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  • in reply to: Zupergirl #1831
    lfan
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    Well, thought I’d post a link to ‘Part 2’ which was an entry into the same Workshop as Marknew’s ‘The Super One’ (theme = "Someone gets superpowers and this makes someone else upset")

    http://www.superwomenmania.com/storybank/bank/’Z’upergirlz%20-%20Film%20at%20Eleven%20by%20Lfan.txt

    Not much, if any, ‘growth’, either size or muscle-wise, but definitely involves the "girl gaining strength" theme if that is your cup ‘o joe!

    Please forgive the atrocious typos and lack of proofreading.

    Peace

    LF

    Great start to this story! I think I see where this is headed, and with the hints dropped by Marknew’s post I’d like to offer a humble suggestion. If Superman did lose his powers I think it would be ironically funny if, while trying to make restitution, Z "accidentally" only makes him into a backwards spelling magician, that the other members of the JL underestimate 😆

    in reply to: The BEA Addventure #6711
    lfan
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    Lurker —

    Glad to see you post and love your superpowered gal threads on Superstories. Sent you an email before inviting you over to SWM, but dunno if you got it.

    Irregardless, keep up the great work!

    LF

    P.S. Reminder to Self to add to the Gold K story thread 😛

    I almost posted this without identifying myself, then realized I use a different name here.

    I am The Lurker Unleashed on the BEAddventure, and while my main goal over there is breast expansion I do like to work in superhuman females when possible.

    I am also the Lurker Unleashed on the Superstories Addventure:

    http://www2.superstories.net/addventure/author.aspx?author=The+Lurker+Unleashed

    in reply to: New Story — The Super One #7344
    lfan
    Participant

    Sorry for the dups….was throwing an error for me!

    😛

    LF

    in reply to: New Story — The Super One #7343
    lfan
    Participant

    Mark,

    Like I just posted over at the SWM forums, an excellent story! Really loved it, especially all the detail you gave to the contest itself. That along with Andrea’s personality made the story! Your attention to the details sets you off from most authors in stories like these!

    Kudos, my man!

    Lfan

    P.S. Great topic selection by the way too…..was fun to write!

    It seems that with the corruption of the board on July 4th the link to my new story for the SuperWomanMania Forum competition was deleted. So here it is again. (For those waiting for the next installment of Pendant Changes, that’s what I’ve been working on instead)

    http://www.superwomenmania.com/storybank/bank/Randolph%20and%20Kim%20Chapters%201-4%20by%20Conceptfan.txt

    in reply to: New Story — The Super One #7342
    lfan
    Participant

    Mark,

    Like I just posted over at the SWM forums, an excellent story! Really loved it, especially all the detail you gave to the contest itself. That along with Andrea’s personality made the story! Your attention to the details sets you off from most authors in stories like these!

    Kudos, my man!

    Lfan

    P.S. Great topic selection by the way too…..was fun to write!

    It seems that with the corruption of the board on July 4th the link to my new story for the SuperWomanMania Forum competition was deleted. So here it is again. (For those waiting for the next installment of Pendant Changes, that’s what I’ve been working on instead)

    http://www.superwomenmania.com/storybank/bank/Randolph%20and%20Kim%20Chapters%201-4%20by%20Conceptfan.txt

    in reply to: Ultimate Black Cat (part 2) #2756
    lfan
    Participant

    Add myself to the list of people that really enjoyed this installment. Cannot wait for more! Wonderful job, Rick (also sent you PM saying as much)

    LFan

    http://sginc.ubergirls.org

    in reply to: Zupergirl #1828
    lfan
    Participant

    Ah, Mark…that is the underlying question isn’t it? Well, you’ll have to wait to see what happens in the sequel! Let’s just say I think we share similar tastes……

    LF

    Very nice. Now, if she asked for the "powers of Superman," does that mean she has gained powers equal to Superman’s or has taken his powers from him?

    Naturally you know what I would have written!

    in reply to: Zupergirl #1826
    lfan
    Participant

    Mucho thanks, guys….. just a quick word that if anyone liked the "What If" concept of the piece (not to mention the ‘ubergirl therme’), you might wanna check out the rest of the submissions on my site that this came from:

    http://sginc.ubergirls.org/ficcontest1_results.cfm

    Peace

    LF

    *looks up from copy of "Comic Book Magic for Dummies"*

    Very nice work. You’re definitely no slouch at writing. Lots of fun. Hope we’ll get to see more. And Cowprobe had some pretty good suggestions.

    *goes back to book, puts on magician’s top hat, and waves wand*

    "Revessoc knab ytnom/lrigrepuz a su evig!"

    in reply to: Favorite Parts — Loss of Control #207
    lfan
    Participant

    Marknew —

    First of all, am a HUGE fan of your stories…..favorites which come to mind are:

    Jilly Milly

    Lilly Lane

    Oh No III (an oldie but a goodie) — always wanted a sequel

    Sharon

    The first three of these are the "role reversal" type where our heroine (or in the case of Joanna, villianess) gets powers of the hero transferred into them. Suddenly, our frail little vixen now feels like a volcano of power and is more than willing to try out her powers and see if she’s as strong as she feels. Yep…..that pretty much nails it on the head for me.

    Due to my proclivity for this common "origin" theme, I don’t finish many stories that I’ve written — LOL. From that standpoint, its the whole acquisition/exploration of powers and how our heroine (and the people around her) first react to the sudden shift in the "balance of power" that I enjoy most in the stories.

    I normally stay in the shadows in this genre realm of cyberspace cause the "muscle" stories I prefer (and write) usually involve "hidden muscle" — the superstrength and powers are there, but in a lithe, model-like body. While it makes sense to grow muscles with the strength, I enjoy the idea of all that strength and power bottled up in the unlikely, svelte form of a simple girl/woman (aka Lilly Lane). I suspect I’m prob in the minority on that round these parts, but you asked……

    Irregardless, keep up the great work — everone!!

    Larafan

    Curator, Supergirls Inc

    http://sginc.ubergirls.org

    I have a special directory of role reversal stories and never tire of writing them. I can read sequences like the folloiwng again and again and never lose the … enthusiasm.

    "Hey, what happened to my muscles?"

    "Your muscles? Awww, honey, you’re always losing things. Let me help. Why, HERE they are, dear.," she says happily, pointing proudly to her burgeoning biceps. "Looks like theyre’ MINE now!"

    Or.

    "What is it, Superman?"

    "I don’t know. I … suddenly feel so … weak."

    "Funny, I was just going to say … I’ve never felt better!" she replies, beginning to float into the air.

    And of course the strories I’ve done with Nomdreserv: Tennis, Give and Take and Matt ‘n Emma.

    Keep ’em coming.

    Mark

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