shook hands with his cousin.
âHope you are not placing your eyes on my wife, Sean,â grinned Paul.
âOh no!â exclaimed Sean âIâm just jealous that you are actually married. I hope my time comes soon,â he sighed.
âIt will Sean. It will,â said Paul, patting Seanâs back. âBefore you know it, the perfect girl for you will be knocking on your door.â
Sean smiled at the comment, then, glancing at his watch, he said âWhy Eliza is taking so long in the restroom?â
Just then, Sean felt a tap on his shoulder. He turned around to see who it was and gasped to see Eliza shinning as beautifully as the morning sun. âOh my… you look beautiful!!â
âHope you donât mind the time I took in the restroom. I just want to look beautiful for you,â smiled Eliza as she let her improved beauty overpower Sean.
âDefinitely donât,â he said.
âArenât you going to introduce me to your friend?â Paul asked Sean.
âSorry Mr. Davis. Sean can be so distracted sometimes. My name is Eliza Chambers. Iâm Seanâs girlfriend,â Eliza said politely as she shook hands with Paul.
âNice grip Ms. Chambers,â said Paul, rubbing his hand. âDo you work out?â he asked.
âYesâ Eliza smiled innocently. âSorry if I squeezed your hand too hard. Sean likes strong women and sometimes I forget how strong I can be,â Eliza apologized as she mentally reduced her strength a bit.
Sean blushed at Elizaâs comment. He gave her a worried look and she winked at him innocently. Then, she smiled at him with her sultry lips and Sean felt his knees shaking.
âNo apologize is needed,â smiled Paul, mesmerized by Elizaâs beauty. âWell, I better keep going before my wife thought Iâm hitting a gorgeous girl in my wedding day,â joked Paul.
He politely said good-bye to Eliza, and, when he talked with Sean, he whispered in his ear. âRemember about what I told you about the girl and the door? Well, this girl is able to knock off your door if she needs it. Make your move, and donât lose her.â After giving Sean a friendly pat in the back, Paul moved to talk to the other guests.
âPlease, Eliza, donât mention my preferences to anybody,â Sean managed to say, still embarrassed.
âIâm sorry Sean. I didnât want to embarrass you. I promise that it wonât happen again,â Eliza smiled at him.
For a moment both lovers looked at each other. Sean and Eliza felt something between them, something magical and mysterious that only people in love can feel. The orchestra began to play and without words, and Sean took Elizaâs hand.
With the rhythm of the music, Sean and Eliza danced as if they were the only ones in the party. Sean couldnât believe how gorgeous Eliza looked. He felt as if he were in heaven as he danced with the woman he loves.
For her part, Eliza didnât feel any different than how Sean was feeling. She smiled as she felt the strong embrace of Sean around her waist, pulling her against his body. Eliza decided to please Sean by pressing her warm bosom against his chest. Eliza knew that Sean was enjoying her move. She could feel him getting hard.
Eliza smiled seductively at Sean as she decided to give him a âhardâ time. Without calling attention to them, Eliza began to move her hips against Seanâs under regions. Then, she rest her head on his shoulder as she pushed her breasts further into his chest.
Her movements resulted being effective as Eliza sensed that Sean was trying to stay calm. She moved slowly to his ear and whispered with her humid breath, âJust relax, honey. I donât want you to get too excited. Otherwise I wonât able to give you the surprise I have for youâ.
Sean almost came by hearing Elizaâs melodic voice. Sean was intoxicated by the sensual odor Eliza was expelling. âOh Eliza, I love you so much! My heart is beating so fast! I donât think I can love you more than Iâm doing at this moment!â he managed to say.
âI bet you can, Sean. Only if you heart is strong enough to accept the challenge,â whispered Eliza.
âWhat do you mean?â he asked.
âCarefully, raise the veil on my shoulders,â smiled Eliza.
Intrigued, Sean did it and his eyes almost popped out of his face when he saw the solid bicep Eliza had, and she wasnât even flexing. Seanâs mind tried to understand what he was seeing as his body began to hyperventilate.
Eliza knew this will happen and quickly put an arm around his waist and the other around his shoulders. Using her strength, Eliza held Sean firmly against her body. Sensing the strength that Eliza was applying on his body was enough to cause Sean to pass out. Eliza continued dancing with her unconscious boyfriend to avoid suspicious looks. She was happy that she was strong enough to carry him without problem.
âThis is going to be a very interesting night,â smiled Eliza.
To be continued…
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