A Kind of Magic

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  • September 21, 2004 at 4:54 am #977
    Richard
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    And that my friends is my conundrum, if( and it’s a big if) I do write another chapter do I make Sandy into a power mad amazon forcing Sean to wish her bigger and stronger until she possess the power of a god! Or do I let them explore the magic in a more loving holsom way? Give me your opinions, ideas and who knows what can happen in the wonderfully wacky world of FMG fiction.

    September 21, 2004 at 5:39 am #978
    kasumihunter
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    write both have us choose which ending we liked to read.

    September 21, 2004 at 6:09 am #979
    alex
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    hmmm…

    You could it have both ways. Her being a dominant, poweful, yet loving amazon. I’m not really into the whole x1000000 stronger thing. I think she’s plenty strong as she is, and if she gets any bigger, it will become a giantess story.

    What you could do, is have her make him give her some of his strength and muscles, being even more in her power. Mark Newman usually does this pretty well, sometimes in a pretty suffocating way. But it really works. Just a thought.

    September 22, 2004 at 1:26 am #980
    Cowprobe
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    Ristard why not have these ‘wish realities’ fight it out.

    For instance a wish phrased "So I could see the best and worst that could happen" but with REALITY itself instead diverging into two echoes.

    So you could have ‘Mini-Gaintess’ vs ‘Soccer Mom to age regressed kidnappers’ and the respective partners of each.

    The battleground might be the lottery alternate future LA that you placed them in.

    Great story though! It would be interesting to see it from the point of view of the girl before she even casts the spell. Perhaps the only way she even managed to complete the sorcery was that ‘future self Goddess drunk with power’ whispered the formula into her younger self’s ear.

    Great story though thank you for sharing!

    September 22, 2004 at 6:30 am #981
    Amazon Lover
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    I’m votin’ for loving and wholesome. I’m a lover, not a fighter. I like the passion of two lovers more than the conflict of a dominatrix and dominatee.

    September 22, 2004 at 11:49 am #982
    Mark Newman
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    I’d probably end up doing both. For example. It can start out loving and sweet and she might suggest making her stronger and stronger as part of a sex game. But things have a way of getting out of hand. Eventually she becomes superhuman and the lust for power takes over.

    September 22, 2004 at 1:36 pm #983
    Richard
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    Hey Marknew were’s your next chapter! Stop reading and start writing LOL.

    September 22, 2004 at 4:10 pm #984
    Mark Newman
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    Don’t expect anything soon. I’m on my 3rd Wednesday scene now and I have a lot of ideas left for the day. I’m enjoying it, and you will too.

    Eventually.

    😉

    September 22, 2004 at 11:11 pm #985
    Richard
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    NP take your time. He says tapping his fingers on the computer desk.

    September 23, 2004 at 5:12 am #986
    kasumihunter
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    lol

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