[drumsstick master]

Thats… awful. although i fail to see how making AD angry at you is going along with the plan. or its a really awful plan.

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 4

Erin and Dory laughed at how miserable Alyssa looked like.
"Yes AD. You are finally suffering the guilty of your actions"
said Erin.

"You won't be feeling this pain if you haven't used your
powers against your enhanced sisters" said Dory.

"Why you did this to me?" cried Alyssa. "I never harm you. I
just wanted to be your friend".

"You didn't harmed us? It was you the one who put us in this
house" said angered Erin.

"Eight years ago, you faced a group of enhanced women that
try to convince you and Etheria to join forces with them and
together rule the city" said Dory. "And instead of join at your
sisters you fought against them".

"Thanks to Etheria, you were able to take those women powers
and put them into prison. Well, one of those women was our
mother" said Erin as her eyes showed pure hate.

"Our mother?" replied Alyssa. "You mean Dory is your
sister?"

"Very good catch Alyssa" grinned Dory. "Yes, I'm Erin sister.
And not only that…" she said as she was changing.

Alyssa gasped as she saw at Dory getting younger and as she
did it, her body was looking very similar to…

"… we are twins" said Dory as she became identical to Erin.
Then, Alyssa was shocked again as the figure of a woman was
coming out of Dory's body. "Let me introduce you at the
owner of this house" grinned Dory as she pulled out from
inside her a woman that looked exactly as her moments ago.

"When you put our mother in jail, we were too young that we
were put in this adoptive house" explained Erin. "For the
following five years, we were treated like slaves. We were
forced to do all the shores of the house and we were tortured if
we didn't obey"

"Just tell me something AD, did ever crossed your mind that
those women who you put in jail could have a family to take
care of?" asked Dory. "And if you knew, you ever worry about
what was of them? Don't need to reply at that question. We
know the answer"

"For five long years we suffered the destiny you brought on us.
We simply wanted to die" cried Erin. "And where were you?
You, the one who people consider to be a great heroin. What
they will think about you now? You who left at two innocent
girls at the hands of a couple who enjoy hitting us".

"I'm sorry. I didn't know" tried to apologized Alyssa.

"It's too late to ask for forgiveness. Fortunately our powers
appeared to save us. You won't believe how much pleasure we
had as we used our powers against our adoptive parents"
grinned Dory

"My special power let me absorb people inside me and acquire
anything I want from them. For the last years, I had inside me
at our adoptive mother and lived her life while Erin and I
planned our revenge against you. Now I don't longer need her"
said Dory throwing at the woman next to the drained man.

Suddenly, the roof above them exploded as Etheria made her
entry. "Absolute Drainer are you alright" said Samantha as she
flied next to her friend.

"Etheria, why are you here?" asked Alyssa.

"Since you took too long to return, I decided to check the
school by myself. When I saw the gym destroyed, I fear about
you. Using my X-Ray vision I found you here. Are you hurt or
something?" asked Samantha worried.

"Finally we have together at the women who betrayed at our
kind" said Dory. "Erin take care of the intruder"

"With pleasure" said Erin as she charged against Samantha.

"Watch out Etheria. She is strong" warned Alyssa, but it was
too late. Erin hit at Alyssa right on her face. The strength of her
blow sent at Samantha against the wall.

"You definitely are strong" said Samantha as she spitted some
blood from her mouth. "Let's see how strong" she said as she
flied toward her.

Samantha grabbed at Erin and flied with her against the wall,
pushing her inside it. Then, she proceed to hit her very hard
several times pushing her more and more against the wall.
Finally, Samantha gave her a strong punch that make at Erin
crossed to the other room.

"You don't feel so strong now, eh?" smiled Samantha.

"At the contrary" grinned Erin as she raised from the debris.
"I'm feeling stronger than ever" said Erin as she grabbed two
large pieces of the wall and launched them as sonic speed.

"Not so fast" said Samantha as she stopped the pieces with her
telekinesis. Then, she revert the course of the pieces.

