[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Cheers to our PNB for it.

As I afeared that you will soon be regretful in saying such a statement.

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

A most excellent piece, dear Christopher.
I's do believe that they are the biggest biceps you have depicted so far and the Alien Piece character is most adorable.
Thank you for creating and posting it and please do thank the original comissioner of the piece.
May your Muse always shine bright.
Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

As to the motivations and so on – that's really all in my head… I tend to write stories in a bit of a strange way. I tend to create stories based on an idea – often a single scene. I'll then fly by the seat of my pants and hope that it works out as a story.

I's write in the same or similair fashion.
Starting with a single concept, character, scene or idea and image from there. Often extending in my's writing beyond the initial concept and evolve the tale into a thing completely different from my's original intensions.

But anyway, as I've said – at the moment, I really can't write this. I'd love to help someone else do it though. Thanks for the thoughts and suggestions.

I's would offer my's aid but am currently working on too many projects.

I's do hope that someone will help you in the endeavour.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

I's spent my's 18th birthday in a Columbian prison, so let us hope that your birthday faired much better, dear friend.
May all your days and years be filled with much joy and may all your greatest Desires find fulfilment.
Peace
Neon

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

As with most thinks in existence, it has more to do with oppotunity than genetics.

In American Inner City schools, which have a high Black and ethnic population, they do not have the funding or facilities to teach swimming to their students and thus have little oppotunity to learn from a young age.
This transfers to teenage and adult life because since they lack the oppotinuties and places to go swimming, they are not as practiced as their White Middle Class counterparts.
American Blacks also suffer the social stigma to venture to such places as pools and beaches because of the racial (mis)conceptions held by society and their own installed issues.

Of course, their physology has a minor part to play but if you were to venture to any coastal regions of Africa, especially areas where many of men make a living as fishermen, you would find that they are quite naturla and powerful swimmers.

If the statement about muscle mass verse natural body fat were true, than Asians would not be as good swimmers as they have proven to be. Because they have naturally less body fat than your average White European and have denser muscles when they are delevoped.
And no snide remarks about the drug use by the Chinese female swimming team. For not all are as such.

I's do not believe in Racial Stigma.
We are all born of the Human Race and should see each other as equals beyond the mere shading of our surfaces.

That is all.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Prophet Tenebrae: You may wish to strip your ideas back until they are a basic skeleton of plot, motivation and character.
The who's, what's & where's, if you will. So you can understand how things should bare out within your own head

This is also a story that seems that it should be written in the Present/Past Tense.
That is have the story start in the middle of the Tale and have flashbacks and allusions to her initial transformation as she deals with her current problems, so the reader can see how things lead to this point for your protagonist.

You may also wish to have the storyline about the female best friend desiring the potion/formula as a follow up story, once the initial premise and characters has been set up.

Best of luck with this piece.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Her build amazes and confuses me

How does it confuse you, dear friend?

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Very nice, dear Rick.

A most natural looking morph.

Since you have so subtly accentuated her arms, it appears as though nothing has been done at all and that is Ms. Li's natural appearance.

I's do but hazard to guess that if you were to show your alteration to a person who did not know the model, they would say 'that is ow she is'.

Though, to add positive criticism: you may wish to add some defination to her forearms in order to give them a sense of symatry and balance.

Kudos unto you, dear friend.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Cute cat.

If you want some poses that helps you check the shaping of the back of your legs (especially your hamstrings), I's can recommend two.

The first is merely standing straight and tensing the muscle around your knee (not your thigh or calf), this brings tension to both the upper calf and the hamstring and really allows you to view any definiation which you may have there.

The second is a little more resque and requires a degree of flexability.
Colloquially known as the 'Moonshot' this pose requires you to be forward as though you are going to touch your toes but instead of reaching right down, you tense your entire leg and raisely slightly onto your toes.
This is a pose which I's recommend for your own private use, due to the exposing nature of it. It has also been removed as an 'Allowed Pose' from American compotitions. So, 'tis a good pose to use to see your progress but not a good one to take photos of and share.

Thank you for this update and best of continuing luck to you, dear friend.

Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Most interesting.
I's am sure that he shall indeed become most popular, or at least reach a Cult Status, amongst the posters here.
Thank you for the post yet again, dear Elee.
Peace
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