[Max]

Glad you are enjoying this story so far my friend. This story born by the combination of the ideas of this Forum Members. Due the variety of them, the plot got richer and unexpected, so I can't take the full credit for the unexpected twist (but I'm doing my best to keep people from discovering how this story will end)

Well, replying at your question, which is a very interesting question by the way, I must say that in the possibility he borns with powers as the enhanced women, it will depend in which enviroment he borns.

If he borns in an enviroment where men accept the fact that women are developing powers and that the women don't abuse of them, he will be very happy.

If he borns in a contrary enviroment, he will be despite from other men for not escaping of the misery they lived and women will see him as a danger for their dominance.

Let's say that he is under the protection of Alyssa and Sam, (or maybe with another enhanced woman that will like to take care of him) they will help him to develop his powers and maybe figure out how he got them and maybe that way, men could start to develop them too. That will be the best scenario.

Since every person has the ability to make things right or wrong, I can't assure if this one man will do good things or bad things. we hope that if a man borns with powers, he will use it for good, because it will be a shame if the only man that develops powers will use them for evil.

Hope I have response at your question my friend.

Max

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 7

"That girl could be a powerful ally don't you think AD?" asked
Samantha recovering from her stupor. Alyssa didn't reply as
she seated next to the man whose muscles she stole from him.

Seeing the regret expression on Alyssa, Samantha couldn't
avoid trying to cheer up at her friend. "Don't feel so bad
Alyssa. You fell into the trap of those horrible brats. It wasn't
your fault" tried to console Sam.

"No Etheria. It was my fault. The man claimed his innocent
and I didn't take the time to prove if he was saying the true or
not. I acted careless and now he is going to suffer for my
mistake" cried Alyssa. Sam only hugged at her friend to give
her some comfort.

"I'm back!!" announced Enhantress as she reappeared in the
house. "You will be glad to know that Erin was sentenced to a
life prison for killing at the owner of the house" said
Enhantress as she began to multiply herself.

Alyssa and Sam watched in awe as clones of Enhantress began
to pop from her as if they were popcorn. The clone army
started to rebuild the house at great speed using different
powers. "Ahem…" called the original Enhantress. "Do you
want to hear the story or want to watch how I repair the house"
smirked Enhantress.

"The story please" said Sam and Alyssa still astonished at the
powers that Enhantress had.

"Well, Dory and Wilma, which is the name of the owner of the
house, were sentenced at 40 years of prison for their crimes
against each other. Maybe Dory and Erin can reduced their
sentence alleging that they were motivated by the abused
inflicted by Wilma and her husband, but I know that they won't
succeed" smiled Enhantress.

"I'm very impressed by your powers Enhantress, and I will like
to ask you a favour if you are capable of it" said Alyssa. "For
my mistake, this man has suffered a terrible fate. It's
impossible for me to undo what I have done, but maybe you
know a way to save him. Please" begged Alyssa.

"No problem Alyssa. I will do it for you" smiled Enhantress.
"Just hold the hand of the man for a while".

Not knowing what to expect, Alyssa seated next to the man and
took his hand. "Like this?" asked Alyssa.

Smiling, Enhantress nodded and became ethereal. "This will
only take a moment" she said as she possessed at the man.

"No way!!" gasped Alyssa as she felt the feeling of her
muscles being drained. To her happiness, she saw at the man
slowly recovering his older shape. Once he was restored
Enhantress left his body.

Don't losing a moment, Enhantress used her healing powers to
cure at the man. Then, he slowly regained consciousness.
"Where am I?" he asked.

"You were brought here against your will and passed a horrible
experience. For that reason I feel very sorry for my actions and
I asked your forgiveness" apologized Alyssa.

"Horrible moment? What horrible moment?" asked the man.

Mentally, Enhantress told at Alyssa. 'I erased his memories
about the incident'

'Oh!' gasped mentally Alyssa.

"What my friend is trying to say is that you were trapped in a
middle of a fight between enhanced women. She couldn't help
that you were badly injured, but I healed you completely"
smiled Enhantress.

Her smile melted the man's heart. "Really?" he asked stupefy
by Enhantress beauty.

"Yes and since everything is fine now, you can go back to your
home" said Enhantress placing her hand over the man's
shoulder. Her touch and aroma almost made at the man messed
his pants.