Erin remained there as she let at the pieces hit her directly. The
pieces simply turned into dust at the contact with her body.
"Did I mentioned that besides being strong, my other power is
invulnerability" grinned Erin.

"We will see" said Samantha as she flied at super speed against
Erin.

"You can't harm me" said Erin as she stopped Sam's punch
with one hand.

"What the…" gasped Sam as even she was flying at super
speed, Erin didn't move an inch after stopping her.

"I'm stronger than you" said Erin as she pressed Sam's hand
making her cry in pain.

"I haven't done with you yet. You know what people say. If
you can beat them…" Sam said overcoming her pain and
making her hand phased through Erin's hand. "… join them"
she said becoming ethereal.

"No, you won't" said Dory as she raised her hand. Immediately
Samantha became corporeal again.

"How did you…" managed to say Samantha before Erin
knocked her out.

"Thanks sis for your assistance" smiled Erin.

"It was my pleasure" smiled Dory.

"What did you do to her?" asked Alyssa.

"I just used my second power on her. You see, I can nullified
the powers of other enhanced women. Pretty handy don't you
think?" smirked Dory. "Did you get all you need from her?"
asked Dory to her twin.

"Oh yes" smirked Erin as she lifted at the unconscious Etheria.
"She is all yours" she said as she launched at Sam toward her
sister.

"This is going to feel good. Come to me" said Dory as she
caught at Sam, or better said, her body did it. "It seems that you
are going to join us after all" laughed Dory as Samantha's body
was merging with her own.

"No, Etheria!!" Alyssa yelled as she watched in horror as her
friend was disappearing inside Dory.

"It's done" moaned Dory. "I never imagine how good it will
feel to have an enhanced woman becoming part of me".

"You!! Monster!!" said Alyssa filled with anger. The powerful
heroin stood up, her whole body tensed making her muscles
looked very frightening. "How you dare to that to my friend.
You will pay for that" said Alyssa as she tense her fist.

"You won't be able to hurt me, right?" said Dory with
Samantha's voice. "Remember that I'm part of Dory, so if you
hurt her, you will hurt me"

"Stop doing that!!" said Alyssa as she felt her anger burning
every cell of her body. "I will tear you apart with my own
hands if I have to" said Alyssa.

"That won't help" said Dory with her normal voice. "Besides I
have great plans for your friend… Alyssa" said Dory with a
grin on her face. Alyssa couldn't believe what she had heard.
"Oh, don't look so surprised, I now know everything Samantha
knew. Maybe even I will pay a visit at her boyfriend, but first, I
will need to do some changes"

Soon, Dory's body began to age. Her clothes changed into a
copy of Etheria uniform. Thanks to that, everyone could saw
how her body was maturing. Her hair grew longer as her body
filled out. Her nice curves got a lot more pronounced as Dory
was adding Samantha beauty to her own. Her breasts got fuller
and bigger, her legs turned longer and her rear was simple
marvellous.

"This certainly will do it" smiled Dory at her adult and
voluptuous body. "What do you think now Alyssa? Do you
think Richard will accept me? I'm more woman that Samantha
was. I'm all that she was plus more" grinned Dory as she
levitated in the air. "Even her powers are mine" she laughed.

"You will die!!" yelled Alyssa as she unleash all her strength in
the a deadly punch.

To be continued…

[alex]

WOW!  Nice action!  I'm anxious to see what will happen!  Please continue!

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 5

"This is what I was waiting for" smiled Erin as she stepped
between her no longer twin and the imminent attack of Alyssa.
She received the impact right on her chest.

The force of the punch sent at Erin and Dory flying across the
room. Using Samantha's power, Dory was able to phased
through the marble stairs preventing any harm at her body,
while Erin smashed them violently. Her invulnerability didn't
let her feel the pain to be buried by the collapsing stairs over
her body.

Dory emerged from the destroyed stairs in her ethereal form
with a big grin in her face. "You shouldn't have done that, but
I'm glad that you did it. With that punch of hate you have
sealed your doom" laughed Dory. "How do you feel down
there sis?" she asked.

