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ParticipantWaiting ……….
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ParticipantGrammer is my achilies heel as well but don’t sweat it the more you write the better it gots. The speeling on the other hand is no preblem.
By the way love the story!Richard
ParticipantThanks for the reply Cowprobe it’s always nice to get feedback on a story. I’ve been going threw some of my old stories and fleshing them out a bit here and there. I was thinking in the next chapter that the necklase might fall into the hands of say Sandy’s older sister and that it acts differently for her. Any thought on how differently?
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ParticipantI love the depth of your character development Marknew
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ParticipantIt’s interesting when you look back at your life and realize at least in my case that i’ve always been attracted to bigger or more muscular women. Society has a pre-set model of what a woman is supposed to look like to be attractive and I understand that, it’s just that I’ve always been turned on by the ones who didnt fit that mould.
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ParticipantWhy not just drain him a little bit hehe
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ParticipantYou are the master Marknew! A great secound chapter.
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ParticipantGreat story, this place just keeps getting better and better.
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ParticipantVery nice first chapter Marknew , looking forward to the next one.
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ParticipantHot , Were was she when I was single? Answer : In diapers
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