"OK" he said still not able to believe at the woman his eyes
were looking at. He did what she said and stepped out of the
house.

"That is what a call female power" said Samantha. "You got
him completely hook Enhantress. Was it another of your
powers?" she asked.

"I promise that we will have time to discuss this in a future
meeting" said Enhantress calling at her clones and they fused
in her. "Right now, the house is repaired and at your name
Samantha. Since the previous owner won't be able to use it
again, I arranged that you could take it. I know how long have
you being looking for a place to stay with Richard" smiled
Enhantress as she handled the papers of the house.

"For you Alyssa, I have a special favour to ask you. Please
keep these containers until the next time we meet again" said
Enhantress as she gave at AD the containers with the powers of
the twins. "I promise that we will talk more another day. In the
meantime, take care" she said and vanished in the thin air.

"Whoa!! That girl is loaded with powers" said Samantha.

"Not only that" said Alyssa. "She seems to know us very well.
In no moment, we reveal our real names to her, but she knew
them. Also, she knew about your necessity and your
relationship with Richard. That woman was very mysterious"
she said looking at the containers. "I will be looking forward
for our next meeting"

Five months later, Samantha and Richard visited the Dodson's
mansion. Leon and his wife were more than happy to receive
them in their home. "Follow me this way Richard. I bet that the
girls have a lot to talk about" smiled Leon as he guided at
Richard to other room were the pool table was installed.

Alyssa and Samantha hugged each other as they haven't seen
each other for two weeks. Alyssa couldn't avoid smiling as the
light of the room made sparked the golden ring around her
friend's finger.

"Glad you are back from your honey moon Sam. I bet that you
had a great time" smiled Alyssa.

"Sure I had. I'm so glad that I revealed my secret to Richard.
He was surprised to know that his girlfriend was the heroin
Etheria. He mentioned he had a great fixation for Etheria and
when he couldn't be gladder that I was her. You won't believe
all the kinky stuff we do with my powers" giggled Samantha.

"Oh don't make me start about Leon's fetishes. If you knew
that he…" Alyssa got interrupted as another person made notice
its presence.

"Hello Alyssa and Samantha. As I promised, I returned to talk
to you" smiled Enhantress.

"Well, I think that the first thing you need to us is how you
know about our real names, our lives. It's obvious that you
know where I live" said Alyssa.

"Ah that!!" giggled Enhantress as she hit her head sticking out
her tongue. "Sorry if I worry you, but I know everything about
you because I'm from your future" explained Enhantress.

"I knew it" smiled Samantha. "And I bet that one of your
powers is the ability to copy other enhanced women powers,
right?"

"That is right. That is what I'm called Enhantress. My mother
put me that name trying to synthesized Mistress of the
Enhanced" she giggled. "Mom and her crazy ideas"

"And if I want to bed, your mother is in this house, isn't she?"
asked Samantha.

"In order to say the true, yes" blushed Enhantress.

"Ah ha!! I knew. You came back from the future to save at
your mother right? You are Katie. Alyssa's daughter" said
Samantha.

"Not exactly" said Enhantress.

"Don't tell me that you are mine" gasped Samantha.

"I hear my name aunt Sam. Did you call me?" said Katie
stepping into the room. Then, the little girl's eyes focus on the
beautiful woman that was joining at Sam and Alyssa. "And that
pretty woman? Who is she?" asked Katie.

"I, little one…" said Enhantress as she levitated at the girl
toward her arms. "… am your daughter"

"WHAT??!!" gasped Alyssa and Samantha.

"Yes, I'm Katie's daughter" smiled Enhantress as she cuddled
at her mother.

To be continued…

[BlackKusanagi]

NIIICE Ness. Im loving the story. ^_^

[minimanmax]

well I have to say your doing really well. Don't worry about being predictable just write what you want. This is your story. you can through in curves any time you want. You are doing a great job so far keep it going.

[Max]

Despair
By Max

Part 8

"That will make me…?" Alyssa alone gasped this time.

"… my grandmother" said Enhantress. "Since you never liked
that I call you like that, you insisted that I call you by your
name"

"Even it sounds impossible, something in my heart tells me
that you are indeed my descent" said Alyssa. "Well, if that is
the case, come here and give at your grandmother a big hug"

Enhantress put at her mother in the ground and ran to hug at
grandmother. Alyssa's gasped as she felt the strong embrace
that her granddaughter had. "Oh my… !! You are very strong"
exclaimed Alyssa.

