Re: New story I wrote

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  • May 1, 2006 at 8:59 pm #12928
    suprwmn
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    I'm not sure if I've ever read any of your work before, helplesscase, but I'll sure be watching for it now.  Very nice writing.

    May 2, 2006 at 7:44 am #12929
    Pug
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    I enjoyed it – I'd like to see the men have a little more resistance, but I enjoyed it.

    Pug

    May 4, 2006 at 6:13 pm #12930
    Mark Newman
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    My version of Boys Will Be Boys is now up on DtV.

    May 4, 2006 at 7:18 pm #12931
    kuopiofi
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    Address?

    May 4, 2006 at 7:31 pm #12932
    Mark Newman
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    http://www.thevalkyrie.com/stories/marknew/bwbb.txt

    May 5, 2006 at 6:17 am #12933
    Erik Von Halle
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    Very Good Story! It reminds me of Matt & Emma.  I really liked the magical changes but I keep wondering how did the girls learn or find the magic?

    Now the big Question. What happens next?

    Erik Von Halle
    Golden, Colorado

    May 5, 2006 at 12:08 pm #12934
    Mark Newman
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    Actually, it was the inspiration for Matt and Emma. 

    As for the source of the magic, "when you wish upon a star …."

    And now, over to Helplesscase.

    May 5, 2006 at 3:01 pm #12935
    00tree
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    Year zero was a very good storie but Year One ROCKED!!!  :-D. It was great to see some interaction between the males and females that wasn't always violent.

    May 7, 2006 at 8:45 am #12936
    minimanmax
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    I agree with 00tree. It is nice to see woman becoming bigger and stronger with out bosting it and continualy putting the men down.

    May 8, 2006 at 12:23 pm #12937
    pogo
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    I disagree. I like the story the way it is. Only thing is that some scenes stop to soon 🙂

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