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Finished? Oh… it is. Well, that was kind of a meandering thing with no point. That'll teach me not to pay attention. Eh but there you go, you get what you pay for.

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Yeah – to be honest, the sex is obviously on the hard side but it's not overly gratuitous. Anyway, FFF – you're great 😀

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Yeah, that was a nice one… to be honest though I with that Drake would return to his (several) unfinished works. Say… oh, I don't know – Crisis Of Infinite Cleavage? Still, patience is a virtue.

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Hahaha, I looked at those comics and went "hey – that art looks familiar!"… well, of course it does! That really is an excellent find there, ze fly and as always your illustrious scanning and finding is greatly appreciated.

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Eh, 200 views and 3 replies is pretty good… by my reckoning 0.1% participation is about average. There's little point in lamenting it.

Anyway – I dislike the goofy Slott.. it does little for me. He's shown he can do a great job with more serious stories though.

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Ok, those fucking rock – straight onto FTF10 with them!

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I'm surprised no one had heard this but Cage said shortly after the interview that he'd been having a giraffe (laugh) and that he had no real intention, it was just something he made up on the spur of the moment.

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As always Alex, you can be relied upon to find the best stuff there is.

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To be honest, her savage days were pretty dire too… even Dan Slott's wacky antics don't quite match up to the really stupid stuff that happened in Savage… and of course, it wasn't even trying to be silly like Byrne's stuff was.

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1. Is something I've been guilty of… I think that if it's a rapid growth story, then it's easy for the author to go "right… she's grown as big as I want…" and then moves on to the next girl… I suppose the remedy to this is either to get your girl to revert or to have a group of girls from the start… rather than going "OH! I want to do some more growth…"

2. I think Spinach is just the FMG of the Ultimate Remote Control/Master PC/Spells R Us… it lets you induce the relevant transformation without any need for an original premise and hence, let's you cut straight to the good stuff.

3. TF does tend to all these cliches… but that's because they're writing shortcuts (like spinach). I think a lot of writers use them because they're either conditioned to think that's expect, they're lazy or just not confident enough in their own skill.

4. With this, I think it's as much about contrasts as anything else… if you take a hot girl and make her hotter, that's not NEARLY as obvious as the below average girl. I suppose it's also more logical that she's the kind of girl that would appreciate these things…

But they are all cliches, certainly and things that we should try and avoid…

I'd suggest another one is that the girl will either discover FMG early in the story – and be immensely turned on by it – or when it starts happening to her, she isn't like "WTF?!" she'll be driven wild with desire!

I'd say that we've covered a fair number of them now.

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