"Sorry Alyssa. I forgot that in this time, you are not that
strong" Enhantress apologized.

"It's good to know that in the future I will keep getting
stronger" smiled Alyssa.

"Yes. You are the third strongest woman in the world" smiled
Alyssa.

"And who are the other two?" asked Samantha.

"My mother is the second one, and I'm the first" smiled
Enhantress. "For now"

"What you mean for now? Don't tell me that you and your
mother have tests to see who is stronger" asked Sam.

"Kind of…" giggled Enhantress. "We don't do that anymore.
There is no way we can measure our strength now. Even the
most solid substance the mankind has managed to create
represents no challenge for us. The last time we tested our
strength, we were capable of lifting an entire island from the
ocean. Since then, we have kept increasing our strength, but we
do not test it because we don't want to destroy the planet"

"And how are you able to increase your strength?" asked
Alyssa.

"That is thanks to the little souvenir that I left you the other
day. Remember the power of Erin, right?" asked Enhantress.

"Are you telling me that Katie will gain that power?" asked
Alyssa.

"Yes, and when I develops my copy power I will copy that
ability from her. From time to time, we fight each other
resulting in the increase of our strength. Since we are also
invulnerable, we have great fun doing it. Last time my mother
won, that means that I'm stronger than her now" Enhantress
said.

"Nice compensation for losing" said Samantha.

Alyssa was about to say something when Katie pulled her
jeans. "Mommy, mommy. That woman says that I will be
strong, mommy. Is that true??!!" asked excited Katie.

"It seems so my little princess" said Alyssa.

"Yupi!!" exclaimed Katie. "I will be even stronger than you
mom" said Katie flexing her skinny arms. "I'm going to tell
dad" said the excited girl as she ran to where her father was.

"You have really made her day Enhantress. Katie is very happy
now" said Alyssa.

"Please, call me Julia. That is my name" said Enhantress.

"OK Julia, please tell us more about the future and what
exactly brought you to this particular time" asked Alyssa.

"Well, about the future, I'm glad to tell you that it's very
beautiful. Right now, the 70% of the female population is
enhanced, but that hasn't disturbed the balance between men
and women. The women of my time are very gentle and
comprehensive while the men had get used to have at their
mothers, sisters, girlfriends, and even daughters being superior
to them due their powers. Mankind has accepted very well the
change in the evolution" said Julia.

"You were the first guardians of peace between the enhanced
women. As the years passed, other women joined at your cause
and formed a team to stop the abuse of evil enhanced women.
That organization still exists, but the number of women that
used their powers for evil is lower every day" said Julia.

"Talking about why I'm here, well, one thing about time is that
you can't mess with it. When I began to explore my time travel
power, you and Samantha mentioned something that really
surprised me. You and she told me that you have met me in the
past and help you to defeat at two power enhanced women.
You told me that in order to keep things in their natural order, I
should need go back in time and be sure that the events that
happen in the past will really happen" said Julia.

"For example, see this picture" said Julia materializing a
normal picture. "This photo haven't being taken so far"

Alyssa and Sam saw that the picture was a group photo in
which they appeared hugging at their husbands while Katie
was in Julia's arms. "Look at our clothes. This photo was taken
today!!" gasped Sam.

"Indeed, Can you see that you and Richard are tenderly smiling
at each other?" said Julia. "The reason why you are smiling
like that is the same that why this picture is so important for me
and for my parents".

"Talking about your parents. Katie will have to get marry in
order to have children. I wonder who will be the lucky man
that will win my daughter's heart?" said Alyssa.

"You will meet him… in 9 months" smiled Julia patting Sam's
abdomen.

"You mean…!!??" gasped Sam looking down.

"Yes. This photo is important to my parents because it's their
first picture together" giggled Julia. "My father is the baby that
is growing now in your womb Samantha. In the future, you
told me that you were the first woman to know about her
pregnancy by other people" laughed Julia.

"Oh my… Alyssa. I'm going to be a mother!!" said Samantha
at the edge of tears. "I can't believe it" she cried in the shoulder
of her friend.

It was in that tender moment that Sam realized something.
"Wait a second. This also means that you are my granddaughter"
said Samantha as she hugged at Julia. "What a great day. I don't
only discover that I'm going to be a mother, but I'm already a
grandmother" said Samantha. Then, looking at Alyssa, she
added "It seems that we are going to end being family".

