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  • February 7, 2006 at 1:02 am in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17923
    AbyssPlanet
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    For some reason I never bothered to read this thread.
    I have no idea why, because this is absolutely amazing stuff. "Instant classic" would be an accurate description of this story. Excellent work!

    February 6, 2006 at 2:54 pm in reply to: deviant artist worthy of this place… #21934
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    I *love* his artwork. I've got a pretty decent collection of stuff he's posted, and he's arguably my favorite FBB artist of all time.

    February 6, 2006 at 2:48 pm in reply to: HARDBODY Chapter One: No limits (nsfw) #22176
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    Holy crap, I love it! I can't wait to read the next part. Keep up the good work, because this is great stuff!  😮

    February 3, 2006 at 6:35 pm in reply to: The Experiment (NSFW) #21747
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    Hell yeah. I'd love to see a second page. Keep up the good work!

    February 2, 2006 at 2:19 pm in reply to: "What If…" Sonya took "The Serum"? (UPDATED w/ Page 7!) #21417
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    I love your artwork, DCM. I've said that before, right? Well, it bears repeating.
    I love your artwork.

    January 23, 2006 at 2:20 am in reply to: update on progress #20918
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    I applied to join the Yahoo group.

    January 19, 2006 at 11:37 am in reply to: Shy Amazon. #20941
    AbyssPlanet
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    Always a fan of your work atari. good job.

    Ditto. That's great stuff!

    January 16, 2006 at 12:25 am in reply to: Deep Cover Op (Complete!!!) #20646
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    It just seemed like the last chapter was written in a totally different tone than the previous ones. It was almost as if you wanted to rush to finish the story up as quickly as possible, instead of taking the time with it like you had with the prior chapters.

    For what it's worth, I thought the first two chapters were *great*. I read this kind of stuff for the FMG, and your story had it in spades, and it was awesome.

    January 15, 2006 at 5:52 am in reply to: Deep Cover Op (Complete!!!) #20644
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    To be perfectly honest, I don't know how much I liked the ending of the story.

    In all seriousness, I read your story for the muscle-growth. The stuff in parts one and two were fantastic, part three was good… but the last chapter didn't have much at all.
    The whole "world domination" plot seemed really rushed. Seriously, the story goes from "she's an agent" to "she takes over Manhattan" to "she rules the world" in a matter of paragraphs, and suddenly the story hops ahead several decades, to where nothing is even recognizeable, and she's being overthrown… and then she wanders the earth and then the story ends. The whole last chapter seemed like something that should have been spaced out over several lengthy chapters. It all read like plot exposition, not like actual character interactions like the previous chapters had.

    Just my thoughts.  😐

    January 15, 2006 at 5:44 am in reply to: Annie Ample- All Grown Up #20715
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    I liked the story a lot! Annie Ample has been one of my faves for a long time, and I certainly think you did the character justice. Good job!

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