"Extremely… POWERFUL!!" roared Erin as free herself from
her prison causing a great blast. Moving fast Alyssa covered
the body of the drained man and the woman with her own body
as the pieces of marble flew through the house making holes in
the walls as they were cannonballs.

Once the dust settled down, Alyssa could see at Erin standing
in the crater she had just made. She looked around and watch
pleased the destruction she unleashed over the house.

"Did I do all of that?" she said sounding very innocent. "I
simple pushed a little with my hands and the fragments over
me flied away" she giggled. Then, smiling wickedly she added
"Now imagine what I could do if I really put an effort".

"I won't let you do it. I will stop you right here, right now" said
Alyssa raising from the floor

In a quick move, Erin dodged and hit hard Alyssa's stomach.
Alyssa gasped as she felt something she hadn't feel in a long
time. Pain.

"This is impossible" said Alyssa as she coughed some blood.
"My skin is so dense that I can resist the fire power of a tank.
How did you become so strong?" gasped Alyssa.

"That, my dear foe, is the last piece of our plan" smiled Dory.
"Making you feel guilty about draining at that man was only
the beginning. Those guilty feelings made you incapable of
helping at Etheria in a fight against us. That was why she lose
and became part of me".

"The final part of our plan was to force you to use all your
strength, because only by doing that, any possibility of defeat
us will ended" said Erin. "You will see AD, my first power is
not being super strong. It's the ability to increase my strength
according to the amount of force my body is hit"

"I have being beating some football players in order to call
your attention as well as to increase my strength. When we
fight at the gym, I couldn't make you hit me, but when you
manage to stop my punch, the resistance that you put to stop
me really improved my strength greatly. The punches Etheria
unleashed on my body help me to reach a level of strength
greater than her, but still I wasn't a match for you" said Erin.

"That was why I teased you by absorbing at Samantha. To put
you at the limit of your anger and frustration. Only in that
moment you will liberate your whole power allowing at my
sister to overwhelm your levels of strength" said Dory.

"Indeed. It's hard to describe the incredible strength that is
cursing in my body now. It's burning every cell of my body,
making me stronger than you AD. You can imagine how eager
I'm to test this strength against the people who will raise
against us" laughed Erin.

"Now that Etheria is no longer around, you won't be able to
take our powers. And since your power allows you to drain
muscle tissue, I guess that it will be of little use against my
sister. She barely has some. Her strength resides on her power"
smiled Dory.

"I don't need my absorption powers to stop her" said Alyssa as
electrical charges came out of the electrical plugs and hit at
Erin. The most powerful woman in the world yelled of the
terrible pain she was suffering.

"Maybe she is invincible, but certainly she is not immortal.
Now, released at Samantha or I will…" threaded Alyssa.

"Or you will do what? Kill at my sister? Will your hate will
push you to do such terrible thing" said Dory.

Alyssa felt herself trapped. No matter how much she wanted it,
she wouldn't allow herself to fall at their level. With regret, she
stopped using her power over the electricity and Erin was free.

"That really hurt me bitch!!" yelled Erin as she hit at Alyssa
with enough strength to compressed a whole heavy armoured
vehicles to the size of a grape.

This time, it was Alyssa the one who was sent across the room.
She destroyed tables and the furniture that was on her flying
path.

"That was very easy" smiled Erin as she slowly walked were
the defeat heroin laid. Dory floated at her side.

The sisters smiled as they saw at Alyssa laying on the floor.
"She is no longer a threat for us" said Dory as she used her
telekinesis powers to levitated at Alyssa from the floor.

"Think again" said Alyssa as she threw plasma balls against the
sisters. The sisters were taken by surprise and received the
impact directly.

"I will stop you no matter what" said Alyssa as she wave down
her hands in front of Erin. Suddenly Erin fell on her knees and
then collapsed over the floor. "Let's see how you can move
your body now that I have increased the force of gravity on you
by a factor of 10 millions" said Alyssa to Erin.