"I can't be happier" said Alyssa as she hugged at Samantha and
Julia.

"Hey Alyssa, you know why Katie is jumping up and down all
over the… oh! Excuse me, I didn't know we have more
guests?" said Leon as he noticed Julia's presence. He entered
into the room followed by Richard.

"Darling, I want to present you a very special lady. Her name is
Julia" introduced Alyssa.

"Nice to meet you" said Julia as she shook hands with Leon
and Richard.

"She is our future granddaughter" smiled Alyssa.

"No, are you kidding me?" said Leon.

"No. She is Katie's daughter. Julia mentioned at her 'mother'
that in the future she will be even stronger than I. That was
why Katie is so happy" explained Alyssa.

"Whoa!! This is a hard pill to shallow" said Richard patting
Leon's back.

"You can help him to pass it as Julia's father will be our baby"
said Samantha caressing her abdomen.

"Are you pregnant?" gasped Richard.

"Yep. Do you like that?" asked Sam.

"Like it? I love it!!" exclaimed Richard as he kissed at Sam.

"Sorry to interrupted this moment, but I don't have much time
left. I can only be out of my time for 30 minutes" said Julia as
she materialized a photo camera. "Can you set the camera
grandfather?" asked Julia giving the camera to Leon.

"A photo?. I want to be on it!!" exclaimed Katie as she rushed
into the room.

"Here, let me carry you" smiled Julia as she picked up at her
mother.

"It's a pity that Chris will miss the picture" sighed Leon as he
set the camera. "Everyone ready?" he yelled running toward
Alyssa's side.

Samantha and Richard looked at each other with love in their
eyes knowing that they were going to be parents. Leon held
hands with Alyssa as they smiled to the camera. Julia put at
Katie on her lap holding her gently. "Say cheese!!" yelled
Katie.

"Cheese!!" they said as the camera immortalized a special
moment.

The End.

************************************************

Well my friends, I really hope you have enjoyed this third
adventure with Alyssa. All comments and feedback about
it are welcome and encouraged. Thanks.

Max

[minimanmax]

that was a nice story. I hope there will be more at some time. may be when AD's daughter and son are growing up. or some other Idea's that I can't seem to think of.

[Fonk]

Brilliant, just brilliant. 😀

[The_Pimp_NeonBlack]

Well, replying at your question, which is a very interesting question by the way, I must say that in the possibility he borns with powers as the enhanced women, it will depend in which enviroment he borns.

If he borns in an enviroment where men accept the fact that women are developing powers and that the women don't abuse of them, he will be very happy.

If he borns in a contrary enviroment, he will be despite from other men for not escaping of the misery they lived and women will see him as a danger for their dominance.

Let's say that he is under the protection of Alyssa and Sam, (or maybe with another enhanced woman that will like to take care of him) they will help him to develop his powers and maybe figure out how he got them and maybe that way, men could start to develop them too. That will be the best scenario.

Since every person has the ability to make things right or wrong, I can't assure if this one man will do good things or bad things. we hope that if a man borns with powers, he will use it for good, because it will be a shame if the only man that develops powers will use them for evil.

That is a fair answer, dear Max, and my's partner, Abigai,l did enjoy reading and your story, but here question was more focus on how the Ehanced Women may treat him in a more Worldly and Social scene. As in: would they treat him with respect, would they treat him as other capable women were in bygone eras and try to shun him or would they merely outright reject him and ostrosise him?
It does bare something to consider.
But thank you for the tale. Was most wonderful.
Peace
The Pimp NeonBlack

[BlackKusanagi]

Loved the story. lol. Man AP, lol you make me fall in love with the villain too much.  👿

[Max]

Glad you have enjoyed this new adventure my friends. Thanks for your nice comments about it.

BlackKusanagi, you have let me wondering something. Which villainess you fall in love? Erin or Dory?  😛 (They are twins after all  😀 )

The_Pimp_NeonBlack, sorry I couldn't answer properly your question, but I didn't want to spoil the end and the vision Julia revels of the future. In her time, if a man appears and have powers, certainly it will be great. I can't deny that the rest of the men will be envious of him, because all women will like to be with that man (Imagine how powerful the baby of that union can result)

So, to proper answer your question, yes. He will be accepted.

Max

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