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ParticipantInteresting, very interesting. I wonder what will happen now?
Thanks for continuing this story Ristard. Looking forward for the next part.
Max
January 18, 2006 at 5:08 am in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17912Max
ParticipantAnother fine chapter and indeed Florida made a great job finding at the true mother. I wondered why King Solomon didn't do something like that. đ
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ParticipantBeautiful… simply beautiful đ„
I don't have words to express how marvelous your ending was. It was a truly great epic story.
Thanks for sharing this story.
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Participant13' 4" !!!!! HOLY ….!!!! Please, tell me that there will me more.
Fantastic new chapter. I really like the battle scene with the army and very hot descriptions to show the sex scene with Stacy.
I bet that Kevin is a very happy man now.
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ParticipantInvasion
Idea of Greinskyn and Mr. Mergers
Written by MaxPart 2
As more and more women get cured, many men around the globe were getting worry about what will happen in our society. The most concerned ones were men that used their strength for living. For example, there was no doubt that women could be better construction workers than any man could have being, and even employers assured at their people that there wonât be any reduction of personal, the true was that they were more than ready to substitute at all for a smaller group of the new super women.
The rest of the men werenât too concern since instead of using raw strength, they lived by their skills and intellect. Still, they werenât too sure about their future, since the new women were so full of energy as they were of strength. They needed almost no sleep and that could make them in excellent workers that could stay in the office for longer hours.
In this environment at least men felt more secured since most of the big bosses were men, and they knew the thread that the new women could mean to their jobs. Images of stronger women slowly taking control over the most economical activities in the world frighten them.
Outside of the job realm, there were group of men that were really terrified about the change the women were suffering. All men that had abused of a woman in the past knew that this woman now had the power to get even, and more, to them. Some of these men went to the police and confess their crimes. They felt safer in prison that in their houses.
Also there were another group of men that was simple fascinated with the idea that every woman in the world will a muscled amazons with enough strength to accomplish a task that will required dozens of men. Some of they liked to imagine being overpowered by them while other imagined being loved by them. A world of fantasy made flesh.
But it didnât matter which group felt safe and which didnât, because at the end, women didnât do what men supposed they will do. Every woman that was cured, return to her normal life as nothing had changed. Most scientist were perplexed as women didnât seemed interested in change the roles they had before the disease hit them. That only prove once more that women thinking was really a complete unknown matter for men.
One thing that men certainly expected was that women will be furious and in a bad mood about one thing. Their clothes.
Teenage girls were happy to wear clothes designed for tall men, but at least they had something to chose from. The rest of the women were forced to wear the same metallic clothes the aliens gave them. If something women hate the most is that other women wear the same clothes they do.
In the meantime, the alien ambassador had being talking to the principal leaders of the world in order to build planetary defenses that will protect the Earth from the imminent invasion. At the ambassador didnât like the idea of sharing technology that will lead to the constructions of weapons of massive destruction, but she knew that this was a good chance to exterminate at the evil eating women race once for all.
The most powerful governments began to construction of several energy canons that will be able to destroy ships in the atmosphere of the Earth. Every leader promised at the ambassador the disabling of this weapons once the thread was extinguished.
Military women were in charge of building this great weapons to have them in time before the invasion. The ambassador assured that the invasion will start in a month after they arrived, since that was the time they calculate half of the female population will be dying and this evil race will have more food for them.
All the aliens ships were working without stop to have at the 100% of the females restore before the disease take their lives. Since they started operating two weeks ago, around 40% of the women were cured. The aliens double their efforts in order to cure at all women in time.
Around this time everything began to get normal again in Brianâs community as all the women were completely healed. The local mall registered the most successful sale day when the new clothes designed for women arrived. Finally the women in his town were able to wear clothes to show the benefits of the serum.
Tight and daring were the clothes the women bought since they have the body to showed them off. Mature women looked as fit and tight as they were in their youth while the young women were slim and well developed.
Even the alteration in the reality the men expected didnât happen, that didnât mean that there wasnât an alteration after all. That was what learned Brian one day when he went to the supermarket to buy the groceries her mother asked him to buy.
As he was following his list, making his purchases, he still had not found the 25 liter bottles for his home water fountain. After several trips around the super market, he discovered the water bottles displayed on the top shelf above the one and two liter bottles. âWhy,â he wondered, âdo they put the heaviest bottles on the top shelf?â
âBecause the employees are women and they canâ said a feminine voice.
Brian turned around an saw a girl that was 6â 1â tall that was no older than 12 years old. The girl stretched her long arms and grab the bottle. âBe careful!!â said Brias as for reflex, he tried to hold the water bottle since it will be too heavy for the girl.
The girl smiled at him as she perfectly handled the water bottle over Brian. âThank you for caring, but there isnât any problem. This container is a light as a feather to meâ said the girl and to emphasize her point she lifted the bottle up and down. As she did that, he noticed that the girl seemed to have non-existing muscles. And in the case she have them, they were completely relaxed since her arms didnât bulge. âHow strong is she?â wondered Brian.
