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I'm torn between saying that your Start Me Up seires is my favorite, or the S.W.A.T. series. Either way, they are both magnificent. This one, in my opinion, has a better transformation scene. Will you continue this series?

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You can use physical torture for a criminal, if you want, but I prefer psycological torture. One of my favorites is binding a person to a chair or otherwise putting them into a situation where they are in a helpless position. Then, with them conscious and paying attention, make it clear that you are going to bring that person within an inch of death. Make them believe it in whatever way possible. Then ask someone near you to go and get a couple of random items, making it sound like they are needed for some diabolical torture. Then leave them alone, thinking about what you are about to do to them. This technique is especially useful for gathering information and getting people to squeal. This is not an idea that I came up with myself, but is one that I found in a book from one of my favorite fantasy writers. Can anyone guess who the writer is or the book?

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Who saw that coming? Anyone? Anyone? Me neither. 😉

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Please don't tell me that you just made a pun. I'm supposed to have the twisted sense of humor, not you.  😉

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Small but satisfying. I'm beginning to think that you are a master at teasing people. Even if I started reading at this point, I'm sure that I'd get hooked anyway. Very nice job so far.

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Ah. I remember reading most of these stories. Very nice work. In all honesty, I never really got the hang of writing in the first person, but you do it beautifully. I hope that you will post some of your work here.

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Amazing!

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Very nice! You're off to a great start, and I can't wait for the rest of the transformation. You've definitely got some talent.

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Now why didn't I think of that?  😳

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I haven't decided what I'm going to do from here yet. I've already started on the next chapter and I have written another story for a contest on the Coin of Chaos Yahoo Group under the name dragoon0123456789. I'm thinking about writing other stories, if not other series. For those interested enough to read this, if I do write more stories, I will refrain from using any main character except for Jinn and possibly Mayim. There are two reasons for this. The first is that I have a number of different screen names, so you can find my work more easily, no matter what name I use. The other though, is another puzzle that I will let anyone curious figure out. It's not that I really enjoy keeping people in the dark, it's just that it is something that I am not comfortable with saying myself. At least not to anyone that I don't know personally. If, however, someone were to guess it, I would explain it in full.

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