[Jayne Greye]

Thanks for the thoughts on the book Qb

[Jayne Greye]

Thanks Qb. I appreciate the kind words about the book.

[Jayne Greye]

Hi Alex – thanks for your response. Point 2 is the only answer that I disagree with – first – personally I’m not opposed to dominatrix type stuff, but I do understand that one sided can be a problem. In my newest work (still in production) I’m fighting that concept while still trying to keep it organic. Finally, I guess I dont know the lingo – what is GTS?

[Jayne Greye]

The book will be live tomorrow on smashwords too: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/916676

[Jayne Greye]

I have no problem with characters who use drugs/roids. If it fits in the plot why not (since the audience I write for is not young adult/children). As for smoking I detest it personally so have never considered having my characters do it. As for product placement I dont see the point unless it was a film script and I was making money for it. Only then, would I approve if I didn’t hate the corporation associated with it.

[Jayne Greye]

Interesting thread. For me, I enjoy a good FMG story and there is almost limitless content now. There are two problems with most of the stories for me though which have limited my reading. #1 There are a ton of poorly written, grammatically incorrect literature out there. Secondly, as a point of personal preference, I enjoy a more realistic story where the FMG has a a logical cause and develops slowly. That is part of the reason why are started writing novels myself:
Muscle Therapy: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07M7996TV
Muscle Love: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07H6Y2HSY
Backstories: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07MXLGQVB
Aside from a few favorites, finding stories to read that are both well written and realistic are few and far between. Thankfully Qbikk has posted a collection of some of the better ones recently so I’d check that out too

[Jayne Greye]

paperback version: https://www.amazon.com/dp/179501346X

[Jayne Greye]

The supplement to this novel (the backstories of the three women from the first two novels) is due out this Saturday.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07MXLGQVB

[Jayne Greye]

Here it is:
I had purchased the authors first book since i am a fan of FBBs and FBB themed literature and was excited to read this book as well. The first book is very good and I suguested you read it. I wish I could post a review for that one but I bought it from a different bookseller.

This book tracks Kyle as he is outed for his love of muscular women at work and must go on a journey of self discovery to find the root of his fetish.

The book does a really good job of tracking Kyle as he goes to Vegas and indulges in a scene of muscle worship with a top FBB and then meets Josie a muscular single mom as they strike up a relationship. Along the way Kyle begins attending therapy for his addiction to female muscle and meets Kristy a championship FBB who forces him to live every schmoes greatest dream and worst nightmare as she plunges herself in a quest to get even more massive.

The writing was very good and in depth and the writers really have a way of adding small details to make you feel as if you are experiencing what the character is going through. Also because this is written by a husband and wife team and the wife is a lifter as well the female characters are very well fleshed out which is a nice contrast to the usual literature of this sort. Overall very good and I am highly looking forward to any future works by these authors!

[Jayne Greye]

First review is on smashwords: https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/916673

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