âMaybe you should ask at you mother to buy the things for youâ said the girl placing gently the bottle in Brianâs cart. âItâs a different world nowâ she said shrugging her shoulders.
Brian thanked the help of the girl, even he was pissed by her comment. âIf only things would be in the places they should beâ he muttered as he made his way to the registration.
When Brian was paying the groceries, the cashier who was a friend of Darlene saw the amount of items he was buying. âBrian. These things are too heavy for you to carry alone. You should ask at Melanie to come with you, so she could take the bags to the carâ.
âI can perfectly manage these packages. Thank youâ said Brian upset as he put the bags back in the cart to take them to his car.
As he was pushing the cart, Brian couldnât avoid thinking the advices he had received. Since his mother and sister were cured, they had increased their appetite and they eat incredible amounts of food at the day. The list of his mother included several new presentation of food that were packaged to satisfy those needs. So Brian was really buying heavy things.
The idea of asking at her mother help with groceries wasnât that bad, but he really want to show that he was able to take care of his family as his father will like to be. The idea of asking at Melanie help was truly out of place. How he can faced at his friends if his little sister help him to carry the bags. He will be humiliated. Then, he thought that the situation he was passing through wasnât only his condition. All of his friends were passing for the same thing. He then remembered what his friends told him about that some of them were a bit afraid of how powerful their girlfriends had become.
Even his friends envied Brian because Amanda hadnât change and he was able to continue a normal relationship with her, he couldnât avoid thinking how will be to have sex with one of those super women. That was why Brian really want to have a dose of the serum for Amanda. He really couldnât wait to see her with such power.
He was thinking this when he saw at his friend Jenny parking her car and blocking the exit of his own. She was another female that was cured by the aliens. Before the disease she was 5â5â very cute and saggy B-cup chest. Now, she was 6â 10â, extremely hot and with a defying gravity D-cup chest.
Instead of enjoying how much Jenny had changed, Brian found himself very angered due her action. âHey Jenny!! How I am supposed to take out my car if you leave your car there?â he complained.
âDo you come here driving?â she said shocked. âIâm so sorry Brian. When I saw your car, I though that Darlene came here drivingâ apologized Jenny.
âAnd how the fact that my mother came here will solve the problem about your car blocking the exitâ said Brian very exasperated.
Jenny just smiled. âYou are so cute. Still thinking that âthisâ is a problemâ.
She stood at the side of his car and bending her body, she grabbed the car from below and gently she lifted it over her head. Brian simply stood there, with his jaw on the floor, at the unbelievable display of strength that Jenny was doing.
Her muscles were bulging from the weight she was lifting, but her face didnât show any trace of effort. Jenny walked outside the parking space and put his car down. She did it so easy that even the alarm didnât sound.
Then she lifted her car putting it in the parking slot. âHere. The âproblemâ is solvedâ she said blinking him an eye.
If Brian didnât had a hard on before, he really sported one very visible now.
âAh! Donât forget that if someday you get tired of your weak girlfriend, I will like to show you what a real woman can doâ she grinned bulging her muscles which erupted out of her arm.
Brian almost passed out.
To be continued…
Max
ParticipantGreat new part. I really the balance you are giving at the story as you show at Angela wanting to use her strength to accomplish what her desire wants, but she keep herself in control. Very nice.
I can't wait to see what she will look with the upgrade.
Max
January 8, 2006 at 5:33 pm in reply to: Florida Crane And The Temple Of The Amazons (Complete!) #17902Max
ParticipantExcellent new part Fonk. I really like that you show up the sexy side that Florida have. It was amazing the way you describe her woman beauty as well as her extraordinary strength and muscles. Well done. đ
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Participantshe gave Deni a double dose
Indeed, yes. I must say that I was intrigued by that. Why Martha gave a double dose at Deni when only one as enought? My guess is that Martha must know the behavior of the person which she trust her serum. Deni suddenly change in mood was due a rush power, just as it happened to Jennifer. Besides that, Deni should be a nice person just as Jennifer is.
I hope Martha will continue seeking for a man that love her, understand her work and most of all, that doesn't have a change in attitude as the other men in her life once they get too powerful.
Thanks a lot for such fun story. It was very good.
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ParticipantGlad to know that people is enjoying the story and thanks a lot at all the people that are leaving their comments and feedback. I really appreciate it.
I must say that indeed, she-hulk inspired a the look of the females in this story (their new bodies and strength reflect that). So don't be surprised if the cure is a dose of gamma radiation. Just kidding đ
Besides, why people think the aliens are bad? They can't truly come in peace? Well, I think that only time will say of the aliens are good or bad.
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ParticipantGreat story. I only feel bad for Martha since being that old and can't have a lover. Well, if number 500 wasn't the one, maybe the 1000th will be đ
The ending was unspected and brillant. It's nice to see that she does good with the money and care of poor people. But I guess that she must be careful about at which person she gives the serum. Otherwise, this supergirls can kill at some people in a rage attack.
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