[Mark Newman]

Thanks for your comments.

I do have bits of Cindy’s parents here and there. The other parents are having their own problems with the changes, and you will see more about the adult world on Wednesday.

Tuesday is pretty much for the kids. It will be the longest chapter to date.

[Mark Newman]

Good story. That Monty is a clever character. I know I would have fallen for Suzette’s tempting blandishments (not to mention her other attractive attributes) in a heartbeat.

I’m just glad I haven’t ended up in THAT world. It’s certainly more fun to read about and write about than to live in!

Mark

[Mark Newman]

I have to think a bit about it, because I didn’t write a sequel and you are doing it. So, none of this should be taken as criticism or as implying that I’m not fully enjoying your version.

I probably would have more scenes showing the women outmuscling the guys, flaunting their strength and taunting the men for their loss of muscle.

Probably at least one scene taking place at the time of the beam up/beam down, so the transfer would be evident, and the mocking "ha-ha!" from the ladies.

There would have to be a conspiracy (doomed to fail of course and probably with unanticipated consequences that make it even worse for the guys) to try to kill the strength transfer machine.

I’d probably zoom in on some ongoing m/f relationships that pre-date the strength transfer, so one could see how the changes affected some people, destroying some, pleasing others and frightening a few more.

I really like your location of the story in Oz, so you can bring in the Euro uberbabes as well as the Ozzie Amazons. I’d probably include a few scenes in the depopulated and weakened America.

But those are just some random thoughts. Keep up with your version. I can’t wait to see where it goes. And feel free to use any or none of the above ideas.

[Mark Newman]

It’s a very enjoyable continuation of the story. Not the way I would have done it, but different minds definitely make the world go.

Can’t wait to see where this one ends up.

Mark

[Mark Newman]

"Hey bro’, looks like your aim on the muscle growth ray you wanted to show me was a little off."

[Mark Newman]

Just back from vacation. Very enjoyable. Thanks for contributing!

Mark

[Mark Newman]

I do enjoy the NEWNESS too. Going from ugly to beautiful, weak to strong, plain to sexy, flat to voluptuous and then enjoying the newfound power it brings you.

New love is like that. The moment you realize your feelings are reciprocated. When something new is possible with another person. A path opens up where none was before and you don’t know where it leads or where (or whether) it ends. I think the transformation excitement feeds from the same source.

Mark

[Mark Newman]

That’s what we want. Women who break the mould. Burst out of, to be honest.

[Mark Newman]

Love triumphs over the quest for power and the (ethically questionable) erotic thrill of dominating your boyfriend with his own strength. Here’s a woman we can trust.

Good reason too not to be an asshole.

[Mark Newman]

Oh you cheater! You’re the girl!

Well then, a question for you.

If you had the power to take your boyfriend’s strength for your own, would you use it? And if you used it, would you leave him or keep him? What would change?

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