"And for you" said Alyssa turning her attention to Cory.
"Samantha could be trapped inside you, but I bet that as long as
I don't kill you, she will be fine. Well, let see how much pain
can you stand" said Alyssa as her hands glowed bright red.

"Did you forget that I can nullified your powers?" said Cory
applying her power over Alyssa.

With her hands returning to normal, Alyssa said "You can
avoid that I use my powers over you, but since the strength I
have gained is not a power, I still can use it on you" said
Alyssa.

"Not while I'm around" said Erin as she hit at Alyssa hard.
"With your powers cancelled, your gravity increased is no
longer affecting me. Now, let me show you what real pain is"
grinned Erin.

A tremendous fight took place on that house. Erin and Alyssa
didn't hesiate in use all their strength against each other.
Alyssa knew that is she hit at Erin directly, she will only make
her stronger. So she decided to use other tactics.

Digging her hands on the floor, Alyssa extracted a part of it
making a huge hole. Then, she launched the heavy object
against Erin.

"Don't make me laugh" said Erin as she stopped the object
with her hand. She closed her fist and the piece was
transformed in dust.

Taking advantage of the dust curtain, Alyssa moved around
Erin and got on her back. 'If I applied enough strength, maybe
I could dozed her up before she turns stronger' thought Alyssa.

With a vigorous grip, Alyssa locked her arm around Erin's
neck. "It's time to sleep Erin" said Alyssa as she applied great
amounts of strength.

"Good thinking AD" said Erin as she tensed her neck muscles.
"But you can't apply enough strength to overpower me" she
said as she use her elbow to hit Alyssa's breasts

The impact was so strong that it took out the air of Alyssa's
lungs. While she gasped for air, she broke her embrace over
Erin.

"And now, you go down" said Erin as she grabbed at Alyssa by
her neck and pulled her over her body to launch her on the
floor.

The heroin gasped and fell unconscious.

"Finally. I thought you will never defeat her" said Dory
impatiently.

"Relax sis. There was no way I could lose the match. My
power really was generous with me. It grant me a strength
superior at the one AD gathered together. It will take me a time
to get use at this kind of strength. I can crashed an army as easy
as you can kill a fly. It really excites me the idea of seeing the
terror in the eyes of the soldiers that will fight against us as I
destroy their toys by merely using my bare hands" grinned
Erin.

"Yes, we will be unstoppable" said Dory as she floated at
Alyssa's side. "Once I fully absorb at Absolute Drainer, I will
not only gain all her extraordinary strength, but combining her
powers with the ones I already have of Etheria, I will be able to
extract the powers of every enhance women that will dare to
stop us" laughed Dory.

She descended on the floor and grabbed at Alyssa by her arms.
Dory smiled as she realized that Alyssa was regaining her
conscious. "It's time that you join at your friend inside me.
Soon, you and I will be one and the whole world will tremble
of fear as the enhanced women will take control of the world"
laughed maniacally Dory.

Through the hole on the roof that Samantha made, the sisters
saw the sky getting dark as thunders rumbled in their ears.
Suddenly a lightning descend from the sky and hit at Dory
right on her chest sending her backwards.

"You won't prevail" said a young woman that descend through
the roof's hole. With a move of her hand, the sky turned clear
again. "I have come for you" she said.

To be continued…

[minimanmax]

That a nice twist. I wonder who this new women is. And why she's there.

[Max]

Glad you like this part Minimanmax. I'm not sure if tomorrow I will be able to post Part 6, since I'm still having problems to write it properly.

But I promise that you will find more about this woman in the next chapter for sure.

Max

[Fonk]

Excellent! There's hope after all. 😀 I love this story and I hope that you will be able to post the next part soon. Your twists and turns are brilliant!

[Max]

Glad that you are enjoying the story so far. Right now, I'm working in the next part and I'm trying to get it ready for today. Keep your fingers crossed  😉

Max

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 6

Erin gasped as she saw how beautiful the intruder was. She had
long blonde hair at waist level. An hour glass that any model
will kill for and a female curves that could produce heart
attacks in any man.

"You don't intimate us, weather girl" said bravely Erin
stepping between her fallen sister and the mysterious woman.

"My name is Enhantress and I can do much more that control
the nature elements" said Enhantress "But right now, a person
needs my help and I think that your sister could need a hand
too" she said.

Erin turned her attention to her injured sister and went to help
her. Meantime, Enhantress walked to Alyssa's side and
kneeing next to her, she put her palm over her chest.

"Hold on Absolute Drainer, this will take only a minute" said
Enhantress as a warm light came from her hand and washed
Alyssa's body. Soon, Alyssa's injures began to heal and in no
time the heroin was completed healed.

"Thanks for your assistance Enhantress" said Alyssa trying to
stand up. Her legs didn't response too well and she fell back in
the floor.

"No please. Try to recover your strength. I have only heal your
wounds" explained Enhantress. "Don't worry about the twins.
They are no match for me" she said blinking an eye to Alyssa.

Alyssa for a moment kept looking at this mysterious woman.
She looked so confident and at the same time so gentle. 'I
really hope she can take care of them' thought Alyssa.

"Well, well, well. It seems that we have found another
enhanced woman that has rose against her own kind. Surrender
to us now Enhantress and your life will be spared" said Dory as
her sister helped her to stand up. She still was recovering from
the electricity shock.

"You two have caused too much damage and for that I will
stop you right now" said Enhantress assuming a heroin pose.

"Don't make me laugh" grinned Dory firing ice beams from
her eyes. Enhantress was bathed by them and quickly sealed in
an ice cube. "What is the matter Enhantress? Have you 'frozen'
of fear?" laughed Dory and her sister.

"At the contrary" said Enhantress from inside her cold prison.
She began to glow turning herself into a living flame. The ice
melt and the heroin was free again. "I just want to thank you
for such refreshing bath" smiled Enhantress as she turned into
flesh again.

"I will teach you a lesson for making fool at my sister" said
Erin as she unleashed a hard attack toward Enhantress.
Outstandingly, Enhantress was able to stop the attack with a
single hand.

"My strength!! I don't feel it!!" cried Erin as she felt
powerless.

"That is right Erin. You don't feel it because you don't have
powers. And that means…" grinned Enhantress as she pressed
tight Erin's hands making her cry in pain. "… that you
invulnerability has also gone" said Enhantress.

Erin fell on her knees. The intense pain broke her will and she
begged for forgiveness crying as a little girl. "Please, let me
go" she cried, but Enhantress didn't released her.

"Let her go!!" screamed Dory focusing her telekinetic powers
on Enhantress.

"Relax Dory" said Enhantress as she sent a psychic wave that
made at Dory lost her balance and fell to the floor. "I will be
with you in a moment"

Turning her attention to Erin, Enhantress said "You realize that
I can crush you if I want to, but that would make me an abuser.
When you gained your powers, you should have use them to
stop at the man who slaved you and not kill him. Because the
fact that you are more powerful, not give you the right to take
another life. Remember that" said Enhantress pressing stronger
Erin hand.

Erin couldn't take the pain anymore and fainted off defeated.
Demonstrated her superiority, Enhantress released her hand.
"That will teach you a lesson" she said.

Slowly Dory regained her senses as the effects of psychic
attack passed. Looking at her sister unconscious on the floor
was a bad signal.

"You think that you are too rude right. Now, you will have to
face me without your powers" said Dory facing her plans
against Enhantress to use her own nullifying power.

"That won't help you" said Enhantress. "In case you didn't
notice, I use your power against your sister, and I can use it
against you" she said lifting her arms.

Their nullifying powers hit each other. Alyssa could see the
point where the two powers were fighting as a kind of energy
wall appeared in middle of Enhantress and Dory. That wall was
formed by their energies.

Soon, the energy wall began to move toward Dory. 'She is too
powerful for me' thought Dory as Enhantress powers were
slowly overcoming her own. 'I better run before she nullifies
my power' she thought. In a quick move, she flied away
thought the hole in the roof..

"You won't escape from me" yelled Enhantress. "Please
Absolute Drainer, take care of Erin as I brought back at her
sister" she said before flying at great speed after Dory.

In a matter of seconds, Enhantress passed at Dory and stood in
front of her. "You won't go any further" said confidently
Enhantress.

Looking for a way to escape, Dory saw a building with a big
publicity sign on. She grinned as she used her telekinetic to
twist and bend the metal supports of the sight. The heavy
structure began to collapse.

The noise of metal twisting didn't escape of Enhantress
sensitive ears. She turned her head and watched how the sign
was about to fall into a transited street. People passing by
began to scream in terror.

"You better hurry" laughed Dory as she turned around and
flied away. She stopped abruptly as Enhantress appeared in
front of her way. "Aren't you going to save those people?"
asked Dory astonished to see at Enhantress.

Enhantress smiled and pointing out to the sign, she said "I'm
doing that, see".

Dory's eyes almost popped out of her face as she saw at not
only one, but at two Enhantress flying at super speed toward
the falling sign. One caught the heavy structure with one hand,
as the other project a force field above the passing by people to
avoid they get hurt by the falling debris.

The first Enhantress flew with the sign toward the roof of the
building and firing heat beams from her eyes, she placed the
sign right where it belonged. Meantime, the second Enhantress
wrapped her force field around the debris compacting them
into a harmless boulder which she left in a garbage truck
nearby.

With their job done, the two Enhantress returned at the side of
the original one and merged back into her body. "I have the
capability to clone myself and each of my clones have all my
powers. As you can see, there is no way you can beat me" said
Enhantress.

"No!! I won't give up!! I will fight!!" said Dory enraged.

Enhantress sighed and materialized a pair of strange handcuffs
on Dory's hands. "You will come with me peacefully" she
said.

Dory found herself under a kind of spell as she found herself
unable to disobeyed Enhantress command. "Yes, I will come
with you peacefully" she replied as she flied behind Enhantress
back to the house.

Once in the house, Enhantress put another pair of handcuff on
Erin who was under Alyssa supervision. As her sister, Erin
found herself with no will of her own.

"You have great powers Enhantress. How do you obtain
them?" asked Alyssa astonished at how easy this woman had
defeat at the twins.

"That is something we will discuss later" smiled Enhantress.
"Right now, let's help at Etheria to get out of Dory" she said as
her hands faced at Dory.

Once Enhantress nullified Dory's power, Samantha began to
re-emerge from Dory. When Samantha was out of her body,
Dory lost all she gained from her and became Erin's identical
twin again.

Alyssa helped at Samantha to recover from the shock of being
absorbed as Enhantress used her healing powers to cure at the
owner of the house. By passing so long time inside Dory, the
woman's muscles were atrophied.

"The woman will be able to move again" said Enhantress
standing up.

"Thanks for your help Enhantress" said Samantha still trying to
focus her eyes.

"I was glad to help Etheria" smiled Enhantress. Then, she
walked to where the twins were as she turned her arms etherial.
In a quick move, Enhantress plugged her arms inside the chests
of the girls and tore off from them the nucleolus of their
powers.

"Can you do that?" asked Alyssa and Samantha at the same
time.

"It's easy when you have the tools" smiled Enhantress as she
materialized two containers for the twins' power sources.
"Now that they are ordinary girls again, I will take them to the
justice as well as this woman" she said as she levitated the
bodies of the twins and the woman.

"They have committed crimes and they should be punished for
them. Please wait for me. I will right back" said Enhantress as
she vanished in the thin air letting at Alyssa and Samantha
speechless.

To be continued…

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Very interesting, dear Max, you have a brilliant way of introducing unexpected twists into your tales that really fills I with a certain Awe.
Kudos unto thee for what you have written and what is yet to come.
But, a question and possibly an idea, I's was sharing your stories with my's partner, Abigail, and she asked the question of it (to ask to you): "What is a male was born with the same powers as the Enhanced Women and fought for acceptence amongst their ranks"? A form of sexism and equality if you will, where it is a man alone in this New Woman's World, making his mark. Please, think on this.
Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

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